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6 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
"I represented the people society pushed aside.", August 5, 2006
This review is from: Bye-Bye, Black Sheep: A Mommy-track Mystery (Mommy-Track Mysteries) (Hardcover)
In Ayelet Waldman's latest novel, "Bye-Bye Black Sheep," Juliet Applebaum, busy mother and part-time sleuth, tackles the case of a twenty-four year old murdered drug addict and prostitute named Violetta Spees. Juliet's client is Heavenly, who used to be a man before he decided to become a woman. Heavenly, the victim's sister, is incensed that the police failed to conduct a thorough investigation into Violetta's death.
Although Juliet has her hands full taking care of her children, she is a sucker for a sob story, and she decides to take the case. In the course of her investigation, Juliet interviews Violetta's relatives, her fellow hookers, and a pair of pimps. She ventures out alone into seedy neighborhoods and, much to the displeasure of her partner Al and her husband, Peter, Juliet endangers her life in order to unmask Violetta's killer.
"Bye-Bye Black Sheep" is the seventh and weakest of the Mommy Track Mysteries. The laughs are few and far between, the plot is both sordid and far-fetched, and Juliet's antics have by now become old hat. Of course, she will ignore common sense and put herself at risk in spite of the fact that she has three kids who depend on her, including a baby who is still nursing. There is no light touch this time around. In fact, Waldman gets on her soapbox repeatedly, with a number of preachy paragraphs devoted to the challenges of being a mother and the inequities of America's criminal justice system. What made her mysteries so delightful in the past was the author's ability to write engrossing and entertaining stories with wit, humor, and a touch of satire. "Bye-Bye Black Sheep" is just the opposite: heavy-handed, dark, and dull, a real downer.
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Preach, Preach Author, March 25, 2007
This review is from: Bye-Bye, Black Sheep: A Mommy-track Mystery (Mommy-Track Mysteries) (Hardcover)
I liked the story but the rants against society are what made this my last Ayelet Waldman book. I read one other and noticed ranting there but liked the storyline I decided to give her another try. I won't do that again.
The story with Heavenly was interesting and I don't mind the ambiguous ending. However when it gets to the point that I can skip an entire page of the author's opinions and not miss any story it's a bit much.
It's a shame, the author is a good writer, knows how to pace a story and can create interesting characters. I wanted to like this series. Unfortunately she takes away from all that she has going for her with the character rants.
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5 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
She's Getting Better, But..., September 30, 2006
This review is from: Bye-Bye, Black Sheep: A Mommy-track Mystery (Mommy-Track Mysteries) (Hardcover)
I really, really liked this -- the latest entry in Waldman's "Mommy Track" mystery series. The plot seemed more robust than in Waldman's earlier books, the characters were rich, and it was a lot of fun to read -- that is, until I got to the end and realized there was no clear resolution. Yes, I realize that that's how life is -- not everthing is tied up in a neat little bundle, with all the loose ends clipped. But if I wanted ambiguous, I don't need to pick up a book to get it! To me, mysteries are formulaic, and that's why I read them: Bad guy commits crime. Good guy investigates crime. Bad guy gets caught and punished. Good guy lives to solve another day. Period. Instead, I was more than a little disappointed when I was left hanging at the end.
I also thought the book would have been stronger without the occasional author's-rants-hidden-as-character's-thoughts about the fairness of "society," and the injustice of the world. Enough is enough! We get the picture already.
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