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2.0 out of 5 stars
Diverting but Deeply Flawed, December 1, 2006
In general, I am highly skeptical of the "international political thriller" genre, however I will concede that Forsyth is a master storyteller well worth anyone's time. "Day of the Jackal" and "The Odessa File" have got to be in the genre's all time top five, and I also greatly enjoyed his short story collection "No Comebacks." This latest book, while perfectly serviceable and engaging (as long as you don't think too hard about it), falls well short of these.
Through a gripping opening highlighting the use of technology in the "war on terror", Western intelligence agencies learn of the existence of an impending Al-Qaeda attack that will be even more shocking than 9/11. Unfortunately, they don't have a clue what it is, or how to find out. A chance remark (one of the many, many coincidences required by the plot), leads them to enlist retired SAS officer Mike Martin in a desperate attempt to infiltrate Al-Qaeda. They do this via an elaborate switcheroo with an Afghan who's been disappeared into Guantanamo for five years. In another massive (though, alas, not the most egregious) coincidence, Martin just happens to have known this Afghan years ago while fighting the Soviets. The first half of the book involves setting this plan up,and the second half follows Martin's attempt to uncover the plot. (Apparently Martin was the hero of an earlier Forsyth book, "The Fist of God", however, I've not read it. Other reviewers report an egregious number of continuity errors between the two books relating to Martin.)
The story unfolds so that readers not particularly conversant with the "war on terror" and the history of Al-Qaeda will get brought fully up to speed. There's also a very clunky section explaining the difference between mainstream Islam and extremist Wahabbism. Similarly, the reader is given a very good understanding of the global reach and appeal of Al-Qaeda, for example, in Trinidad. And of course there is plenty of insiderish detail about the workings of modern espionage, which is fairly interesting stuff: telecommunications, piracy, money laundering, satellite imagery, facial identification software, and so on.
Unfortunately, the plotting is exceedingly awkward. For example, once Martin passes for the Afghan, he is directed by Bin Laden to personally participate in the grand scheme that's been set in motion. Stroke of luck that, eh? It's particularly problematic because there is absolutely no reason for him to take part. He is chaperoned halfway across the world to basically stand about on a ship, and oh yeah, foil the plot. Very weak indeed. Even worse, there's a pointless extended subplot about the "real" Afghan from Guantanamo, who is disappeared to a CIA cabin in Washington State. The reader can only assume we keep returning to him because he's going to escape at some point, and escape he does -- thanks to the engine falling off a passing F-15 and destroying the cabin! This reads like something from a parody of the genre and the reader is asked to swallow such foolishness for no good reason. The escape and pursuit, while gripping unto itself, has no bearing on the rest of the story.
Finally, as the plot accelerates to the finish line, the reader is blindsided by withheld information which is altogether silly. For the last 1/3 or so of the book, Western intelligence agencies know the Al-Qaeda threat is seaborne and have been going to massive lengths to try and figure out its probable target. Suddenly, the reader is informed that the G8 summit meeting is taking place on the QE2 sailing from New York to points south. Gee, you think that might be the target? The idea that the G8 summit would be held in such an uncontrolled environment is silly to start with, but to believe they would continue with that plan even as they are racing around with their heads cut off trying to locate a Al-Qaeda ghost ship? Paugh!
So, to recap, there is plenty to like in the book, and plenty to dislike. Like virtually everything in the genre, the book is plot-driven and the characters are pretty thin. There is some great detail and some great set piece sequences. However, there are so many contrivances and flaws that it's ultimately a disappointment, not up to Forsyth's usual standards.
Note: Various reviewers have pointed out a boatload of details Forsyth's researcher failed to get right, which I've listed below. None of these are particularly important, except for the last one, which is a pretty bad blunder for an espionage story:
-- Malaysian Airlines _does_ serve alcohol.
-- The hero is taken to the Falklands war aboard HMS Ark Royal, a ship not in service until three years after the war's end.
-- Chivas Regal is a blend and not a single malt liquor.
-- The 9/11 attacks did not occur at breakfast time in London but in the mid afternoon.
-- There is no U.S. Army rank of "Senior Captain"
-- A U.S. Air Force pilot of twenty years is ranked a Major, which is almost impossible under the U.S. military promotion system.
-- In the U.S. government a GS-15 is not a "junior staffer," but rather the highest ranked of the non-executive service, making more than$100,000/year.
-- The British SBS is the "Special Boat Service" not the "Special Boat Squadron."
-- The M21 sniper rifle was replaced by the M24 Sniper Weapon System in 1988.
-- It's somewhat unclear, but the story seems to imply that the hero learned passable Pashto from hanging out with Tajiks for six months. That's roughly like learning learning German by hanging out in France.
-- The hero is impersonating an Afghan ex-mujahedeen turned Taliban fighter. His teeth are inspected by very thorough Al-Qaeda security men, who somehow fail to notice his Western dental work.
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36 of 44 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
A SPLENDID NARRATION ADDS TO THE TENSION AND SHOCKING FINALE, August 23, 2006
While "fresh as this morning's headlines" has become a rather timeworn expression, it is not at all trite but decidedly true in regard to Frederick Forsyth's latest spine tingler. Even as I write this we are hearing of another terrorist plot which would have been even more horrific than 9/11 had it not been stopped. Yes, in the very real world we're the targets of hatred and the fictional world of Forsyth mirrors our plight.
A giant at creating international thrillers (The Day of the Jackal, The Odessa File, The Dogs of War), Forsyth has now crafted a novel so loaded with the latest in espionage technology and tactics that it raises the hair on the back of your neck.
The time is today and the CIA and the British Secret Intelligence Service have learned of a planned terrorist attack. That's it, that is all they know. In order to circumvent the unthinkable they must infiltrate Al Qaeda and discover the nuts and bolts of this heinous plan - who, what, where.
Forty-four year old Mike Martin is a British Special Forces veteran who has seen his share of battle in some of the most volatile spots on our planet. Now retired he only wants to spend the rest of life in peace and quiet. However, he is the one person, the only man for this job. He was raised in Iraq, speaks fluent Arabic, and has skin dark enough to pass for a Middle Easterner.
He has a double - it is Izmat Khan, an Afghan who has been held at Guantanamo for some five years. After intensive training Martin takes Khan's place and a fake escape is staged, allowing Martin to eventually contact Al Qaeda.
True to form Forsyth leads listeners on a suspense filled trail as Martin attempts to uncover Al Qaeda's plan. Also true to form, award winning actor Robert Powell delivers a splendid narration adding to the tension and building to a shocking finale.
Highly recommended.
- Gail Cooke
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