Review
Annie was just an ordinary 13 year old til her Grandma Rose showed up to tell her she was coming with her to spend the summer. Then, Grandma told them all she was a witch. This young adult opens with riding pegasi (neighflies) and offers a whole lot more adventures for Annie and the readers. --
Amazon Top ReviewerThis sweet but way too thin YA fantasy could've been titled "How I Spent My Summer Vacation in Fairy Land." Impressionable thirteen-year-old Annie Clark explores her magical heritage to discover whether she's truly an elf or a witch. Annie already knows she was adopted and that Lysandra,her mother is a witch and her dad is human. She hopes to learn more about her mysterious ancestry by finding her birth parents while visiting her Grandma Rose Carbuncle in the magical kingdom of Wistmera. Grandma Rose enrolls Annie in Mrs. White's School for Girls so she can learn more about magic (shades of Rowling's Hogwarts).She becomes friends with Morgan, a centaur; Phoebe, a tooth fairy and survives meeting the Ugly Twins, Natasha and Dorcas who delight in tormenting fellow classmates. A bit too reminiscent of pop fantasies like Ella Enchanted and Harry Potter, the author still shows promise, thanks to cute ideas like a disappearing opaky (invisible pet), Non-Stop shoes, an oracle who communicates via the pearls of wisdom and some dangerous "expectacles." --
manuscript review by Publishers Weekly, an independent organizationWow, I have to admit that I actually got caught up in this body of text and was a little disappointed when it ended. The storytelling was very well done, although there appeared to be not much depth in a couple of sections. Being an animal lover I really enjoyed the part about working with the newborn "horse," it reminded me of my cat. I don't know if I would actually buy this book since I am generally not one to read books on magic and the like, although I do enjoy the Harry Potter movies. I think that anyone who enjoys these kinds of stories would find this one to be very worthwhile. --
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About the Author
Laura Browne is the author of two non-fiction books, "Why Can't You Communicate Like Me? How Smart Women Get Results At Work" and "Raise Rules for Women: How To Make More Money At Work". For more information go to www.lauracbrowne.com. Annie Clark and The Pearls of Wisdom was chosen as a semi-finalist in the 2008 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award competition. The book is for girls 8 - 13 and their mothers, aunts, and grandmothers. Here's what one reader said: "When I first started reading the story, it was with the opinion that I was trying to see if it would make a good gift for pre-teen girl relatives. I was therefore, surprised to find myself quite caught up in it... Laura Browne throws in puns and play-on-words enough to give the older reader a chuckle, as well as weaving the story to interest her actual target audience." You can read first page of the book here: Chapter 1 - The Flying W Ranch Cousin Shelby quickly strapped the training saddle on her neighfly, Tornado, as he stamped his feet and tossed his mane impatiently. He had a white patch between his wild eyes and the rest of him was inky black. Some of the other neighflies in the hayviary looked much calmer, and I timidly mentioned that to Shelby. She brushed her short-cropped black hair out of her eyes with the back of her hand and said, "Do you want to ride or not?" "Sure, it's just that..." "Well, Tornado's my neighfly. Some of those others are so slow, you might as well walk." I silently thought that would be just fine with me, but I didn't say anything. Tornado's training saddle had two small seats. Shelby hopped onto the front seat in a quick fluid motion, slipping her feet neatly into the stirrups. "Let's go," she barked at me as I awkwardly tried to copy her movements and settle into the second seat. As I strapped myself in, Shelby nudged the neighfly with her heels, and he started to trot and unfurl his massive wings. My fingers clutched the saddle horn in front of me as though they were glued to it. My eyes were tightly shut and I wondered if riding Tornado was a good idea. I'd never ridden a neighfly before. I hadn't even believed in them until that morning. Go to www.lauracbrowne.com to get the first 4 chapters of Annie Clark and the Pearls of Wisdom sent to you.