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Breaking the Girl and Eager to Please: Two Erotic Novels of Submission

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What I liked most about this one was the fact that is two erotic bdsm novels in one. Up first is "Breaking the Girl" and, as I read it, I kept thinking how this is the kind of erotica I've been looking for forever. I think I might have fallen in love with Frank and the New Orleans setting was so romantic. Anyway, the story is a fantastic love story that involves games, some of which get darker and more dangerous as they go along. I think I read this one so fast, I wanted to read it again.

But then I moved on to the next story, "Eager to Please" and this one, too, blew me away. What I liked was that it wasn't a cardboard cutout of the first novel and was quite different as far as plot goes. I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see how the characters get together. Without spilling the plot, let me just say it was worth it.

All in all, this is a volume that I will keep for some time. I was just glad to have finally found a book that delivered on its promises--interesting characters, interesting stories and lots of hot sex.

This is one of the most erotic and sensual books I've read. Actually it's two books - but they're both hot!! While these books are both erotic they both go beyond that. They're both really well-written.And they're really romantic. I'm really glad that I found this two book collection.

This collection of erotica is mainly about submission. The first novel was my favorite, Breaking the Girl, and I really got into the story, the games the characters played before the final sumit. The ending was spectacular! The second is a different sort of submission tale and it's really takes the reader to places they haven't been--which reads very, very well. These two are perfect for anyone who loves the bdsm erotica genre, and wants to read some really good stuff.

I LOVE this book! It's got the best erotic submission scenes in it. It's got romance and drama, too. I am so glad I found it.

Breaking the Girl and Eager to Please are two of the hottest and most romantic BDSM books I have ever read. The writing is great and the characters are awesome! LOVED IT!

First erotica I've ever read. Read it out-load to my s/o during a 23 hour road trip - kept us both awake and well made us search for a deserted exit. It could have had a bit more BDSM, but there was enough to make it interesting.

This book contains 2 stories that have nothing to do with true submission or erotic storytelling.

Breaking the Girl has an exciting title, but really this is an abusive relationship. There is at no time an agreement or bond made to suggest that this couple has entered into a D/S relationship. In one scene, he beats her with a belt because she had a party in his house. She is so afraid of him that she runs away, falls down the stairs and becomes truly injured. Another time, he slaps her across the face. These are not true elements of that type of relationship. In the end she decides that all he was trying to do was break the wall she had put up so that she could love him.

Eager to Please starts out ok, with our female lead marrying a gay man so that he can keep his standing within his family, etc. You just know that will be ripe with trouble, but then it goes astray. She goes away with a friend and is kidnapped. She of course, falls for her kidnapper, blah blah blah. Again, there is nothing except her early admission to herself that she is a people pleaser that indicates she is willing to submit to this man who has kidnapped her.

These stories are poorly executed and should not be lumped into the BDSM category. They are only slightly erotic and the sex scenes are ho hum. This was a disappointmnet and I wish I hadn't spent the money.

This two in one book does have some exciting scenes in them but I have to admit. I found them a tiny bit on the tame side. Not sure if that says more about the author or myself...