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4.0 out of 5 stars
Good start to a series, September 28, 2007
This review is from: The Battle at the Moons of Hell (Helfort's War: Book I) (Mass Market Paperback)
This is the start of a space opera/military SF series with a number of pluses and some detractions.
On the plus side, the author is an experience RN and RAN naval officer which let's him permeate the book with authentic sounding detail - far more authentic than David Drake's Lt. Leary books for example, though a bit less fun (more on that). Also, his ear for political and military dialogue is more authentic than, say, David Weber. Finally, the author is smart and well-educated, and this comes through in well-written if sometimes stilted prose. Good space battles, some tense action, nice overall political sweep, good villains.
I have alluded to a couple of minuses. Not a lot of "fun" - our hero is a bit stiff, his love interest is hard to get excited about and I found him wooden. I also thought that the book could have been a little longer and in some parts skipped days of storyline too abruptly.
That said, I liked the book, liked the universe and enjoyed this as the start of a new series with a more "real-world" hero than lots of these military SF series have and a potential for a number of exciting, richly detailed sequels.
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41 of 48 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Fairly decent novel., October 4, 2007
This review is from: The Battle at the Moons of Hell (Helfort's War: Book I) (Mass Market Paperback)
I'm not usually a fan of military scifi, but every once in a while I'll dip into the pool. _The Battle at the Moons of Hell_ is a pretty standard work of its genre, containing echoes of Weber, Drake, and Feintuch. The plot is straightforward, no real surprises, and the pacing is good - not a lot of dead spots and needless exposition, something I particularly dislike about David Weber's military scifi.
I believe this is Mr. Paul's first novel, and as such, it's a good, solid, if somewhat uninspiring read. The political structures of the two main 'space empires' are a little simplistic and underwhelming in their execution, as are the characters, but the book was decent enough to keep me reading to the end. I'll probably pick up book two in the series when it comes out.
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27 of 31 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
A welcome return to traditional Military Sci Fi, November 4, 2007
This review is from: The Battle at the Moons of Hell (Helfort's War: Book I) (Mass Market Paperback)
Well written, tied together, lots of themes developing that will lead to future story lines, without sacrificing the current book. Michael Helfort is a classic hero - a dastardly plot against him by another envious student clique, he is punished, but family ties keep him from being booted out of the service. So he's gets to move on, to less than what he could have expected as an assignment but he moves right into a convergence of events that sets the stage for what could be another Worlds War. His family is caught in a hijacking and his first ship is called in to confirm the intelligence. Author needs more time to develop the characters, but I see this as the first enjoyable salvo in a good series of books that will entertain as well as provoke comparisons to our current situation on Earth. I wish the book had been longer but I have great hopes for the next one.
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