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2.0 out of 5 stars
Not a Whole Lot of Substance., July 30, 2007
This review is from: The Becoming (The Anna Strong Chronicles, Book 1) (Mass Market Paperback)
If anyone's thinking of reading The Becoming by Jeanne C. Stein and giving the Anna Strong series a try, may I recommend that you don't waste your time or money and just skip it. As a fantasy book, the world that Stein presents us with is rather thin and unoriginal. As a crime/paranormal type book, well... there's not really a whole lot to worry your pretty little head over. If you're just looking for a story about interesting, well-developed, realistic characters then you're not going to find that either. The main character's most dramatic reaction to being brutally raped and turned into a vampire is to become strongly annoyed that people are able to read her thoughts. In fact, not only will you encounter thin setup, plot, and characters in this novel, but any feminist notions you might have will probably be offended along the way. Our heroine, who is described as being 'wired for sex', allows herself to be seduced by her super rich and mysterious vampire mentor time and time again. Giving into the seduction isn't even described as a cognitive choice. Instead, the protagonist is simply overwhelmed with desire whenever he gets too close and immediately swoons. It's not until later on that she even thinks about her long term relationship with another man, and the fact that this supposed guide to the vampire world is probably just using her for his own means. But that's ok, I'm sure she was just exploring her crazy new vampiric senses and, after all, she is wired for sex.
By the way, for those of you just looking for a mindless, fun read about vampires and graphic sex? Go back to Hamilton, because Stein glosses right over the juicy details.
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24 of 25 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Bland, but for the Drama, October 8, 2007
This review is from: The Becoming (The Anna Strong Chronicles, Book 1) (Mass Market Paperback)
Bounty hunter Anna Strong is viciously attacked one night by a skip who turns out to be a brand-new vampire. She lives to walk away, but she soon discovers that she's becoming a vampire herself. Anna then meets and greets the local vamps, flees from some not-too-skilled vampire hunters, and goes on the hunt again for the rogue who assaulted her. All the while she attempts to adjust to her new lifestyle.
The storyline itself is pretty basic. Of course, as an introductory novel to a series, the plot's lack of originality can be overlooked if the world and its characters are given free rein to develop. But, sadly, that doesn't happen. Very little is revealed about vampire society, and, for the most part, the characters seem straight out of central casting. Anna herself is still an enigma by the end of the book, and she's the narrator. But, despite the fact that the story bounces along with Anna from scene to scene, the reader isn't given much background information on her life or insight into her personality.
Unfortunately, what the characters lack in substance they make up for in melodrama. They are often agitated and overly-emotional, and that's what really killed the story for me. There are several conversations throughout the book where the characters treat the smallest slights as if they were mortal insults. Anna gets angry at her partner David, David gets angry at new guy Avery, and Avery gets angry at everybody. And the hissy fits aren't the only problem. There are raging hormones as well. Anna lusts after her vampire mentor, and he lusts after her, leading inevitably to a case of Instant Love Interest (which would have been more believable if Anna hadn't waxed poetically about her -still- current boyfriend only a few hours previously).
The over-the-top emotional states rang false to me, and that made the characters feel even LESS real. I got pulled out of the story several times because I felt like the characters were being manipulated into situations by their emotionally-driven snap-decisions. Plus, I just wanted to slap them for their pettiness and stupidity. Honestly, why would a supposedly street-smart woman move in with a man after knowing him for only 24 hours? And how could a vampire survive in secret for hundreds of years when he's so obviously emotionally unstable?
For a first book, The Becoming isn't awful, but it's not particularly memorable, either. It's a fantasy-mystery-romance hybrid, and, unfortunately, none of its parts feel complete. If the reader is looking for a supernatural mystery/thriller, there aren't enough clever plot twists and pulse-pounding scenes. If the reader is searching for urban fantasy/horror, there aren't enough fantastical elements and world-building facts. If the reader is hoping for a paranormal romance, the emotions feel forced, and the lust falls short of the mark. (Not only does Anna betray her boyfriend in the blink of an eye, the sex with the new love interest takes place off-screen.) The story left me frustrated because I was hoping for something "more," and all I got was a very light read. It didn't pique my interest to read any of Anna's further adventures.
(2.5 stars)
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55 of 70 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
another vampire series..., July 10, 2007
This review is from: The Becoming (The Anna Strong Chronicles, Book 1) (Mass Market Paperback)
Normally, I would subtract a star because it's a series setup. But this story has a whole hog plot of its own, and stands well alone. It does not leave loose ends (or not really compelling ones, anyhow), so I'm not gonna do that this time
My book cover compared this to Mary Janice Davidson and Laurell K Hamilton. Um, it has vampires in it. Otherwise? Not so much.
Instead, it reminds me of an older series of books by a Canadian author Nancy Baker. The night inside was the first book in that series. Both involve a woman, strong, but not just how strong, who becomes a vampire.
Fans of Tanya Huff will like this also.
There's a good mythos that is explained well - enough of the basic legend with a few twists set in. There's the master/tutor vampire who is sexy as all get out. And there's Anna. We get to know anna just as anna gets to know anna, and that's the best part of the ride.
All in all a fast read with some surprising twists.
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