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Affinity Trap (Structure Trilogy 1) [Paperback]

Martin Sketchley (Author)
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Structure Trilogy 1 March 7, 2005
Vourniass Lycern -- a conosq of the three-sex Seriattic race -- holds the key to peace between Earth and Seriatt, and thus the continuation of the lucrative illegal arms trade conducted by General William Myson. When Lycern decamps to the Affinity Group complex on Veshc, Myson orders experienced Military Intelligence Officer Alexander Delgado to fetch her. While once respected, the changes that followed Myson's rise to power saw Delgado's position reduced in all but name, his independent character and methodologies unwelcome. But Delgado, sees the mission not as a chance to reinstate his name to the position of respect it once held, but an opportunity to engender a much greater level of change. When he comes into contact with Lycern, however, Delgado faces his greatest ever challenge, the consequences of which have the ability to change his life -- and potentially the future of Earth -- forever. In the first of the Structure novels, Martin Sketchley has created a vivid widescreen setting in which the boundaries between good and evil, male and female, human and non-human are often indistinguishable despite the wishes and perceptions of the startling characters he has created. Sexuality, gender roles, and the fundamental drives of every human being are explored within a gripping dynamic storyline that highlights the contrast between what humans perceive themselves to be, and what they really are.

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Part postapocalyptic space opera and part male power fantasy, British author Sketchley's debut boasts a striking cover: a beautiful bare-bellied female brandishing a futuristic gun beside a muscle-bound male in a torn uniform hefting a much bigger gun. Former military intelligence officer Alexander Delgado has little respect for his ruthless commander, Gen. William Myson, whose Structure government rules 24th-century Earth. While illegally selling advanced technology to the alien Sinz, Myson forged an alliance with the triple-gendered Seriatt by fathering a child with "conosq" Vourniass Lycern, assigned child bearer to the Seriattic Royal Household. After Lycern runs away to the planet Veshc, home of the cultlike Affinity Group, Myson orders Delgado to retrieve her. Murdering his way to Lycern's side, Delgado finds her "undoubtedly the most enigmatic, mysterious creature he had ever encountered." After sex, however, he discovers he's infected with Lycern's pheromones and thus bound to her emotionally and physically. Sketchley's solid writing drives this plot-based story, but a lack of detailed world-building keeps it grounded to its '70s action-adventure foundations.
Copyright © Reed Business Information, a division of Reed Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved. --This text refers to an alternate Paperback edition.

About the Author

Martin Sketchley was born in Staffordshire and has been writing all his life. Having worked in retail and then catalogue publishing, he is now a freelance writer and editor. He lives in Birmingham with his wife and two children. THE AFFINITY TRAP is his first novel. --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.

Product Details

  • Paperback: 336 pages
  • Publisher: Simon & Schuster (March 7, 2005)
  • Language: English
  • ISBN-10: 0743468481
  • ISBN-13: 978-0743468480
  • Product Dimensions: 4.4 x 7 x 1.3 inches
  • Shipping Weight: 7.8 ounces
  • Average Customer Review: 3.0 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (3 customer reviews)

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I grew up in Tamworth, an average market town in the English county of Staffordshire -- home to Sir Robert Peel, founder of the police force, and a castle that was once home to the King of Mercia. I am a descendant of Sir Thomas Guy, although this has never seemed to impress anybody very much. I went to Greenacres County Primary School until the age of 11. Sometimes at school I was given the opportunity to write a story; I always wrote science fiction.

In 1979 I began to attend Rawlett High School, and opportunities to write stories became less frequent. When in one class the opportunity did arise, I, of course, wrote science fiction. However, the teacher who marked the story changed every entry of "ship" to "rocket". This irritated me no end.

For a few years at Rawlett I took flute lessons, and played in the school orchestra. I quickly discovered, however, that the flute isn't exactly the coolest instrument in the world, and cursed at the fact that saxophone lessons were not available. The upside to being in second flutes, however, was that all the other flute players were female, which offered countless opportunities for me to make a fool of myself. In the end I gave up the flute lessons, as I seemed to be about as successful at that as I was with the girls.

