Most Helpful Customer Reviews
46 of 49 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Great idea, but plot & characters underdeveloped, May 2, 2006
This review is from: The Brief History of the Dead: A novel (Hardcover)
Like many who have reacted to this novel, the first chapter knocked me out. I had already read two disparate critiques in newspapers of the book that led me to seek the book out, so I knew that after the opening the initial thrill might not sustain itself. This hesitation was, after I read the novel straight through in two sittings, shown to be true. The long polar trek of Laura does borrow from the well-titled "The Worst Journey in the World," but I found these sections, after a while, rather pat and uninvolving most of the time. It's difficult to stay interested in Laura's predicament after a while, with nobody else for her to talk to or to keep us alert. She has not led that exciting a life for her to have a lot of recollections to fall back upon that make her any more than ordinary. And, in a novel, we don't want to be stuck with the mundane girl-next-door as a protagonist, even if she is in dire straits in a terrible place. The scene-setting of the first cabin and her growing peril sets up this phase of the narrative promisingly, but once she's out on the ice the plot holds no surprises. Like her, we get drowsy in this lonely stretch of the novel.
As for the city-in-limbo, it was puzzling if, as seemed to be confirmed in the Coke executive's reverie, the city increasingly was "populated" not only by the people Laura was thinking of, but that Laura "generated" everything else in the city rather than what the inhabitants themselves did in the city. It seems that the people in the city limited what could and could not be done in the city, as their occupations seem to constrain what the city contained--not only the people, but objects. There are no salting trucks to melt the snow because Laura knew no salting truck driver: all of this background needed more clarification. Also, the reciprocation of thinking by those in the city as felt by Laura was too glossed over and marginal in the narrative that indirectly occured from her p-o-v.
Many of those found in the city proved remarkably dull: Minny, for example, considering the time spent on her by the author. The walking preacher character was necessary to show a religious fanatic's reaction to the city, but again, he failed to keep my interest. The whole place seemed more like a Edward Hopper painting of sorry urbanites rather than a place where food was cooked, papers were sold, and business seemed to go on much as before. There's a noirish air to the whole place, but it seemed less appealing than its inhabitants seemed to consider their residence. I guess there's no alternative! However, as the Antarctic marbles signal a climactic phase of the story, Brockmeier recovered his initial control of the novel and it came to a satisfactory and well-written closing.
Like so much SF and speculative literature, this would have worked better as a novella of 100 pages. At 250 pp., there's too much padding, and most of the supporting characters do not motivate the reader to want to pause and ponder their predicament. With these sorts of apocalyptic fables, it often remains a challenge for writers to keep the characterization gripping as the amount of people diminish in the bleak setting, but I still would recommend this book for, as with so much SF again, the fantastic world-view that it shares and elaborates.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
90 of 101 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Brockmeier is the real deal!, March 11, 2006
This review is from: The Brief History of the Dead: A novel (Hardcover)
With the publishing industry fixating on the next DaVinci Code, alphabetical mysteries, and serial killers, it's a treat to find a truly original young writer. And Brockmeier is no flash in the pan, either; He's won the O. Henry Award, the Nelson Algren Award, An Italo Calvino Short Fiction Award and a National Endowment for the Arts fellowship.
I would imagine some readers thought Brockmeier was riding on the coattails of the LOVELY BONES, but that's just not the case. Brockmeier doles out equal portions of pessimism and optimism, and just when you think you've got this pitcher figured out he throws you a knuckleball.
The novel alternates between the adventures of Laura Byrd, a Coca Cola researcher stranded in the Antarctic, and the City of the Dead. The earth has been decimated by a virus called "The Blinks." Brockmeier's notion of an afterlife is a way station where people must stay until people whom they have known on earth have also died. Over half of them have known Laura Byrd.
The people who live in the City of the Dead are not ghosts. They will remind you of your next-door neighbors. They get up, have breakfast, and go to work, just like normal people. They appear to have corporal bodies. One of the characters, the Blind Man, wonders about this. He has a theory about the difference between the spirit and the soul. He believes the spirit connects the body and the soul, and that when the spirit dies, we move on to the next life.
Parts of the novel are definitely satirical. There's a Coca Cola executive who's still trying to cover-up Coca Cola's connection to the Blinks for one thing. It can also be funny as when one of the new arrivals, an avowed atheist, is thrilled that he was wrong. But was he? Brockmeier never really lets the reader gain a firm footing.
Brockmeier is smart enough to alternate between Laura story and the City of the Dead. Without Laura the novel might lose its credibility. When Laura strikes out on her "sledge" to find her co-researchers, Puckett and Joyce, we're hoping one of them is alive and immune and maybe Laura will start a new civilization. At least I was. But maybe that's the incurable romantic in me.
Some will find the ending a bit disappointing. It was metaphysical to say the least. It reminded me a lot of the ending in 2001 Space Odyssey. But I remember watching that movie with my dad, a farmer with his feet planted firmly on the ground, and he was just as transfixed as I was. You will be, too, if you give THE BRIEF HISTORY OF THE DEAD a chance.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
55 of 63 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Read it!, March 4, 2006
This review is from: The Brief History of the Dead: A novel (Hardcover)
"The Brief History of the Dead" is by no means a perfect book, but it IS original, thought-provoking, gorgeously written and, ultimately, very moving. Kevin Brockmeier has taken some huge risks in attempting this very complex novel and, for the most part, they pay off. At first, I thought the first part of the book "telegraphed" too much of what would happen in the second half, but I was wrong. I was riveted, waiting to find out exactly how the two parts of the story would converge, and along the way to a very satisfying conclusion, I laughed, I cried, I was frightened, and I thought a great deal. I recommend it highly.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
|
Editors' Pick: Chosen as one of the 
