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54 of 58 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
fast paced urban fantasy, December 5, 2010
top six reasons to love this book
1. very likable female protagonist who becomes an alpha female who is not above having the occasional cry fest when the situation is warrented.
2. lots of fallen angels... always a cool topic and she had a great take on it that still left a lot of unanswered mysteries about this world to look forward to in future books.
3. the pace of this novel was great... always much action and sluething.
4. romance was not what the plot was centered on ... but there is one that is set on slow boil which i love. i dont need everything to happen in 1 short book... it keeps me looking forward to the next.
5. i really enjoyed the secondary characters and look forward to learning more about them and their motives.
6. any book that ends with lucifer declaring that the main character will be paying back a debt in the future is always a good thing.
top four reasons not to love this book
1. it is obvious that this a first book in a series. it seemed to me that this was an exceptionally short full novel. many of the secondary characters were not fully developed and seemed 2 dimensional.
2. a 30 year old virgin... in chicago... in present day? really? even when i feel it didnt really make a difference in the plot. the main character even said it herself that she had the emotional development of a 3 year old. i hope i didnt just read a YA book. yikes!
3. maybe a few too many plot lines for the length of this novel... which lead to maybe a few too many coincidences. i feel like this book has been edited down to its bare bone essentials.
4. the romance sub plot: the male lead is a little too omega for my tastes. an alpha female needs an alpha male. i hope he will get more of a backbone in the next book. also i think she is getting more love interests than her personality warrents. and if she so hot it seems like she wouldnt still be a virgin since it sounds like she would have been more than willing if an opportunity in the past would have presented itself.
i really enjoyed this book and will read the next one when it comes out. i am hoping that i will learn more about the characters and unanswered world building questions. this book had all the elements of a great book but the main characters seemed a little flat because of the length of the book. i really felt this would have a spectacular novel if it was 1/3 longer and i could have developed more of a relationship with the main characters. at times the plot felt rushed.
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27 of 28 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Don't fall for the stars, April 30, 2011
This review is from: Black Wings (Black Wings, Book 1) (Mass Market Paperback)
This book has some fairly high starred reviews, don't fall for it. If you are a fan of really well written urban fantasy by authors such as Illona Andrews, Jim Butcher, Mike Carey, you are going to be greatly disappointed in this book. One reviewer said it better than I could "feels like it's been edited down to the bare bones". I agree wholeheartedly. There is an interesting story to be told here, and the size and scope of it should have taken at least 3 books to unfold in its entirety. Instead it's all packed down to one book, with so many characters coming and going that I can't keep track of them all; and not one, nor two, but three suitors for our kick-ass heroine's fair hand. Unfortunately, she's not all that kick-ass.
She's poorly constructed, too many contradictions that just don't add up. Going in the space of four days to no recognizable powers and magical talent to god-inspiring magical talent and almost the ability to control it was just to much to believe. Then there's the job - soul collector. I had no problem with that, and the "bureaucracy" of it all, that was actually humorous. But seriously, we have to believe there are far less agents to collect souls than there are people who die, so how could an agent have any real free time at all, much less days between assignments? It's simply not a mathematical probability. There would have to be non-stop soul collection. And supplements her income by food articles for magazines? That just stuck out, did not feel at all right nor add any value to the story at all.
The only thing I really enjoyed about this book was Beezle, the gargoyle. Other than that, it's a great premise, and I had high hopes, but this author is not there, and this series is not one I'll stick with.
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13 of 15 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Fresh Take and Highly Enjoyable, November 30, 2010
This review is from: Black Wings (Black Wings, Book 1) (Mass Market Paperback)
A fresh take on urban fantasy and a highly enjoyable read. Read it in one day and it was the perfect way to spend the day after Thanksgiving. The heroine is gutsy and funny, the love interest is hot and heavenly, the talking gargoyle is a curmudgeonly lovable sidekick; and we can all relate to her having an anal retentive boss that works your last nerve. The plot moves at a nice quick pace and the story is well developed with enough background information to explain the event but not overwhelm the current action. If you are tired of the same old vampire or shapeshifter stories rehashed over and over then this is the book for you. Maddy Black is an Agent of Death whose job is to escort souls to the after life (not a single vampire or shapeshifter in the book - yeah for originality!!!!).
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