At 14 I began to write my first novel, and produced four sides of A4 at a single sitting -- more than I'd ever written before. However, I was teased left, right and centre, and page five was consigned to the bin.

I left Rawlett at the age of 16 with no qualifications to speak of -- although I had been noted for trying particularly hard during badminton lessons -- and began working with my parents as a market trader. This was fun, even though the hours were long and it was cold during the winter, hot during the summer and windy and rainy the rest of the time.

In the late 1980s I had another brief but passionate encounter with music, this time playing guitar with indie band Emma Gibbs Loves Badges. I discovered that a Gibson 335 is a much cooler instrument than a flute, and it was during this period that I met the women who would become my wife. However, the rest of the band didn't seem to share my belief in our potential -- which I still hold to this day -- and in frustration I one day left the damp rehearsal room at Mr Cutler's scrapyard never to return.

Not long after this unfortunate separation, I began writing. Unlike being in a band writing is a solitary activity, and I recognised that I alone was responsible for my success or failure. I wrote short stories behind market stalls, and began submitting them to magazines.

By 1994, having got a few writing credits under my belt, I felt I'd achieved all I wanted to achieve as far as short stories were concerned, and considered that if I wanted to be a novelist I'd have to write some novels. (Makes sense when you think about it, doesn't it.) Without the faintest notion of the amount of work required, I started to write my first novel, and over the course of the following years this evolved into the work that is now The Affinity Trap.

I'm now a freelance editor of reports on fast-moving consumer goods markets for a global B2B publisher based in London, covering fascinating subjects such as soft drinks and toilet paper. I lives in Birmingham, UK, with my wife and our two children, and am proud to be an Englishman. I no longer own a flute, but I still have the 335.

 

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3.0 out of 5 stars The Structure series starts out with weird architect, May 8, 2006
Martin Sketchley's Book 1 - The Affinity Trap - caught my eye and interest when first I saw its nicely drawn cover in the bookstores. But not being an impulsive buyer towards new writers, I decided to wait and see what kind've reviews it recieved before I went further.

After months of waiting, only 1 review was posted. And by a woman who never really seems,(nor really could possibly have the the time to read everything she reviews!), and always seems to give good reviews, no matter what. So, needless to say, I couldn't count on her.

But still, no reviews from others came. That usually means a red flag. So time went on, and Amazon.com posted the new covers and synopsis of the next two books. Both looked and sounded quite exciting. So, I decided to purchase the Affinity Trap used. Now that I recieved it, and read it, here's my personal take on it.

After reading sci-fi/fantasy/action/adventure now for over 35 years - as well as writing it for over 10 - I was sorely disappointed in some areas of this new book series. You can usually tell what kind of book it is, along with the style of writing of that particular author, within the first 50 to 100 pages. By then, you'll know that you are either in for a wild ride, or a sorry romp.

Affinity Trap is kinda in between.

Basically, Sketchley's writing shows major promise. Both in concepts, scope of storyline, and scene setting. Where he seems to lack is in areas such as - character design and clear descriptions, fast-pacing, action sequences, and overall character development.

The opening starts out well enough. I started to feel that the main protagonist, Alexander Delgado, was an interesting character. Delgado is supposed to be this ultra-super-soldier, but he doesn't act like one all the time. He quickly gets too mired down after having sex with a strange alien. The alien race themselves are wholly original. But like so many things in this book, such as Delgado's enhancements, it is way too hazy to fully see or figure out.

After a small bit of fast-paced reading, the story fairly quickly gets under way. Delgado is approached by his near future arch-nemesis, military dictator Myson, told to go on a mission solo to go get some alien woman who is supposed to be birthing his child to establish relations between their races.

OK, fine. But after Delgado crash lands his ship, he too quickly finds this serriatt woman alien with too little mishap. And then, even quicker, he has sexual relations with her. Because of all this easiness of infiltration and having sex with an unwilling woman alien, Affinity Trap falls into its own trap of almost all tension bulding getting blown out the window.

C'mon, no one in this group but the alien woman can see that Delgado took over some alien soldier's disguise? And who or what is this guy and group? Sketchley never really makes it abundantly clear. Like so many things, too much is hazy.

