First thing's first. This is a short story. So if you look at the $2.99 price, be aware. Personally, I think it's a little bit steep, but that's just me.
This was a decent short, in of itself, and I'd probably give it three out of five stars. The premise is original and the story is captivating but as a short, there wasn't enough time to develop much of anything. The main character, Hank is a "medicine man" or doctor in a time when practicing medicine is illegal and he's fearful of being discovered and he's afraid of his own children, but the story never expounds on that little tidbit. *Spoilers* Gina is a telepath. Okay. We're post WWIII here and I get it that the medical profession has been disgraced, but where the hell do telepaths come from? Once again, it's a short, so this is never explained.
I know. I have no room to talk. Anyone that's read my stuff is probably saying, "Really, Cait? Pot, meet Kettle." But still, I'm only frustrated because I feel like this is a story that I want to know more about. I want to know what happened to this world to make doctors obsolete and turn people toward mysticism instead of modern medicine to heal. I want to know about WWIII and how telepaths came to be. I want to know how a man becomes afraid of his own children. Because of this, I'm frustrated. So, on the one hand, Kubicek did a good job pulling me into a story, intriguing me, and making me want more, but then didn't provide it. Maybe if I knew that this was a prequel of a bigger novel I'd feel better, but it isn't as far as I know.