The Bride's Thank-You Note Handbook [Paperback]

Marilyn Werner (Author)

Book Description

Publication Date: October 10, 1985

Wedding etiquette requires that brides promptly acknowledge all gifts with a handwritten thankyou note. In this newly revised edition of her classic guide, Marilyn Werner provides brides and brides-to-be with a wealth of notes for every kind of gift and gift-giver to speed and simplify the thank-you note process. This one-of-a-kind hand-book is an invaluable source for: * Stationery and gift lists * Advice on establishing a routine * Guidelines for appropriate tone, openings and closings * Sample thank-you notes for typical gifts, special situations, and special people, arranged alphabetically by gift. The model letters can be used as they are, altered to fit individual needs, or referred to as examples. Werner does not only offer an effortless, entertaining, and knowing course in poise, she also provides the new bride with what is perhaps the very best gift of all -- a super time-saving aid during a very busy and exciting time in her life.

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Marilyn Werner is a writer who lives in New York.

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CHAPTER ONE

Getting Started

AN EFFICIENT ROUTINE

Try to establish some kind of routine for writing your thank-you notes. Set aside a specific time each day for this purpose, and within that period try to write at least four or live so they don't pile up.

Reserve a particular place to write your thank-you notes; a place where you are not apt to be disturbed or distracted. Keep your gift cards, stationery, gift lists, pen, dictionary, and stamps at that spot.

THE GIFT CARDS

Save the gift cards that are enclosed with the gifts. After you have read them keep them together in a box, or bound securely with a rubber band. When you write your notes, refer to these gift cards, for they often express lovely and touching sentiments that are as worthy of acknowledgment as the gifts themselves.

THE STATIONERY

Thank-you notes should always be hand-written on good quality stationery. Plain folded note paper in white or ecru is most popular, but pastel shades, with simple borders or lined envelopes are acceptable.

The bride's monogram, either engraved or printed, may be used for notes written after the wedding date.

The appearance of your thank-you note is important, so use your best handwriting. Leave some margin on both sides of the paper, and see to it that there is as much blank space at the top of the paper as there is at the bottom. If the note is badly smudged or if you have crossed out a word, it is better to rewrite the note.

When you have finished your note, read it aloud to make sure that you have not omitted or misspelled any words. This is the surest way of catching and correcting any careless errors.

When mailing your thank-you notes insert the note in the envelope so that when it is removed the writing will be right-side-up and can be read without inverting the paper. Moisten, do not tuck in, the flap of the envelope.

THE STRUCTURE OF A THANK-YOU NOTE

A thank-you note consists of four parts: a salutation, a body, a complimentary closing, and a signature. The date is included above the salutation in the upper right-hand corner of the paper.

The salutation usually begins with "Dear" and always ends with a comma (not a colon). When the gift is sent by a married couple the thank-you note may be addressed to either "Mr. and Mrs." or to the wife only. In the latter case, however, you should make sure to mention the husband within the body of the note.

You may wonder how to address the groom's relatives, some of whom you may not even have met. Although you may feel inclined to address them as Mr. and Mrs., you should remember that they are now (or are going to be) your relatives too. They should, therefore, be addressed, for instance, as Aunt and Uncle. In most cases, you will probably see them at some later date and call them Aunt and Uncle anyhow.

The body is the main portion of the note, in which you will convey your thanks. Try to make your note as personal and individual as possible. You can do this by mentioning the gift by name and by saying something about its usefulness or appearance. If the gift is a check, describe how you have used it (or plan to use it) or what you have purchased with it. Sometimes, too, you will want to say something to the effect that you are looking forward to seeing the people in your new home, where the gift they have given you will occupy a very special place.

Do not confuse enthusiasm with over-effusiveness, or warm feeling with over-sentimentality. Expressions like "heartfelt thanks," "forever and ever," "the most tremendous," and "in seventh heaven" should be avoided. Warmth of feeling and enthusiasm can be expressed in fresher and usually more restrained ways.

Note the differences in the following three notes. The last one is clearly the best because it is the warmest and most personal.