Anyway, although there is really solid scene setting, Sketchley never clearly sketches out his main character, nor much of anyone else really. I really wanted to see what the writer sees in his characters. Without the cover artwork, I really wouldn't have a clue. Too little descriptive prose for my tastes. If Sketchley would've added more there - like he did in his scene settings - fleshing them out more for the reading audience - that would have been a bit better.

But the story itself felt too mired down in sex. Too much sex and not enough action/adventure. Although the sex is pretty well written, very alien-esque, the balancing of that with slick action/adventure never seems to be met. Needs that balance.

I unfortunately found myself speed reading thru most of the book after giving the first 120 pages a close eye read. I really, really, was hoping for a more dramatic and explosive novel. After reading Richard K. Morgan's first 3 novels of Takeshi Novaks - which this one kinda reminded me of - due to its having an ex-super-soldier in a far flung future - one can see why Morgan has lots more reviews.

Sorry, Mr. Sketchley. But with stronger characters and dialogue, along with faster pacing and explosive action sequences, you show yourself to be a possible up and comer of this genre. I loved the fact that you used androids and cyborgs and the like, but I would have liked to've seen a raging battle betwixt the three, or something along those lines. The story just seemed to meander along with not much happening in the action/adventure department.

Actually, I think that's what Richard K. Morgan could brush up on. Action sequences. His are good. But not great. Nor enough of them. But his prose is so strong in the dramatics of his characters, and his pacing so bloody well done, one is never bored. But if he could write in more awesome space battles, such as the likes of Matthew Stover and Ben Bova, back in his Orion series writing days, then it could've been that much grander and fullfilling of a read.

Hopefully, Martin Sketchley, like a lot of first time writers, is just taking time to get warmed up. I truly hope so.

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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars When is it going to get interesting?, March 11, 2008
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How many times can you crash a spaceship on a planet and walk away from the crash, despite not being strapped in? How many deadly robots can you kill while facing them down a hallway without getting more than scratched?
This book had an intriguing premise and I kept going with the hope that it might get interesting. It did not. The main character is supposed to be an excellent soldier, but he blunders straight ahead without tactics. I like a lot of military science fiction, but the military angle is disappointing. The potential political and personal dramas are also not played out. The character development is superficial and cliched.
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0 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars dark science fiction thriller, February 1, 2006
In the twenty-fourth century, under the previous regime of General Smythe, former military intelligence officer Alexander Delgado was a hero highly regarded by all as earth served as an "intergalactic arbitrator". However, when a bloody coup made General William Myson the earth's Commander Supreme, Delgado fell from grace and the planet became an "intergalactic bully". To solidify his control of the planet, Myson needs an alliance with the tri-gendered alien species Seriatt as they live near a wormhole that provides access to another species the Sinz whom he sells weapons to. He has begun his efforts with a deal that led to his fathering a child with Vourniass Lycern, a Seriattic Royal Household child bearer.

When Lycern flees to Vulsc, the home planet of the Affinity Group, Myson orders Delgado to bring her and the baby to him as he believes their presence will secure the alliance as he anticipates an intergalactic war exploding. Delgado sees this as the first step to destroy Myson. What he never expected was the attraction to his prisoner, who after sharing sex has infected him with her secretion assissius that makes him emotionally and physically dependent on her for his release.

The descriptions of a toxic earth in which those of wealth and power live above the crippled surface where the masses reside feel genuine and the other species in the galaxy are developed enough so that they appear real. Especially intriguing is the close look at gender identity in light of the Seriattic species, which also leads to sex as a key ingredient in the exhilarating plot especially as Delgado finds himself in "bondage" to Lycern. Not for everyone, this is a dark science fiction thriller with extremely close encounters of the fourth kind.

Harriet Klausner
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Martin Sketchley, The Affinity Trap, Military Intelligence, Alexander Delgado, Reactionary Forces, General Myson, Vourniass Lycern, Mars Militia, Commander Delgado, Commander Supreme, General William Myson, General Smythe, Dead Zone, Planetary Council, Martin Sketchiey, Hostility Class, Commander Osephius, The Ultimate Union
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