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Birthright [Kindle Edition]

RJ Palmer
3.0 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (32 customer reviews)

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Book Description

What if the next stage of evolution was caused by the oversight of man and what if that oversight was a simple medical mistake?

Raine Donnelly is born three months premature by emergency surgery after his critically injured mother is admitted to the hospital, having been the victim of a drunk driver though her early expectant state is not discovered until after a series of x-rays are performed to assess the nature and extent of her injuries.

Now as an adult, Raine knows about none of this and lives a quiet, functional and strictly routine life in Colorado though his life begins to spiral hopelessly out of control as he begins to have blackouts and believes he's hallucinating. He also starts to have the most dastardly effect on electrical equipment as for whatever reason, machines malfunction or short out completely when he gets anywhere near them while he's upset or confused.

His doctor thinks he may have a brain tumor and insists on further testing though that may prove somewhat difficult when a nameless and faceless someone keeps trying to put bullet holes in him and when he meets the wife and children about whom he has no memory, his life becomes even more complicated, partially because his wife is furious at him because she's thought him dead for three years.

Now, drawing on all his courage and what little understanding he can piece together with the help of his wife, Raine must unravel the mystery of his past and discover and accept who and what he is without getting he and his family killed.
  RJ Palmer's second novel, Sins of the Father, has been released as of 05/01/2012.


Editorial Reviews

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"I thought this book was VERY good, loved it! I really didn't want to ever put it down!"  From Smashwords
From the moment I began reading this book I was hooked. The writer was extremely skilled at giving just enough away while still keeping you in the dark and wishing you could figure it out. It was exciting, suspenseful, and generally great.

-Winter Adelle wynteradelle.com/?p=1131

From the Author

I started writing Birthright because I was bored half insane and I've always had an overactive imagination that will go off on the most silly little tangents about anything at all really so it seemed only natural that when I found myself so completely and helplessly at loose ends one winter day that I began to write. Before then I had felt for many a year that I had what I could only describe as a completely useless talent for words though when I opened myself up to the story for the first time it spawned in me an enduring love affair with the written word which has profoundly changed my life. I can now spot a typo from across the room and I fairly consistently offer to rewrite anything that doesn't have the exact wording that I believe it should and I probably drive my husband completely batty but what can I say, it's compulsive. But I digress.

I had wondered at the possibility for years that something man made and frequently used could alter our very existence. I wondered if it could theoretically happen and what the circumstances surrounding an oversight of this magnitude would have to be and I became so enamored of the idea that I eventually began to become more obsessive than anything. When it came to the point that I could no longer put up with myself I finally set about writing a story that embodied the more dramatic aspects of my creative imagination gone hopelessly awry the result of which was Birthright. I've been sitting on Birthright for about eight years and have just discovered the courage thanks to the undying support and strength of the love of my life to actually post my writing though now I leave it to you, the reader, to judge the worth of my work.

Product Details

  • File Size: 506 KB
  • Print Length: 540 pages
  • Page Numbers Source ISBN: 1453786074
  • Publisher: Rachel Palmer; 1 edition (August 22, 2010)
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B0040GJGQO
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
  • X-Ray: Enabled
  • Lending: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #5,558 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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Customer Reviews

And too many grammar and punctuation errors. Canadian Reader  |  10 reviewers made a similar statement
I ended up skimming through pages just to get to something else. ShadeTree  |  4 reviewers made a similar statement
The characters were so well developed and the story was so amazingly unique. Romance/Fantasy/Horror  |  3 reviewers made a similar statement
Most Helpful Customer Reviews
26 of 30 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Tough audience here...... July 2, 2011
By Frankie
Format:Kindle Edition|Amazon Verified Purchase
I am not related to the author and do not know her. Actually, this is my first review because I feel that most people are more articulate at it than I could ever be....but I felt compelled to respond to several reviews that are here.

Now, the reviewers: Her husband identified himself as such and can't be faulted for being a proud husband. Michael B. Mitchell provided a bad review without reading it simply because he 'thought' he couldn't share it? That's really dreadful and shows what kind of person he is. Odysseus called it utter trash....really???? I have read glowing reviews, bought books, and quickly removed them from my Kindle and from my account. This was not one of them.

