3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Patience rewarded, December 17, 2007
This review is from: Alma, or The Dead Women (Paperback)
This is a very remarkable piece of work by Alice Notley, in a way the culmination of the project of rebellion and defiance and liberation in and through her poems on which she embarked some years ago -- although her war against the traditions of male dominance and of the imperialistic logos is not one that can ever be exactly won, at least not out in the world those traditions formed. Still, a book -- or a poem, since it's really all of a piece through its nearly 350 pages -- that begins and for many pages persists with rage and utter hostility to the merely real world that surrounds it, screaming at that world, defying it heatedly, gradually modulates into something resembling a calm inner triumph, the fitful yet ultimately assured arrival at what she calls a new species free of the emprisonment of being: "we are ghosts many of us the dead women but we have all become the new species without essence and therefore definition". And despite the intense hostility toward men that dominates the first half, eventually Notley finds a way of making an opening for men, or some of us: "the men and boys who come with us are full of our emptiness" -- a slightly sardonic generosity marked by that fine paradox of being full of emptiness.
Readers who have not encountered Notley's work before, or have not engaged with her recent books, should be warned that this book requires patience in the reading, and an openness to connections and sequences of movements that do not add up to a plot and do not declare themselves, but are only gradually, sometimes chaotically disclosed. If you are patient, however, you can expect to arrive at great pleasure and satisfaction as the book completes its trajectory. It is helpful and enriches the reading, or so I found anyhow, if you first read Notley's earlier books that prepared the way for Alma, especially The Descent of Alette, Mysteries of Small Houses, and Disobedience. But this is not essential if you read with patience.
It will perhaps be a confession of incorrigibility, not only of being a man (merely), but of my own attachment to some of the poetic traditions that Notley is setting out to spurn and, as much as she can, overthrow, if I admit that I find her work often lacking in music and in the sorts of verbal beauty that word implies, rhythms, patterns of rhythm, patterns of sound -- things usually assigned to the realm of form. And for Notley form, in any traditional sense, seems to belong to the empire of the logos, against which she is conducting an unapologetic assault. One pattern which she does not forego is repetition, and unfortunately that is one that can be wearing and wearying. Still, even for an unliberated or unreconstructed reader, one who goes with her just part way, there are passages of great beauty, and many of great power. To allow her her own defense, near the end there is this passage:
"if you rip out the logos song can come out it flows from the cemetery pours out of decay"
I was very glad I read this book.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No