NOT ACCEPTABLE

Dear Janis and Dave,
Thank you so much for your beautiful gift. We appreciate it.
Love,
Marilyn

ACCEPTABLE

Dear Janis and Dave,
Thank you so much for your beautiful linen set. We will be the envy of all our friends when we invite them to dinner. We appreciate it very much.
Love,
Marilyn

PERFECT

Dear Janis and Dave,
Thank you so much for your linen set. It is so beautiful that we plan to use it only on special occasions, one of which will be an evening with you -- we hope in the near future.
Love,
Marilyn

The complimentary closing will depend on your relationship with the people to whom you are writing. With close friends and relatives, "love," fondly," affectionately" are quite acceptable. When the ties are not so close, you might choose to close with "sincerely" or "gratefully." "Sincerely yours" and "yours truly" area bit too formal.

The signature consists of the bride's name only, never that of both the bride and the groom. If your note is addressed to people who have always known you by your first name, sign your first name only. To people who do not know you well, sign with your maiden name (e. g. Marilyn Maiden Name) before the wedding and with your married name (e. g. Marilyn Married Name) after the wedding. In cases where a more explicit identification is necessary, you may use your maiden and married names (e. g. Marilyn [Maiden] Married Name), hut only after the wedding.

A sample thank-you note, with each part labeled, follows:

June 16, 19....(1)
Dear Mrs. Jones, (2)
Both you and Mr. Jones have been so marvelous to us during these last hectic months that we don't know how to thank you. Now, with the arrival of your magnificent silver fruit bowl, we are doubly indebted to you. Thank you so very much for everything. (3)
Fondly, (4)
Marilyn (5)

(1) Date
(2) Salutation
(3) Body
(4) Complimentary Closing
(5) Signature

THE GIFT ACKNOWLEDGMENT

Make every effort to write your thank-you note as soon as possible after receiving the gift. If, however, you anticipate a long delay, either because of the number of gifts that you have received or because of the myriad details associated with the wedding, you may do one of two things:

First, you may acknowledge the gift verbally by calling to thank the person who has given it to you or by thanking him in person. If the giver is your fiancé's (or husband's) friend, your fiancé may convey your thanks, adding that you plan to send a note in the near future. If the person is a friend of your parents or in-laws, they may say that you have received the gift and intend to send a personal note shortly.

Second, you may acknowledge the receipt of the gift by sending out an engraved card acknowledging that you have received the gift and plan to write a personal thankyou note in the near future. An example of such an acknowledgment is given below:

Miss Maiden Name
or
Mrs. Married Name
acknowledges that she has received
your gift and will write you a note
of thanks as soon as she is able.

There are two disadvantages to this procedure. It is, of course, an extra expense, and it seems to suggest a really special personal thank-you note to come. A few short lines at the outset can save lots of time and effort in the end.

It should be emphasized that oral thank-yous and printed acknowledgments are no substitutes for a handwritten thank-you note. Their only purpose is to provide the time for you to write the thank-you note and to give immediate assurance to the givers that their presents have not gone astray.

THE GIFT LISTS

Don't trust to your memory to help you keep track of all the gifts you have received and the people who have given them to you. Before you know it, you'll be playing the frustrating and time-consuming game called "Who gave me what?"

GIFT LIST FOR GROOM'S SIDE
(Copy to be given to mother-in-law)
Name Address Gift
Mary Bently 20 Stone Dr. iron
Orange, N.J.
Phebe Richards 10 E. 19 St. nightgown
N.Y.C.
Mr. and Mrs. 14 S. Lake Dr. glass fruit
S. Harding Scarsdale, N.Y. bowl
Mr. and Mrs. 12 W. 78 St. stack
Bart Lions N.Y.C. tables
Mr. and Mrs. 6 Hyde St. silver
T. Howell Chicago, Ill. tray
Mr. and Mrs. 6 Belmont Dr. $50.00 gift
Jack Cloud L.A., Calif. certificate
Mr. and Mrs. 34 Olive St. casserole
John Stone Bronx, N.Y. dish
Edward Thompson 158 N. Glen Rd. toaster
Belmont, N. Y.

