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'Adelaide, Adelaide, ever lovin' Adelaide...', January 31, 2008
April Hamilton bursts onto the scene with a sparkling little excerpt for the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award contest with Chapter One of ADELAIDE EPSTEIN, and if character development has as much to do with the judging as it should, this entry should be a winner. Hamilton has apparently written a 'comic fiction' and in the best sense of that term this opener tests the reader's ability to judge between what is comedy and what is daily dull routine in the life of a housewife. When the author can induce laughs from introspective observations rather that pratfalls, then the reader can be assured that the story will develop well.
Adelaide is a housewife who gave up finishing college to get married and raise two children and who now faces the void of 'family out of the house' syndrome and tries to fill that sense of lack of purpose and importance by volunteering at the local hospital: she is assigned the 'bedpan brigade' type chores that are below the nurses and is repeatedly making judgment errors as well as committing faux pas situations that lead to her being fired - try being fired from a volunteer job! Depressed with her life and her station she leaves her volunteer blunder job and returns home to soak in a tub, trying to forget that she is a forty-six year old woman with excessive body tissue. While relaxing in her perfumed yet depressing tub, in pops her daughter unexpectedly, accompanied with her boyfriend - the two obviously planning an afternoon's 'diversion' in the empty house. How Adelaide is confronted by the nude couple in the bathroom and what transpires among the three is hilarious (and touching), and when she tries to share her life problems with her best friend Gywnnie (gorgeous, free spirited etc), she discovers that her husband is in flagrante in Gywnnie's bed. And the wheels start to spin on in this page-turner novel.
No doubt there are more beautifully drawn characters that will populate the following pages. Hamilton has a real gift for drawing credible people who have equal potential for being hilarious and tragic. She makes what some would find as an ordinary day into something that leaps into the extraordinary. Can't wait to see how Adelaide et al are worked out here! Grady Harp, January 08
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10 of 10 people found the following review helpful:
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Bad day for Addie..., January 15, 2008
I thoroughly enjoyed this. The characters are believable and engaging, one wants to find out what happens next, and best of all the author has a great sense of humour.
The bath scene made me laugh out loud several times. (I'd say there was a tad too much description of the bath products to start with). Poor Addie, in her consolatory bath, when the front door goes - isn't this always the way - then things get rapidly much worse. And Addie's choices of how to react are spot on. I did think the daughter would have been alerted the moment she opened the bathroom door by the scented steam, but this is a minor cavil.
The relationship Addie has with Patty is so authentic. The bit where Patty is defending her right to make her own decisions, then exchanges glances with her mother as Todd makes his feeble excuse is so true to life. Surely all mothers of teenagers have been there. It feels real.
The surprise development with Bob - well - it surprised me! I felt the author has plenty of interesting plot developments up her sleeve.
The prose is good, with nice observation; for instance, `that slightly condescending tone so typical of younger people who occupy positions of authority over the middle-aged'. Occasionally, you tell things that might be better shown; for instance, `In reality, both women had an idealized view of the other's life and each daydreamed about what it must be like to be the other from time to time.' This is both `tell' and authorial intrusion, and perhaps the information could be better conveyed through the women's dialogue.
An assured, easy and engaging read. Well done.
Lexi
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11 of 12 people found the following review helpful:
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A delightful caterpillar to butterfly story., February 23, 2008
This is the story of Adelaide (Addie), a middle aged woman who is living her dream. Addie's a stay-at-home mom, 2 kids, successful husband, house in the 'burbs, who does charitable volunteer work and hosts a lady's sewing circle. What could be more wonderful? But if she's living her idyllic girlhood dream, why it it so unsatisfying? Perhaps the fact that her son is a delinquent, her daughter thinks she's a dinosaur, her husband is a patronizing jerk, and she just got fired from her volunteer work has something to do with it. And the lady's sewing circle friends, well they're a whole 'nother can of worms.
The story traces Addie's path to growth and redemption. I don't want to say more and give away the plot, but the story is smart, funny and poignant.
This is the second book I've read by April L. Hamilton. There's something about her writing style that I find deeply engaging. With other works of fiction I feel like a voyeur, like I'm peering through a window observing someone else's life at a distance. With Ms. Hamilton's first book Snowball, and again with Adelaide Einstein, it's as if I'm in the room, inside the character's skin, seeing her world through her eyes and actually living her experience.
This is the sort of book that I didn't want to put down because I wanted to know how it ended, and was sad when it ended because I wanted it to go on forever.
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