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3.0 out of 5 stars
Too many cliches, not enough heat, July 26, 2009
This could have been a great book were it not for some really silly things in it which got in the way of it working well as either a suspense or a romance.
First we get way too much background on the hero Dallas at the present time, and not enough on the way he and Julianne first met.
Second, all of the mental lusting after her gets in the way of everything, plot, setting, character (he comes off as a badly behaved hormonal teen). She comes off as the ice princess for most of the book, and the thaw is never really that believable. Nor is the fact that the 'playboy of the armed forces' doesn't have a condom for most of the book, so they don't 'make love' til page 309?? I put that phrase in quotes because the scene is so bad and over so fast, wham bam sounds slow by comparison.
Then we have Wiccans/pagans in the armed forces, not developed, just a throwaway, and the suspense and any sort of danger or thrills in about the last 30 pages with the kidnap of, well, you will be able to guess from the endless details about Julianne's sexy dress from the start of the book.
I am giving it 3 stars because there are some people who like armed forces-type action romances, who will find this a good beach read, but to me it just read like a lot of slang and alphabet soup of acronyms and insults. But in terms of romance, there is so much sizzle at the start, it is bound to fizzle, and in terms of the suspense, it is just too uneven throughout the book.
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7 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Breakpoint will keep you on your toes, July 13, 2009
JoAnn Ross continues her pulse pounding High Risk series with Breakpoint.
Tech Sergeant Dallas O'Halloran is loyal do his family and friends. He gets assigned to a new unit and is paired up with the one woman who tried to send his teammates to prison.
For former JAG officer Julianne Decatur her life is strictly black and white with no gray areas on what is right and wrong. She isn't too happy either to be paired with Dallas O'Halloran but she is a professional and can per her feelings aside for the investigation.
Dallas and Julianne are assigned to investigate a possible suicide aboard a naval carrier. Once aboard things are not what they seem. The suicide turns out to be murder and someone is willing to silence anyone that gets in their way.
As they investigate the murder their attraction to each other takes them both by surprise. But can their love survive is someone is out to kill them and those that they love?
JoAnn Ross's High Risk series will keep you enthralled from the very first page. This is a fast paced, delightful sexy story. The military part is intriguing and will keep you guessing who all is involved. The chemistry between Julianne and Dallas will knock your socks off. I am anxiously looking forward to this authors next book.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
One eyeroll after another..., December 14, 2009
I love the first three books in this series.
And this book had such great promise...is this going to be another "Tailhook" scandal? Did the female "top gun" commit suicide or was she murdered? Based on the genre you know it was murder.
But this book really never has any heat/focus/continuity. The first half of the book is reviewing past interactions of the hero and heroine. It has a weird sidebar with the heroine's very pregnant (with twins) sister (who becomes a poor plot device in the end - eyeroll). But the time the H/H get on the boat you think "finally we're going to get to the mystery". Again, no. In the end with no real investigation, the hero works out the mystery with GEOMETRY! (eyeroll)
Here are some of the other eyerolls:
1) NCIS doesn't investigate this murder/suicide - they are mentioned many times but NO! there is a new gov't agency (THOR) investigate.
2) Why does the 1st guy they talk to commits suicide? It was never made clear what his part of this scandal/cover up was.
3) Paganism as a "major" religion on this this boat. Who cares - it wasn't germane to the plot.
4) The pregnant sister.
5) Security cameras that never get investigated.
I could go on but you get the point. Oh one more...after 4 books shouldn't we know a bit more about Phoenix Team? Who started it? Why? What's their mission (because it seems to be all over the board)?
Here's hoping the next book in the series will be more focused.
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