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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
casual until it sizzles!
A man comes home endeared with the past, and is suddenly tossed into saving his ex-lover and her baby from an awful fire. When the emergency is over, he invites her to move in with him--he a millionaire with means and a passion she uneasilly shares. For now, she has herself and her baby to consider. And she holds suspicions about his past, her past with him---and what she...
Published on August 26, 2003
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3.0 out of 5 stars
Good story, but it could have been better
I really enjoyed the story, but I would have liked it more if the author hadn't head hopped so much. One paragraph was the hero's point of view, the next paragraph was the heroine's and then back to the hero. I wanted to scream "Pick a POV and stick with it for more than a few sentences!" It wasn't even just the hero and heroine. She did the head hopping with Joanna's...
Published on March 1, 2009 by Holliday Rohrbaugh
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
casual until it sizzles!,
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This review is from: A Bachelor and a Baby (The Mom Squad) (Silhouette Desire #1503) (Mass Market Paperback)
A man comes home endeared with the past, and is suddenly tossed into saving his ex-lover and her baby from an awful fire. When the emergency is over, he invites her to move in with him--he a millionaire with means and a passion she uneasilly shares. For now, she has herself and her baby to consider. And she holds suspicions about his past, her past with him---and what she should do about the future.
3.0 out of 5 stars
Good story, but it could have been better,
By Holliday Rohrbaugh "Laureth" (Rochester, NY USA) - See all my reviews
This review is from: A Bachelor and a Baby (The Mom Squad) (Silhouette Desire #1503) (Mass Market Paperback)
I really enjoyed the story, but I would have liked it more if the author hadn't head hopped so much. One paragraph was the hero's point of view, the next paragraph was the heroine's and then back to the hero. I wanted to scream "Pick a POV and stick with it for more than a few sentences!" It wasn't even just the hero and heroine. She did the head hopping with Joanna's buddies in one scene. Took me right out of the story. Sometimes I lost track of whose POV it was supposed to be. It made it hard to read sometimes.
It did have an interesting plot and interesting characters. If you don't mind the head hopping every other paragraph you will really enjoy this book. |
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A Bachelor and a Baby (The Mom Squad) (Silhouette Desire #1503) by Marie Ferrarella (Mass Market Paperback - April 1, 2003)
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