2 of 2 people found the following review helpful
on December 29, 2011
This little short story makes you think about what you'd be willing to do to help a friend in need. Well-written, but the formatting is all off - parentheses appear in place of apostrophes, paragraphs aren't indented and spacing is off in some locations.
Addendum: Formatting errors should be fixed now, according to the author.
on April 1, 2012
Derrick's dysfunctional story should have made you sympathize with him. But strangely, you didn't. He came across as a cold and heartless creature, even more so for what he asked his "friend" to do.
The story wasn't fleshed out enough. It could have been a touching tribute to friendship. What a lost opportunity!