on May 5, 2012
Since I read EVERYTHING free that I can get my hands on, I post reviews regarding books from all different genres & age groups. I'm 37 & I enjoyed this! It doesn't have any slow spots in it, flows along nicely & kept my interest. I don't like "To be continued..." stories but I AM looking forward to finding out what comes next.
on August 25, 2012
I read the rave reviews and looked forward to reading it myself. The story was interesting and I may even read the next one in the series. But it did not feel like a professionally written literary work--more like a rough draft. It wasn't just the many, many typos but there were flaws in some of the story lines. For example, Charlie and Evan escape in a hurry leaving her laptop behind and the criminals use it to track where Charlie and Evan are going. Yet a couple of chapters later, the story states that Charlie shut her laptop after using it. What?!? Not gross, horrible flaws just annoying and distracting.