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40 of 42 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Average thriller, February 27, 2010
Steve Vail is an ex FBI agent, a maverick who didn't like authority. Now he is a bricklayer (hey, that would make a great nickname for him should he choose to get back into the Bureau!...)
The FBI have a problem, their agents are being killed and money is being demanded to make the killings stop. The FBI need someone who is an expert at tracking people, so Deputy Director Kate Bannon is despatched to bring Vail back into the fold..
Cue the FBI being dumb, Vail being very clever, the bad guys being very nasty, some romantic banter between Vail and Bannon and....it all felt a bit forced and a little bit too obvious. Yep, it's fast paced and not `bad' but it does nothing to lift it above the average.
The publishers desperately want this to be the new "Jack Reacher" with a clever loner who does his own thing and come up trumps. But the writing does not match that of Lee Child and Vail is two one dimensional and, just not interesting enough.
So this is okay and I am sure there will be more in the series, but the author needs to settle down a bit and become more comfortable with his set of characters and how to use them.
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60 of 73 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Outstanding - A Thrilling Story From Start To Finish, January 11, 2010
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The Bricklayer is the outstanding debut novel of Noah Boyd. Steve Vail aka the Bricklayer is a former FBI agent, who had a problem with bureaucracy and chose to be fired than let a cop killer go free. Although his present occupation is that of a brick layer, he is soon called upon when the FBI has exhausted it's resources on a case.
It's been a while since I have read anything closely related to a crime novel. I gave up on them a few years ago because it seemed like they were all the same. So, when I got a chance to review this book, I almost passed because it was about crime and the FBI. I'm sure glad I decided to give it a chance. Steve Vail, the bad boy of the book is a really enjoyable guy, as long as you enjoy someone who has no respect for authority, and does things his own way. I found the character of Steve to be enjoyable. He's the type of guy you can have a beer and watch a game with. The relationship between Steve and Kate, his temporary FBI handler is one of mutual respect and admiration, as well as sexual overtones. The author provides an excellent storyline to showcase Steve's special character traits.
The story is fun, exciting, and nonstop from the very beginning. I read the book within a few days, and found it hard to put down. I can't even comment on the literary skills of the author because the story was so good I didn't pay much attention to things like punctuation. The Bricklayer has made me a fan of Noah Boyd, and I look forward to reading a lot more about Steve Vail in future books.
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13 of 15 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Move over Jack Reacher and Andy Carpenter! New Hero, Steve Vail has Arrived with Vengeance!, December 26, 2009
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Noah Boyd's thrilling 390-page novel "The Brick Layer" is spellbinding and destined to be a best seller. After reading just a few pages I was hooked and could not put it down. I found myself completely enthralled, flipping pages and hypnotized by this fast paced superbly written novel.
No doubt, Steve Vail is a new character that will be the center of many more exciting suspense novels to come. An ex-FBI agent turned bricklayer, his reputation for being able to find anyone is second only to his legendary inability to trust authority.
Someone naming their self or selves Rubaco Pentrad -maybe 5 domestic terrorists connected with the FBI's involvement with the Ruby Ridge and Waco incidents--who seem to have both an affinity and aversion to the FBI is killing well-known people in California, Utah, Pennsylvania and demanding cash while warning the FBI that any disclosure on their part of the activities will result in more murders and greater cash demands. The person or group may be getting inside information from the FBI or be the work of a rogue agent or worse.
At wits end, the FBI uses newly promoted, attractive and persuasive Assistant Deputy Director Kate Bannon to seek out the services of rebellious Steve Vail and his unique abilities. Reluctantly accepting Kate's offer Steve Vail puts his talents in motion as the plot twists, turns and thickens while millions of dollars exchange hands and the body counts mount.
This author's skill at keeping the reader on the edge of the chair furiously flipping action packed pages is worthy of far greater than 5 stars. It is a rare find that I thoroughly enjoyed and recommend.
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