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OMGIWAB - too bad there was no audience in mind, June 11, 2008
This review is from: Blind Speed: A Novel (Hardcover)
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After this book and Beginner's Greek: A Novel, I'm going have to propose a new genre of literature - the OMGIWAB - or "OMG! I'm Writing A Book" since in both cases it appears that the writer was so enamored with the fact that he's writing a novel that he kind of forgot to tell a compelling story or pay much attention to his characters beyond the flat stereotypes. In the case of Beginner's Greek, you have a lot of telling without showing, a lot of internal monologues, impossible dialogue, stereotypical characters and an amateur writer's fantasy of a real writing life (sleeping with gorgeous editors, giving public readings to a roomful of fawning groupies, respect, etc.)
Blind Speed had all those elements and more. Instead of a cheesy love story on which to hang its hat, it meanders over the thankless life of a protagonist who becomes a stand-in for the writer. He's fat and he feels like a loser and he's sure that his position in academia is going to come crashing down on him at any moment. There's an impossibly hot and patient girlfriend (who marries him) and a couple of really successful brothers. There's also a kidnapping plot toward the end.
But what really makes this an OMGIWAB besides the internal monologues and the trite characterizations is the author's insistence on talking to the audience. He wrote one chapter during the Michael Jackson trial. He was thinking of something else when he wrote another chapter. Did you know that he had a novel that he finished as an undergrad that he's never looked at again? Isn't that fascinating? No. I see that he's trying to imitate Kundera, but despite Kundera's weird way of talking to the audience he usually has something to say. All the writer of this thing has to say is "Look at me! I'm writing a novel! Isn't that the coolest thing!"
And in a roomful of his best friends, sure. But since there are dozens of novels coming out every month, it's just wearisome for someone looking to read one of those novels for the purposes of entertainment and not the validation of a Creative Writing Masters degree.
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5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Barkan's Promise, May 21, 2008
This review is from: Blind Speed: A Novel (Hardcover)
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Reading the book cover summary, I was intrigued that the novel starts off with the protagonist's fiancee getting shot at a Revolutionary War reenactment. It's difficult to think of something more absurd and the novel repeatedly looks at simulations of real events, like ecoterrorism and tourist traps. Baudrillard would love this novel and someone could do a great essay of the simulacra in Blind Speed.
I was though at the same time initially put off by the comparison to Delilio and Saunders, since such comparisons are too often thrown out there to sell an author that bears little resemblance to either. However, Barkan does owe something to White Noise, Blind Speed makes several great reflections about modern life in the mall food court and elsewhere, much like Delilio. Also the protagonist Paul, reminds me a little of Jack in White Noise. Saunders is at work here as well. I thought of his Civilwarland in Bad Decline.
I was initially put off with the author or at least a narrator intruding into the store, ending chapters with random facts, but after awhile I enjoyed his crisis of a chapter not working out or giving two different speeches at Paul's would be astronaut brother's funeral. This is a postmodern novel, which may be a turn off for readers who want some kind of thriller. Paul is an anti-hero, his life repeatedly seems to hit a low point and still manages to get worse. Many things like his relationship with Zoe get some resolution by the end of the novel, though I thought the ending faded too easily.
This was one the better novels I've read in the last few months and I look forward to Barkan's future work.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Funny, intimate, dark..., May 13, 2008
This review is from: Blind Speed: A Novel (Hardcover)
I finished "Blind Speed" a few weeks ago and I am still thinking about it, which is a sure sign of a good novel -- the ability to reverberate with the reader long after it's been put down.
Maybe it's because Paul Berger is such a loser, but a relatable one, an articulate, thoughtful, smart loser who is plagued by insecurity, and a paralyzing mixture of cowardice and laziness. He is surrounded by people who possess at least one characteristic he does not have: his brother Cyrus with his ambition, his girlfriend Zoe, the good looking optimist, the modern Cyrano (my favorite character) with his talent and ease, the Buffalo Man with his wisdom and practicality...
I don't think anyone can help but see a little of Paul Berger in themselves because his failings seem so genuine and his fears, honest. The writing itself is very forthright, pared down and light.
Barkan does put in author POV snippets at the end of each chapter which at first confused me, but later I started looking forward to them because they were intimate and serious--a nice contrast to the comedic plotline.
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