I actually enjoyed this Kindle 'book'. An intriguing story with interesting characters and I would have liked to have known a little more at the end. I hope Ms. Palmer is not put off and continues writing. The writing is, without doubt, wordy and some of the better reviews had good points. There are a number of places where a line should have started as a new paragraph or even as a new chapter. Ms. Palmer has an excellent and enviable vocabulary and once I got into the rhythm of her writing, I found myself involved in her manner of storytelling. And what's wrong with being self-published? I would guess that it takes quite a bit of courage to put something that one has labored over out there for everyone to critique and believe we should be encouraging new writers with positive comments and not viciously undermining them.
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13 of 14 people found the following review helpful
3.0 out of 5 stars Intriguing story idea, poor writing April 1, 2011
Format:Kindle Edition|Amazon Verified Purchase
I decided to try this book even though 2 of the 3 existing reviews were not favorable. I'm on middle ground with this one. The idea for the story itself was intriguing. Raine is the main character and he has had his brain pre-programmed, from a young age, as an experiment by a group of research scientists and doctors. He escapes from the institution where he has been forced to grow up. After his escape he marries, is involved in an accident and is "rescued" from the scene by someone who wants his returning memories erased. His memories are wiped out and he is "placed" in a rural area to carry on his life, all the while under intense surveillance of the RevTech group. His wife, left behind with twin daughters, is made to believe he is dead. At some point a few years later Raine and his "widow", by chance, meet up with each other. He experiences flashes of memory once again and strange paranormal activity seems to revolve around his moods and thoughts. This begins the climax to the end of the story to see if good wins over evil and if Raine will decide to tap into his paranormal powers to save his family, who have been kidnapped in an attempt to draw him out. I'm not sorry I took the time to read this. The long, long descriptive phrases throughout the book made the reading laborious and tedious. Many of those phrases were unneccesary and had little to do with setting the scene. There was also gross over-use of the word "however" and it wasn't used correctly grammatically. There was also over-use of other words such as "preternatural". There were many grammatical errors and poor editing of this Kindle edition. However, if you don't mind wading through the extraneous wording and errors, the story has merit.
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11 of 13 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars way too much April 7, 2011
Format:Kindle Edition|Amazon Verified Purchase
Even though the storyline is interesting, it comes across in laboriously descriptive verbage, that have padded the book out way too much, perhaps in an effort to give the scenes full imagery. But seriously, one or two metaphors per paragraph to describe the scene is enough.
I think Shakespeare might have been impressed, but I find it exhausting.
On another note, the author can obviously write, and has had a good idea for a book, but execution needs to be worked on. More content & storyline, less tangential meandering.
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Most Recent Customer Reviews
3.0 out of 5 stars Difficult to read
I must first say, in my opinion, that this book could have been written with thirty percent of the words used. I really struggled through the words, sentences, and paragraphs. Read more
Published 29 days ago by Miles H. Sumner
3.0 out of 5 stars Interesting story
The story was interesting! Telekinesis is an exciting thing. The book would have been better if there were chapters. It was quite hard to understand at first.
Published 1 month ago by Marison Dy
5.0 out of 5 stars Awesome
I am really enjoying reading this book. It's very descriptive and the story is definitely keeping me enthralled. Read more
Published 1 month ago by eilowyneleyne
2.0 out of 5 stars Wordy
Update: After having finally finished this book I had to reduce my rating from 3 stars to 2. I still think the idea of the story is great and the writing is... good? Read more
Published 2 months ago by Nicole
3.0 out of 5 stars Ok book
The plot and outcome were good but very drawn out. Too descriptive to the point you almost forgot the point the author was trying to make.
Published 2 months ago by lilhmom
3.0 out of 5 stars Good Story, over written!
"There is nothing wrong with the storyline in this novel. The main characters - Raine, Sierra and the twins are well depicted and likeable. Read more
Published 2 months ago by JimVonBaden
1.0 out of 5 stars Descriptive
You could erase one adjective per page and cut this novel in half! The over use of foreign, multisyllabic, adjectives takes away from the better parts of the story. Read more
Published 2 months ago by courtney
3.0 out of 5 stars Flowery
As I prepare to submit my, first ever, inaugural, premier, initial, book; I have read, searched, perused, considered, many reviews, critiques, opinions. Read more
Published 2 months ago by willard lewis
4.0 out of 5 stars unusual writing
The story was good. The author strung many words into one sentence that I think should have been broken in to two or more sentences. Read more
Published 3 months ago by Cheryl Smith
4.0 out of 5 stars As much Intrigue as Science Fiction
I am currently 72% of the way through the book, so I can not say how it ends yet. So far, it is a good read though it starts a bit slow. Read more
Published 3 months ago by Alan D. Gunhouse
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