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128 of 140 people found the following review helpful
on July 18, 2011
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This is a real review by a real reader (if you are interested in why I wrote that, see comment at bottom).

While the initial plot developments stretch the imagination, once the book gets going the action is fast and enjoyable. There is a small amount of character development, enough to stop the characters from becoming cartoon characters, and a satisfying ending (requiring of course, a normal suspension of disbelief).

Good beach or travel read. You probably wouldn't remember the book in a few months, but it's priced right and it slides down well.

[It is too bad either the Author felt he had to hype the book with reviews of questionable origins, or that six of his close friends decided to review all of his 4 thrillers books, each one reviewing all 4 of their reviews on one day: bo on 4/28, th on 4/29, lo on 5/3, tb on 5/5, rh on 5/26, So on 6/7.]
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62 of 66 people found the following review helpful
on February 24, 2012
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I was disappointed in this book. It was so poorly edited. There were typos all over the place and I found them to be very distracting. Hopefully, the print version wasn't as bad. The inconsistencies were too noticeable to ignore and the protagonist made too many errors in judgement to be believable. 72 Hours: A Thriller
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72 of 79 people found the following review helpful
VINE VOICEon March 10, 2012
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This is the first book I've read by this author and I can only say I hope his other books are better. One of the main characters, Lindsay, is possibly the dumbest character I've come across. I had zero sympathy for her. Her kids weren't much better, but at least they weren't constantly SCREAMING at everything. She put the lives of everyone around her in danger by inexplicably ignoring orders from the people trying to protect her. Her character was flat, shallow and stupid.

I have a question for the author though - why so many planet references for the names of these people? Thomas MERCURY? Kenneth MARS? Mr. JUPITER? I half expected for them to only drive Saturns with the theme from "The Jetsons blasting from the radio.

The other characters in the book (Kline, Sperry, Zero, etc) just popped in randomly without any explanation and then were killed off when he didn't know what to do with them. There were too many unbelievable "shoot 'em up" scenes.

This book is in some dire need of editing. I found several misspelled words, poor sentence structure, words used improperly and a lot of random awkward descriptions. The most annoying part is that for the entire book, the goal was to find a dead woman and her child. That was the driving force in the FBI agents (Kline) life. The killer refused to tell where he left the bodies. He would only give vague answers and constantly tell everyone that the bodies were in a place no-one would EVER think to look, somewhere so UNUSUAL, etc etc etc. Then ::SPOILER ALERT:: the woman and child are found BUT IT NEVER SAYS WHERE!!!! Where was this magical, secret spot that the entire force of the FBI couldn't find? Why on earth was this tidbit left un-answered?!

I hated the ending. Hated it.

That said - if you're looking for something mildly entertaining to read at the beach or on the plane, this book will work. There were some exciting scenes and the plot was unique. I know this review is all over the place and makes no sense, but I felt that was fitting since the book was the same way.
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27 of 29 people found the following review helpful
on July 1, 2012
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I realize this is a work of fiction and therefore some leeway must be given. However, literary license only goes so far. From the very beginning everything that this author wrote was impossible to happen. For instance, no prison system would ever allow a death row inmate to go on live television, for any reason.
No one can profit from a crime and therefore the bounty would have been impossible to collect upon.
Trained commandoes that cannot shoot straight.
A bunker built to withstand an atomic bomb is almost completely destroyed by two grenades.
An assassin doesn't bother to make sure her mark is dead when she kills everyone else that gets in her way.
No prison system or law enforcement officer would ever allow a death row inmate to leave prison on the flimsy excuse of finding two dead bodies.
In short this was on awful book. Don't waste time or money on this.
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23 of 24 people found the following review helpful
on July 14, 2011
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Absolutely fantastic read, didn't want to put it down. Easily written so you could visualize everything. The only let down was the high number of spelling and grammatical errors which was quite distracting. Not sure if the bad editing is purely a Kindle edition issue but this should be looked into.
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23 of 26 people found the following review helpful
on June 28, 2012
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I rarely ever stop reading a book until it is completed, but this was the dumbest attempt at a thriller I have read in awhile. The author tries to make Mercury this super Rambo type, yet he makes ignorant rookie mistakes that someone with his background would never make. The thought that the FBI would let a death row inmate go on live tv to make a statement was unbelievable.
If you are used to reading great thrillers like Lee Child, Michael Connelly or Harlan Coban, you will be sorely disappointed in this book! So glad I received it for free!
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27 of 32 people found the following review helpful
on October 14, 2011
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Terrible story. I almost quit reading it because the story became too outrageous. If you like the protagonist to be a competent believable person, don't waste your time. If the "hero" is this one was the best the FBI could come up with to protect a woman and her children, then the country would be in real trouble. Mercury is such a dumbo he leaves dozen's of dead bodies in his wake (not to mention two of his friends. FBI special agent Kline, should have taken Dunbar's place in the execution chamber.
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15 of 17 people found the following review helpful
on July 6, 2012
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I downloaded this book when it was free strictly because Santa Cruz is where I was born and raised, so I have fond memories of it. I thought that much more of the story would take place there since it was mentioned so specifically, but that isnt what happened

**************************SPOILER ALERT***************************************************

A man on death row (with three days to his execution) states if he can have 5 minutes of airtime he will reveal the location of the bodies of his victims. When he goes on-air he puts a hit out on his sister in law for 500 million dollars if she is dead before him. So of course a TON of people are after her.

then a shock-jock finds out where she lives and it is broadcast over the airwaves.

