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Adventure Land: The Strike of Lightning

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Let me open by saying that I am well aware the author was 13 when he wrote this novel. That being said, that does not change the fact that it is now a published book available for sale on Amazon... and therefore should be held to the same standards as any other novel. That in mind... this book is terrible. From the first paragraph alone, it is clear that this novel is going to be filled with superfluous description that serves no end... other than for the author to show off what he believes to be his astounding talents. You will be subjected to lines such as "Bear wasn't your ordinary, run-of-the-mill bear," and "The beast was trying to impale the small kitten." And let's not forget this witty dialogue: "'Easy little one. You're all right now. A gray cat with black stripes, huh. Where are you from, I wonder? Can you talk? Cat got your tongue?'" Really, now? The prose is laughable, characterization shoddy and the plot is treading old water. If you're honestly considering buying this I invite you to read the plot summary and try your best not to laugh. If this review seemed harsh, that was not the intent, it's just that this new trend of publishing young author's work is quite annoying... while they may be talented for their age, that does not mean they are capable of producing anything that anyone wants to read! Maybe as the years go by and they've gained some insight into the workings of our world they'll be able to produce something of literary value. But this... this is nothing but the aimless rambling of thirteen year-olds everywhere.

This book has the big screen written all over it. It's destined to become an action/adventure classic!

This book is horrible. It is even worse than the writing of Stephenie Meyer. I burned it in my fire pit after reading the first chapter. The author shows little creativity and possesses absolutely no literary ability's, unless the ability to write a bad book counts. If your considering buying this book, consider this: the only good reviews, are reviews of the author's family.

I can't wait to see this book made into a movie! It was so good, that I could not put it down. I loved it! It is a well written, exciting take on the old theme of good vs. evil. The good guys are heroic, smart, and witty. The bad guys are so bad, that they make you hate them - and that makes the book better, in my opinion! THe best thing to say is that the story is good. I was truly entertained. I look forward to book two.

Oh my gosh, this book is amazing. I feel like I'm part of the story. Asher, you inspired me so much. You have a special gift in writing. It was so cool meeting you in Hollywood. Hope to see you soon. Keep on writing, you're good at it.
-Katie

This is the worst book I have ever read. It seems to be based on the Narnia tales with just the characters changed. If you are going to write a book why not write one that is unique and dont steal ideas from other books. This book was the biggest waste of my time and money.