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Way too many errors, December 13, 2002
This review is from: Apollo: The Epic Journey to the Moon (Hardcover)
I worked as an engineer on the Gemini and Apollo projects, with McDonnell in St. Louis and at the Cape, working for Boeing. I am an avid reader of space history, and feel qualified to comment.
I would therefore like to point out a few errors and discrepancies in the book which I found to be very irritating:
Pg. 63: (caption) The rocket identified is the facilities test vehicle, AS-500F, not AS-504.
Pg. 69: There is no such thing as "fuel cell batteries"; they were either fuel cells OR
batteries.
(caption) The official crew designation was Lunar Module Pilot (LMP), not Lunar Module Co-pilot (even on flights where there was no LM).
Pg. 79: (caption) As evidenced by the high sun angle, this photo was taken several hours after sunrise.
Pg. 82: I don't think the rocket's tanks were at a very high pressure; that was the purpose
of the fuel and oxidizer pumps.
The diameter of the "internal brain" (and the S-IVB third stage) was 22 feet, not
30.
Pg. 89: Identifying captions for the liquid hydrogen lines and the oxygen tank are
reversed.
Pg. 92: AS-501 was the rocket for Apollo 4, not AS-504 (2 places)
Pg. 94: The diameter of the first and second stages was 33 feet, not 36.
The CSM was built in California, not Washington
The actual term used was "turning basin", not "turn basin".
The CSM and LM were trucked from the landing strip to the MSOB, not the
VAB. See photo on pg. 116.
Pg. 95: The actual term used was "turning basin", not "turn basin".
Pg. 96: There were only 3 active firing rooms in the LCC during Apollo, not 4.
The actual term used was "turning basin", not "turn basin".
Pg. 99: (caption) I don't think that is Mr. Wendt; G.W. wore heavy glasses. (See pg.
130.) He also spells his name "Guenter".
Pg. 100: Apollo 8 was beginning its arc toward orbital velocity, not escape velocity.
Escape velocity came several hours later.
The center of gravity shifted as the fuel was consumed, not as the engines moved.
Pg. 102: The Apollo countdown began about 4 days before launch, not 28 hours.
There were many more than 15 television display screens in the LCC firing room;
check the photo on page 132.
Pg. 105: Apollo 8 entered orbit behind the moon; they didn't enter orbit and then prepare
to travel around the far side.
Pg. 130: (caption) Mr. Wendt spells his name "Guenter", not "Gunter".
Pg. 146: Armstrong has admitted he never said "...for a man". That is what he intended,
but he left out the "a". This is quite obvious if you listen to the radio
transmission.
Pg. 166: The astronauts breathed pure oxygen, not air.
Pg. 182: The LM atmosphere was pure oxygen, not air.
Pg. 207: (caption) According to the photo on pg. 225, Apollo 15 landed farther away from
the visible center than Apollo 17 did.
Pg. 214: The CSM atmosphere was pure oxygen, not air.
Pg. 217: The yellow line should be identified as "re-entry trajectory", not "launch
trajectory".
Pg. 242: The Orbital Workshop atmosphere was to be pure oxygen, not air.
Pg. 253: I assume the scale on the right side represents meters; it should be so stated.
General: Many terms are abbreviated (V.A.B., C.S.M., etc.) when in fact they were not written that way. We used VAB, CSM, KSC, etc. Oddly enough, LM seems to be the only one written correctly in the book.
There are many references to the LM's "cockpit stage". While this is where the cockpit was located, the correct term is "ascent stage". I never heard the term "cockpit stage" used.
Despite all these comments, I really enjoyed the text and the photos. The book also introduced me to some interesting websites I had not seen before.
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