Then a photographer follows her after she and ehr 2 kids escape their house and flee, and THAT location is broadcase over the airwaves (all this info is constantly being broadcast over several hours)

So the FBI goes and picks up the dude from Santa Cruz and drops him near where they are hiding.

WTF???!?!?!?! The FBI is unable to hide 3 people for 3 days? And will let a sadistic murderer have 5 minutes of televised airtime live? AND no one could stop the shock-jock??? I understand freedom of the press, but I have trouble believing that would be allowed because it was basically assisting murder.

I got a little less than halfway through and had to stop because it was so incredibly unbelieveable.

Dont waste your time or especially your money
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8 of 8 people found the following review helpful
on November 30, 2012
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I can't believe this author has six novels and some of them even on print. Maybe this was his first and has improved since. I'm not going to risk buying another one, though.

*** SPOILER ALERT ***

There is absolutely no character development. The few characters the author thought needed a bit of attention are flat and inconsistent and the only description whatsoever is a couple of cliches. You have the radio disc jock that you could say is Howard Stern (down to the choice of t-shirt) if not for the name change . An asian girl killer clad in leather and riding a motorcycle. The tough FBI agent, turn civilian, ala Jack Reaper (but without the pizazz), the corrupt lawyer, the unscrupulous colombian mafioso, the ambitious governor, the sleazy paparazzi. And these are the important ones, then you have a string of names that are thrown in with no purpose nor importance.

The narrative is terrible. At first is half decent but as the story progresses it worsens more and more. This is one of my favorite paragraphs:

"He could wait for #2 to round the bend and go for a head shot with the Beretta, hope for a quick kill and then try his luck with #1.But if he missed, or couldn't manage a fatal shot, he'd really be boxed in. Besides, he'd already given consideration to dealing with #1, and hadn't liked the odds.
No, he needed to take out #2 as silently as possible. Needed to strike quickly and efficiently and exit the canyon. Let #1 keep on walking."

Notice the smart way numbers are used to describe the foes. Poetry in action.

Add to this the myriad of typos and grammatical errors that you find from beginning to end. English is only my second language (and I'm not proficient on it even for a second language) but even I found all the errors distracting. Not that there weren't many other problems to get distracted with.

Now, about the plot. This is where Mr. Casey hits the jackpot. In this you can definitely say he is an original because nothing, absolutely nothing, that happens in this story makes any sense whatsoever. In this aspect he was methodically consistent. First, you have a common crime being investigated by the FBI (a passion crime were a guy kills his daughter, wife and her lover). Why? Who knows. The author doesn't bother to explain why the FBI would be involved in such a thing. Then, the killer, who knows is going to be apprehended and charged, takes the time to stash all his fortune ($500 million) in offshore accounts but doesn't consider fleeing but, now that he is in death row, comes up with the perfect plan to escape:

First, he gets the FBI to allow him to talk on national TV (in exchange for the location of the bodies of his victims that remain unknown) and offers a bounty of 500 million to whoever kills his sister in law. Smart guys those FBI agents. This unleashes a wave of violence because every thug and criminal wants to collect. The bounty is for her head, nor her family, so the first thing she does, very smartly, is grab her kids and flee with them. No sense in letting the father take care of them and keep them from harm's way. Now, the location of the sister in law is being updated constantly on a radio talk show so if you are a killer, and want to know were to go, all you have to do is listen to Mr Howard Stern wannabe. This only applies to the killers, though, because neither the police nor the FBI ever get a hint of this and are always trailing the bad guys (I guess that radio station transmits on a wave length not authorized for official listening). This would also explain why no one can shut down a radio host who is helping and abetting in the commission of a crime.

There is also the paparazzi. This guy has been able to locate the sister in law and, paparazzi that he is, the first thing he does is call the radio station and keep them informed of her every move. After all, that's the motto of every paparazzi, "if you have the opportunity of taking exclusive pictures of someone important, disclose the location, so everybody can also get pictures". Luckily for our friend, it seems other paparazzi are excluded from this radio broadcast (as is the case with the FBI and police)since no other reporter ever shows on the scene. The FBI, humble that they are, recognize at first hand that they are unable to protect the girl and decides the only solution is to call back an ex agent, previously canned from the service, who is guaranteed to be able to do, by himself, what the entire department of the FBI and the police are incapable of doing. Supposedly this whole bounty thing is just a distraction to keep the FBI busy while the killer can escape but at no point during the story there is any involvement from the police or the FBI.

All this I described above happens by chapter ten or so and you can just imagine how bad can it get in the remaining 100 chapters.

There is even a lame attempt to romance thrown in at the end of the story. After all, you can't have the girl not falling in love with the hero.

I could go on and on over the multiple problems this story has but, basically, I would be copying verbatim the entire novel.

My recommendation: if you have the opportunity to read this book, let it pass.
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful
on July 16, 2012
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Just silly. Had some potential, but never lived up to it. No character development, implausible behavior. Who leaves their kids alone in a hotel room while they're being chased by killers? Can't believe I bothered to finish it.
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