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4.0 out of 5 stars
BEAUTIFUL writing, though story missed SOMETHING - 3.5, August 6, 2002
This review is from: In the Arms of One Who Loves Me (Hardcover)
In the Arms of One Who Loves Me is the debut novel from author, Jacqueline Jones LaMon. The novel introduces us to Nia Benson and Seth Jackson, two people who are trying to figure out the career and romantic paths of their lives in order to get to that place where they can exhale; through coincidental circumstances, the two always manage to see each other, if only briefly. Nia is in an 'if it ain't broke, don't fix it' relationship, has a friendship with a woman she really knows nothing about, and has aspirations to run her own public relations firm. When office politics leave Nia jobless, she finds herself trying to piece together a life that is slowly falling apart at the seams. Seth is a man who loves the ladies, but at the wedding reception for his best friend, he falls in love with a mysterious sister named, Lauren. As he tries to build his budding music career, Seth finds himself reliving old ways as a naughty friend/neighbor seduces him and leaves him struggling to keep his relationship with Lauren intact. In the Arms is a well-written novel by Ms. LaMon. She uses her skills as a poet effectively, and she definitely has a way with words that can move the reader. I read the first chap of her novel on her website and CRAVED to read the entire novel. As I did, however, I found some things that hindered my reading. One of those hindrances was the time sequence of the novel. Each chapter goes back and forth between Seth and Nia, and I had a hard time trying to figure out where, as a reader, I was in the story. This problem fixes itself towards the end. Other things that gave me pause can be grouped into one thing, the "unsurprises" of some of the surprise situations. I don't want to go into detail because I hope everyone will buy this book and experience it for him or her self, but there were situations in the story that just seemed "planted" and not grown organically through the story. Overall, I would highly recommend that people pick up this novel. Despite my own sidetracks of the story, I believe people will enjoy LaMon's writing style. Reading her makes me anxious to see what she comes up with next. Shon Bacon
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
life happens, September 11, 2002
This review is from: In the Arms of One Who Loves Me (Hardcover)
In the Arms of the One Who Loves Me was a book not only about finding that special someone, but about finding yourself. The two main characters, Nia and Seth, are attempting to meet their goals in life. Opposition, however, is constantly in their way. The novel essentially deals with each character separately, allowing the reader to become intimately involved in both Seth and Nia's lives. It leaves you with a feeling of hope -- that everything will eventually work out in your own life -- and a sense of knowing that no one can affect your life more than you. I loved the book and can't wait for more from Mrs. LaMon. I highly recommend this book.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Lost Promise, September 4, 2003
This review is from: In the Arms of One Who Loves Me (Hardcover)
I picked up this book based on the artistic, modern cover photograph of pretty Black people. I read the synopsis of two young Black professionals dealing with career, urban life, and romance and was intrigued. I liked the first chapter with Nia. It was dramatic, but hinted at the character's depth and fortitude. I was surprised to realize that the story was set in 1980, as neither the cover nor the synopsis indicated this, but I rolled with it. While the chapter introducing Seth was amusing, it did not indicate who Seth really was as a person. As Seth is a primary protaganist, his character should either be likable, utterly unlikable but interesting, or a good man in a bad situation. As he is written, Seth is none of these. I spent the entire book trying not to dislike Seth based on his actions. Having given up on enjoying Seth's story, I thought Nia's growth, both personally and professionally, would be a pleasant read, but the author's goals for that character got muddled in agenda and personal issues. I felt Nia's relationship with her best friend was unrealistic as each one tears the other down without any positivity. Nia's lesbian affair and its consequences would have been more believable if Nia had been given some sense of personal vulnerability about the experience itself. At first the personal and professional overlaps between Nia and Seth's worlds feel coincendental, but towards the end, the convenience of it all allows for sloppy tie-ins and a dumb nonconclusion. This could have been great, like those wonderful Young Adult books by Walter Dean Myers, Virginia Hamilton, and Rosa Guy. It's just that the story's sense of purpose got lost.
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