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A Copper Scroll of Lost Opportunity, October 26, 2007
This review is from: The 13th Apostle (Mass Market Paperback)
Richard and Rachael Hiller (2007), The 13th Apostle, New York: HarperCollins Publishers.
Among the most sacred of texts it is written:
In each generation there are born thirty-six
righteous souls who by their very existence,
assure the continuation of the world.
According to Abraham's Covenant, once each
millennium, God shall return to earth and count
among the many, those who remain righteous.
Were it not for these tzaddikim, the righteous ones,
who stand in God's judgment, mankind's fate would
be grave and certain peril.
These traddikim have no knowledge of each other,
Neither have they an understanding of their own
singular importance. As innocents, they remain
unaware of the critical consequences of their
thoughts, their faith, and their deeds,
Save for one.
To this tzaddik alone is granted knowledge
of his position, for to him is trusted the
most sacred of tasks.
I have always enjoyed reading conspiracy thrillers especially those involving religious antiquity. That is why I enjoyed the Da Vinci Code enormously and also the Indiana Jones movies and novels (yes, there are novels). This book promises two premises; one, the legend/tradition of the worthy tzaddikim, and two, the story of the thirteenth apostle. Unfortunately the authors were not able to bring these two interesting ideas into play effectively to hammer out a good religious conspiracy thriller. The story telling was choppy with too much detail given to the scroll. It also suffers by imitating the writing style of the Da Vinci Code. The character development was poorly done. For example Gil, the leading male character is at times very intelligent and at other times to be incredibly stupid. It was a fair attempt for a first novel. My rating for this book is one star.
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17 of 19 people found the following review helpful:
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Laughable, August 16, 2007
This review is from: The 13th Apostle (Mass Market Paperback)
I forced myself to go on reading until Sabbie gave the translation of that copper scroll, and that was how far I could put up with this lame thriller. What has been painstakingly written on an ancient copper scroll reads like a bad modern narrative, lengthy and full of superfluous details, absolutely unbelievable for an ancient document intended to impart such important knowledge. And can you believe that an ancient scroll had this opening line: "Thirty-three years before the Cruxification, Southwest of Jerusalem, main route to Hebron and Egypt"? Does it sound any different from the opening line in Chapter 1 of the thriller itself: "Present day, Day One, early evening, the New York City Grille"? I feel cheated, but I should have noticed that the authors are diet book authors!
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9 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
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Got to chapter 47 and quit., August 17, 2007
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One of the worst books I've ever read. The dialog between the characters was boring and the plot was suspect. I rarely throw a book away, but I couldn't take it anymore. Save your money and do NOT buy this book.
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