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I clearly see young Mel walking up a very narrow, busy street in Rome holding his mothers hand. Suddenly she wasnt there. Amazed, he let himself be carried along by the crowd, or ran forward to find her, or back, confused and terrified. He was standing at the bottom of some stairs when a great figure came flying down and landed on him. It was a woman with white eyes, not old or young, clutching a walking stick in her hand. She apologized and raised her weight off him, at the same time shielding him from being trampled, but this didnt calm his fear. Quickly, gently, she ran her fingertips over his face and body. Her name was Nolia.
"Whats your name, child?"she asked.
"M-Mel."
"Do you see your mother, Mel?" Then someone lifted Nolia to her feet and together she and little Mel moved close to a wall, out of the way. "Is anyone looking for a child named Mel?" she called in her thin voice.
"Is anyone looking for Mel?" Mel strained to hear his mothers call, seeking her in the thousands of feet, legs, and yards of linen hurrying by. He looked up, expecting to see her familiar face and her arms frantically waving at him. Nolia called and listened for an answering voice, but all she heard were the cries of hawkers and peddlers. Straining to see Mels mothers face, she saw only darkness. She gripped his hand, as if hoping by this tight connection to see the lost one through his bright young eyes. At last Nolia said, "Come, Mel. Well wait for your mother at home."
With the childs hand in hers, she tapped and felt her way back up the street until she came to a familiar door located between a locksmith shop and a tavern. Pushing it open, she led him down a corridor that opened onto a courtyard with shrines and a small fountain, then into a large room in back.
I still recall that populated tenement, a building seven stories high that overarched the narrow street to another tenement on the other side, for it was there I lived the next several years. What had happened to my mother? I never found out, but it wasnt uncommon in those narrow streets for something to fall or be thrown from a window and hit a person walking below. Of one thing I was certain: my mother would not have abandoned her Mel had she been alive.
The room we entered that day was a communal dwelling with straw mattresses on the floor and a grill where sausages were roasting. The five women who lived there all freed household slaves like Nolia herself were busy at different tasks, spinning and weaving flax, grinding grain, and sewing.
"Wheres my mama?" I demanded, looking around frantically.
"Your mama will come tomorrow," Nolia promised, "and your dada too."
"My dada wont come," I told her. "He wont come." I remember looking hard at Nolias face, hoping that when she opened her mouth shed correct me, that shed tell me my dada would come.
Her mouth opened. "Of course hell come," she assured me. "Hell come tomorrow."
"Hes dead," I said, watching her face. "He died when I was small." If only shed contradict me one more time.
Again her mouth opened. Inhaling deeply, she let out a sigh. "Ah." Ah? Ah? I felt my whole life hanging on that Ah. Maybe she was about to say, Ah, of course your father isnt dead; hell be here tomorrow. I waited breathlessly to hear her say it, but she didnt.
Its strange how sometimes Ill remember a conversation that took place many years ago only because the other person said or did something that seemed inappropriate or incomprehensible at the time. My memorys a great storehouse of these non sequiturs that over time are one by one ex-plained, but never forgotten. Much of what was said that day will remain with me for the rest of my life.
"Claudia," she called, "come help me with Mel."
A robust woman hurried over. "Im here."
"Mel, this is Claudia. Claudia, this is Mel. Claudia, give Mel some sausage. Go, Mel, go with Claudia."
Claudia led me to the grill and offered me a sausage that had cooled. "Here, child."
I shook my head. "We dont eat sausage. We dont eat pork." --This text refers to the Hardcover edition.
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I was a little apprehensive at first, afraid that there might be a religious or moralistic agenda behind it, but there's none of that. Instead, we're treated to a fast-moving romp through one of the most utterly significant periods of man's history. Our "hero" seems to find himself cast by fate into virtually every important event of the time, hobnobbing with movers and shakers both historic and religious. One could even study history here! And what a fun way to do so, since the tale is told with a twinkle in the eye. A great read!
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I'm afraid that I cannot recommend this book very highly. While the author has, evidently, led an interesting and adventurous life herself, her book leaves much to be desired in plot, characterization, prose style, and...well, interest. I have nothing against books published by "vanity presses," as this one is; the big publishers have often ignored great--or at least absorbing--manuscripts of books that later became best-sellers, and in a few well-known cases, popular classics. But I don't think that's the case here. When "Pagan Jew" first appeared on amazon's web site shortly after the book's initial publication several years ago, there were two reviews that slammed the novel--harshly and without flinching, giving specific criticism, supported with references to the text of the novel and, I thought, intelligent comments on its overall quality. Those reviews were painful even for me to read; but having read the book myself, I had to agree with them; they weren't cruel: they were accurate and truthful. For some reason, those informative, incisive reviews have been deleted from the book's review history, and all we have now are two five-star pieces from people who love the book and have nothing to say beyond that it's great. If I were the author, I'd be embarrassed by such fluff pieces. Every new parent loves the new baby; every author hates anyone who isn't enthralled with the first novel or short story that gets into print. But a good writer listens to, and hears, the criticisms--doesn't necessarily obey them--thinks, and then writes better the next time, recognizing that the thoughtful critics, at least, might have a point. This author might take that advice to heart. She undoubtedly has many interesting stories to share with readers, and a gift for writing. I look forward to buying and reading her next book, when she's had time to think this over.
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I really enjoyed this book - an "eye-witness account" of life in the Roman Empire. What a great idea and what a great story! There's something here for everyone--Jews, Christians, pagans and atheists.Galen makes her historical and biblical figures into regular people who speak contemporary dialogue. This is funny and really brings home that people have been pretty much the same through the ages. I loved Pontius Pilate (and i'm Catholic!) I even loved Caligula and the crocodile. The book is just so entertaining. Galen has done a terrific job.
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