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The Athena Factor

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This isn't too bad a read, although the action bogs down here and there as the author lets his characters expatiate on the pros and cons of cloning people and whatever that seems to entail. It's easy enough to skip these interludes and get on to whatever action is under way at the time they crop up. The characters are not that well developed, tending toward the stock rugged he-men and gorgeous babes (who are actually very well developed) that populate many examples of this sort of novel. The plot gimmick that gets the ball rolling is that many folks who want babies would rather give birth to a clone of some celebrity than whatever might result from their own DNA. The possibility of using genetic fiddling to correct "bad" genes is also broached.

I usually don't read these types of books, but thought I'd give this one a chance. While it was entertaining, it certainly doesn't rank up there as a "must read." The plot, while some may think is believable, was totally unbelievable to me, and the characters were quite shallow and stereo-typical. I couldn't bring myself to root for the good guys to get to the bottom of the mysterious goings-on. The ending was quite cheesy and I thought hastily put together. Sure, it wrapped up all the loose ends but did it too easily and without much thought.

I got this book from a friend for free, and frankly I was robbed. It wasn't worth the money I didn't pay for it. A suspense novel should have some surprises in it, and this one, frankly, has few enough that it isn't suspenseful at all. It's poorly written (some of the dialog is so wooden Mr. Gear must have chopped down a forest or two) and very poorly conceived, with a plot propped up with a lot of scientific gibberish that may, or may not, make sense to someone who knows what the author's talking about. I don't know, but the information is so boring that I didn't really care.

The plot surrounds a sort of Julia Roberts-Jennifer Anniston-Nicole Kidman sort of actress named Sheela Marks. She's a Canadian movie star at the top of her game, making multi-million dollar movies and running from pillar to post every day trying to keep up with her life and career. She has a bodyguard who (of course) is in love with her, and who thwarts an attack in the opening pages of the book. The attacker has a syringe rather than a knife, and our hero the bodyguard can't figure out why a guy would attack his client with a syringe rather than a more effective weapon, especially since the guy has a well-thought out plan and an escape route all scoped out.

So the bodyguard (his name is Lyman Bridges) hires an ex-FBI agent who got fired for having sex with her boss while they were on stakeout. The ex-FBI agent is a heartbreakingly beautiful (of course) Latina who immediately goes to work, and spends way more time than you would expect figuring out what's going on. Then again, since the blurb on the back of the book gives away the plot twist, maybe it wouldn't be that easy to figure out if you didn't already know what was coming. It makes the last part of the book rather predictable, and pretty anti-climactic.

I couldn't really say I enjoyed much of anything about this book. The author does a decent job of portraying the life of a movie star (so I have read; I'm not one myself, so I can't speak from personal experience) but other than that, there's nothing really to recommend this book.