From Publishers Weekly
Ten-year-old twins Mathilda and Mathewstet run away because their separating parents plan to split them up. They intend to stay with an uncle in San Francisco, but he is away and the twins resort to sleeping in Golden Gate Park, where someone is murdering homeless people. The twins not only escape harm but they pinpoint the killer--an old woman who bakes poisoned angel-food cake for anyone she believes is hurting the park's birds. Then they rejoin their parents, who vow to try to keep the family together. Despite its gritty venue, this mystery/thriller is neither convincing nor suspenseful. It is weighted with contrived, implausible details, including the identity and modus operandi of the killer and the last-minute revelation that a battered woman the children have met (and bought food for) is actually an undercover cop. Neither the vagrants nor the twins and their family are fully realized figures, and uncertain pacing dissipates rather than builds tension. Ages 9-12.
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From School Library Journal
Grade 5-7-- Twins Mathew and Mathilda run away to their uncle's home in San Francisco after their parents tell them that they are divorcing and that the children will be separated. When they find that he is not home, they have no place to go but Golden Gate Park. There they encounter several homeless people, and are confronted with the mysterious murders of three people in the park. Mathew solves the crimes just before Mathilda is about to be poisoned. The conflict at the beginning of the story is realistic, but the plot drags when so many homeless characters are introduced, possibly because as minor characters they are not well developed. Mathew also undergoes an amazing change, from a nerd who never expresses his own opinion to an aggressive, outspoken person. The problems of the homeless (shelter from the cold, finding food in the garbage cans) do not seem to apply to Mathew and Mathilda, as readers know that living in the park is only a temporary situation for them. It also looks like the parents will reconsider their plans to divorce, which does not seem realistic. Plot implausibilities abound in this story that is written with less sensitivity about the homeless than Hahn's December Stillness (Clarion, 1988). --Bonnie L. Raasch, C. B. Vernon Middle School, Marion, IA
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