The surest way to remember who gave you what is to keep lists. They should be kept in a notebook or on a pad, not on little scraps of paper that are easily lost.

The first list will be for gifts received from your side of the family. The second list is for gifts received from the groom's side. When this list has been completed, your mother-in-law will appreciate a copy so she will know what gifts you have received from her friends and family. She may use this list (as you may too) as a reference if she has to send a gift in the future.

Occasion Gift Gift Where
Received Arrived Acknowledged Bought
shower 5/26 5/28 Gimbels
(Joyce's)
shower 5/26 5/28 Saks
(Barbara's)
engagement 6/3 6/7 Bloomingdale's
(Aunt Em's)
engagement 6/12 6/15 B. Altman
wedding 6/20 6/22 Saks
wedding 6/22 6/25 Tiffany
wedding 6/23 6/28 Macy's
wedding 6/28 7/3 Sears

The list may be quite simple, consisting of three columns:

1. Sender's name
2. Sender's address
3. Gift

If you choose a more elaborate list (See Page 9.) you may add:

4. Occasion gift given (This will remind you whether it was for a party, shower, engagement party, or the wedding.)
5. Date gift received (This will enable you to thank people in the order the gifts arrive.)
6. Gift acknowledged (This will be your assurance that you did indeed send a thank-you note.)
7. Store where gift purchased (This information will be necessary if you want to return or exchange the gift.)

A WORD TO THE WISE

A written thank-you note does not pledge you to a conspiracy of silence when you see the people who have given you a gift. You and the groom should thank the people in person when you see them. If they are guests at your home, try to use their gift or display it.

Copyright © 1968, 1985 by Marilyn Werner

Product Details

• Paperback: 72 pages
• Publisher: Touchstone; Revised edition (October 10, 1985)
• Language: English
• ISBN-10: 0671606190
• ISBN-13: 978-0671606190
• Product Dimensions: 7.3 x 5 x 0.2 inches
• Shipping Weight: 3.2 ounces
• Average Customer Review: 2.5 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (10 customer reviews)
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20 of 20 people found the following review helpful:

1.0 out of 5 stars Out dated!!!, July 23, 1999

By A Customer

This review is from: The Bride's Thank-You Note Handbook (Paperback)

I bought this book yesterday, thinking I would be all set in time for sending out my thank you notes for wedding gifts. Tonight I plan on going back to the bookstore and getting my money back.

Originally published in 1968, it should have been kept there. The language is severely outdated, and never in my life have I used the word "gay" to describe anything at all....but the author does....in many many examples in the book.

I am horrible at thinking of things to say in thank you notes, but I could do a better job than this. Thank God I kept my receipt.

14 of 15 people found the following review helpful:

1.0 out of 5 stars Marilyn Werner: Thanks?, June 14, 1999

By A Customer

This review is from: The Bride's Thank-You Note Handbook (Paperback)

To the obsessive compulsive shopper who dares not to take the time to view a books' contents, this will be an $ 7.95 plus tax lesson in irresponsible publishing. Marilyn Werner has the audacity to think that any of her thank you writing suggestions would be, at best, acceptable to a bride's worst enemy. There is no better way to validate a review than to quote the author herself . This is a thank you suggestion for receiving a desk set. "For the past few weeks we have been opening so many gifts of linen, crockery, and "frillery" that George's interest has started to wander. Then along came your handsome desk set. You've selected a gift that appeals so much to both of us." YOU be the judge.

6 of 6 people found the following review helpful:

4.0 out of 5 stars Quite useful if adapted properly, November 13, 2000

By A Customer

This review is from: The Bride's Thank-You Note Handbook (Paperback)

I found this book quite useful. Although some of the sample thank you notes are a bit over the top, they can be adapted beautifully. I am not given to gushing, but a thank you note requires an enthusiastic response. Additionally, the thank you note for a check is worth the cost of the entire book. All in all, with a little personal adaptation, this book is a gem!