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Breaking Deluce [Kindle Edition]

Chad Campbell
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Book Description

The Deluce family name was once a name that struck fear into the cold heart of evil, then one day they just disappeared without a trace no one knew how or why.
Mona Deluce has no clue about her family's ancient history. She only cares about one thing, getting good grades. Her whole life changes when two mysterious boys arrive at school, she falls for one while the other accidentally reveals her secret. Now an ancient evil wants to finish what it started so many centuries ago unless Mona can show them why they once called the Deluce's the lights of god.

Product Details

  • File Size: 172 KB
  • Print Length: 35 pages
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Publisher: Conceptualize Publishing; 1 edition (September 17, 2012)
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B009CNQOA6
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Word Wise: Not Enabled
  • Lending: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,266,422 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Pleasantly Surprised October 15, 2012
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This short story is a relatively easy read, and the raw idea behind it is pretty interesting. Jason and Damon serve as two excellent foils to each other with the choices they make and how they affect Mona's life, but that is not to say Mona has no say in her own life! It took a little time for me to warm up to the plot, but I am waiting for the next installment to answer all the questions surrounding Mona and the boys.
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4.0 out of 5 stars A quick, fun read for the coming holiday season October 13, 2012
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Breaking Deluce has a story as fascinating as its cover. The young woman depicted there in a determined pose, cutting off her hair with her long sword, is Mona, a go-getting overachiever in HS, whose typical teenage ambitions are sidetracked when two mystery boys arrived at her school. The enigmatic Jason and the charming Damon turn Mona's world topsy-turvy as she is taken out of her mundane high school environment and thrown into a world of evil imps, dangerous doctors and demon blood in a quest to uncover the truth behind the two boys and herself.
A fast-paced fantasy which delivers everything you might want from a tale, Breaking Deluce by Chad Campbell has captivating characters, alluring puzzles, and heart-pounding action. After 40 pages of this artfully created world by Mr. Campbell, you are left wanting more!
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5.0 out of 5 stars An exciting and thrilling fantasy story! October 12, 2012
By bri756
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The novel Breaking Deluce is a captivating fantasy book that begs the reader to continue turning the page, diving deeper into the created world. Mona, a smart and goal-oriented high school student, is thrown for a loop by the arrival of the mysterious Jason and the attractive Damon. The two boys signal the arrival of absolute chaos into Mona's world, as she's forced to battle vicious imps, evil doctors, and other enemies to discover the secret behind the two boys and herself.

Breaking Deluce is a story that you won't regret reading. The dynamic characters, intriguing mystery, and non-stop action is sure to keep you coming back for more. Breaking Deluce comes highly recommended!
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5.0 out of 5 stars I Want More! October 12, 2012
By Linda
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This is an engaging and fun to read novella that I hope is setting the stage for a full-length book or even a series of books. It has a young adult feel, but I am many years removed from that age category and found the story highly entertaining. High school senior Mona thinks she is an ordinary young woman, but the extraordinary arrival of Jason and Damon reveal her to be a key player in a paranormal struggle between good and evil. The characters are well-defined; I felt sympathy for all of them even when they were at odds with one another and I really want to know what happens next to them. I am really looking forward to further work from this author.
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3.0 out of 5 stars good read October 11, 2012
By Jaggers
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This was a good read but appeared to be written for a young(teen?) reader. I got the feeling I was reading an anime story. Vivid details and potential romance kept things moving. A tale this short begs to be expanded and the good and evil potentials need to be explored.
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2 of 3 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars A Riveting Read! October 22, 2012
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Readers of Breaking Deluce will be enthralled by this vivid novel about a young teen named Mona Deluce. Her life is changed forever when confronted by two new students, Jason and Damon. Mona's character has many layers which slowly get revealed as the story unfolds. Chad Campell's Breaking Deluce, is sci-fi at its best. I enjoyed the action, suspense and the cliff-hanger ending. I also liked the progression from Mona's normal high school life to an intense drama involving evil doctors and imps. The added romance element makes this story multi dimensioned and appealing. Grab a cup of coffee or a glass of wine, and settle down with this short novel.
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By jcat
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Somewhat interesting, as far as it went. From the ending, it appears that it will be continued. This was not pegged as YA, but seems to be geared towards that audience.

Not much for romance, but already seems to have a love triangle. Beginning was a little slow, but the rest contained a good amount of rather bloody action. I found it hysterical that the Heroine Mona never blinked twice when, out of the blue, she was attacked by Imps. Then I wondered how in the world the girl KNEW that they were Imps? And when she used the Internet to look up how to kill Imps--it was just too funny. I doubt that it was meant to be, though. Maybe I just have an strange sense of humor.

Would I read more? Possibly, since the idea for the story seems promising. Maybe it would have impressed me more if it had been a longer book with more background and world building. As is, it was just OK for me.
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3.0 out of 5 stars Incomplete July 14, 2013
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I guess the peril of downloading free books is sometimes they aren't full books.
This was an ok story. Felt like a high schooler had written it. Decent story line though. Would like to see it fully developed.
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Most Recent Customer Reviews
2.0 out of 5 stars A Start, Not A Story
This isn't a story, but an overlong introduction to a story. Mona Deluce is a Mary Sue heroine, someone everyone seems intent on either killing or protecting simply because she... Read more
Published 19 months ago by T. Weber
5.0 out of 5 stars Awesome Teen Fantasy Novel
A young-adult novel dealing with fantasy, romance elements, Breaking Deluce follows the story of Mona Deluce, an academic achiever, who suddenly takes an interest for the... Read more
Published on October 20, 2012 by E. Lucio
5.0 out of 5 stars Fast-moving and thrilling
Breaking Deluce is a short novel centered around the relationship of Mona Deluce with two new boys in her school. Read more
Published on October 18, 2012 by Cris Fitz
5.0 out of 5 stars Book with Romance and Suspense
I usually do not like reading. However, someone suggested me to read this book. Initially when i started reading this book i felt a bit bored. Read more
Published on October 17, 2012 by Sumankumar
5.0 out of 5 stars Awesome read! A definite page-turner
I was very pleasantly surprised with how easily I got into the story. This was a good, short read, something that can be finished in a couple of hours. Read more
Published on October 17, 2012 by Kimberly Dickerson
5.0 out of 5 stars This Book Rocks!
Breaking Deluce is an absorbing and enjoyable read. When you first meet Mona, she's very self-contained and focused on her schooling and future. Read more
Published on October 15, 2012 by magnus
5.0 out of 5 stars Exciting and interesting fantasy/romance
Breaking Deluce is a well written fantasy book targeting younger readers. The main character is Mona a high-school student and her two new classmates Jason and Damon. Read more
Published on October 15, 2012 by Faragó Barna
5.0 out of 5 stars A Fascinating Novella
"Breaking Deluce" is a fascinating, fast paced story which combines a very realistic, practical teenage heroine with paranormal problems. Read more
Published on October 15, 2012 by Lindor
5.0 out of 5 stars Please make a sequel
It is exciting and engaging. Reading the book kept me on the edge of my seat. The more pages I turn, the more I want to know more. Read more
Published on October 13, 2012 by ktorres
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Hi, I am Chad Campbell. I live in Seattle, WA. I love reading, writing and playing sports. I started writing after I decided that dealing poker wasn't for me. I really hope people enjoy my stories and they open up your imaginations to the possibilities of the world.

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