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39 of 44 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Great story, strong writing, October 25, 2007
This review is from: Alpha Rising (Paperback)
'Alpha Rising' begins with two astronauts, Bachman Turner (yes, like the band) and Faith Christopher (the name is no accident) leaving Earth on a mission to rescue a stranded space lab and its crew of four (including Bach's fiancee. They manage to hook up with the crippled ship, but before they can return to Earth, the rescue ship and the station are propelled across the galaxy to a strange planet called Jenesis. Bach's crewmates are captured by a rotten bunch called Rooks (Rulers of other kingdoms. I wish I had thought of that). Bach is picked up by the scientist Altemus and his daughter, Star. Bach soon doscovers that Altemus, an old genius, is on a mission from God, or the Creator. And soon, so is Bach. I won't say anything more about the plot.
Ms. Douglas writes in a clear, cut-to-the-chase prose that's refreshing these days, when so many authors just pile on the verbiage. The quest that Bach and Star are sent on is compelling and wholly original. Just as compelling is Bach's own journey from mild agnostic to God's chosen messenger. Everything-the brutal Rooks, Bach's shipmates, the scientific culture of Altemus and Star, the varying societies Bach and Star encounter on their mission-comes fully alive, with real emotions and real detail. Douglas is obviously inspired by earlier writers like Le Guin and Lewis, but this work never feels second-hand.
I hope that Ms. Douglas isn't through with these people. The ending, which concerns both the end and the beginning of the world, leaves plenty of room for a sequel. If she writes one, I'll buy a copy.
Read this book. You won't be disappointed.
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21 of 22 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Great idea, badly executed!, July 13, 2011
As I read through all the reviews I was excited to see all the great things said about the book and author. There seems to be a shortage of real science fiction writers these days, with so much more fantasy being written.
Unfortunately, despite the decent beginning and story potential, there is so little science in this fiction that it can hardly be called a science fiction book at all. The "advanced" science is balanced by incredibly simple mistakes in application, and missing elements. At one point the main character discovers he is only 1/4 as smart as the population of the people he meets (who all just happen to speak American English, and even have Earth names), and yet he is easily able to keep up with everything going on and contribute to the application of advanced science. The science in the story is more like magic, and the dialog like it was written by a child.
After reading the likes of Asimov and Vinge it is hard to take this book seriously. The very thinly veiled reproduction of the biblical Noah's Ark story rings false and the annoyingly simple action scenes reduce this book to a pre-teen level of potential acceptance as a serious novel.
I am only half way through, and my not be able to finish this book, only the second time this has ever happened in the thousands of books I have read. Were it not on the free Kindle book list when I got it, I would say I wasted my money on it. As it is I simply wasted my time.
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25 of 29 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
This one will rumble around in your brain a bit..., October 31, 2010
I'm not usually a sci-fi reader, but this one got my attention when the author posted on a message board that I frequent (KindleBoards.com). Despite the fact that I don't read much sci-fi, I do love NASA and often dream about what it would be like to be an astronaut. As a result, I decided to go ahead and give this book a whirl and I'm glad that I did.
Essentially, this book reminds me of the Narnia books. Sure, it is sci-fi in genre, but it was written in the same vein as the Narnia books - as an allegory to a larger, more important message. As far as I'm concerned, in the sci-fi genre, this one is ingenious. The author has spent ALOT of time working out her plot and allegory - so much so that even if I ignored the allegory altogether, Alpha Rising would be a compelling sci-fi adventure on its own.
Often with this type of fiction, I get annoyed because the "message" is so ridiculously cheesy and the plot is so ridicoulsy unbelieveable, that the point the author is trying to make fails miserably because I just can't take it seriously. Not so with Alpha Rising. The message does not beat you over the head, but weasels its way in amongst the beautiful scenery, high tech gadgets, the action and the adventure. And long after I've finished, the plot and characters have continued to roll around in my thoughts...I wonder what that meant? Or who this person represented? What are these characters doing after the end of the book? That, my friends, is the sign of a good story. If it sticks with me after I've finished it, well, I can deal with recommending it to others to read.
Despite being an indie novel, I found no errors whatsoever. The book is perfectly formatted and is clearly the result of a labor of love, in more ways than one.
Alpha Rising is not the best book I've ever read, no, but for a debut novel by an unknown author, it is a stunning reminder to me that we readers need to take chances on the indie authors because there is definately HUGE talent out there. I look forward to reading more from this author, and if I might be so pushy as to suggest it, I'd love to read a sequel!
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