37 of 41 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Mainstream Romance Has Taken The Talent Out Of This Beloved Author, October 12, 2009
This review is from: Caleb (The Shadow Wranglers) (Mass Market Paperback)
I've been reading Sarah's books since her debut on Ellora's Cave and loved every single title she put out for them. I've since read and re-read my copies of the Promise Series until the spine was fair ready to collapse. I was extremely worried when she was picked up by a mainstream publishing and had reason to be as every title since hasn't had the same sparkling, well written story plots as the ones she released as e-books. I'm about 50% done with Caleb and I'm forcing myself to read the rest in hopes it'll get better. The story jumps right in and we are left with very little background for the characters or any character development for that matter. The hero and heroine have no development nor do any of the secondary characters. As with her prior books I always felt a connection to both the main characters and secondary characters, not the case in many of her newer books. The love scenes begin wonderfully well but are quickly cut shortly and started up again with the sex being over and the characters either in a brand new situation/scene or discussing something else. Being half way through the book I haven't yet seen a full love scene just a chopped off version...the author has written steaming scenes in prior books but this falls short.
The lack of plot, the confusing twists and turns (which may or may not be resolved by the end of the novel), and the lack of character development have me pressing myself to finish the book. I use to devour Sarah's books...what happened?!
Hopefully it gets better. The only reason I gave it three stars was because it has her name on the cover and I've been a long time fan...but I must say since going mainstream her novels have gone down stream for me.
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16 of 16 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Wow can't believe this is the same author of the Promises books, November 6, 2009
This review is from: Caleb (The Shadow Wranglers) (Mass Market Paperback)
I am a huge fan of the Promises Books under the Elloras Cave publisher, they were great, perfect mix of romance, drama, and great sex scenes. The books in the Spice series are also good (Tuckers Claim, etc) so I figured this new series would be just as good.
Four vampire/cowboy ranchers live on a ranch with one werewolf. Caleb, one of the vamp-ranchers comes to the rescue of "Allie" who runs a bakery, and of course, is in love/lust with Caleb. Ok. SPOLIER ALERT>>>>>>>>>Early in the book Caleb turns Allie into a vamp as well. Allie accepts this with no problems at all??? We never read about how she feels about never seeing her family again, we don't talk about how she now can't go into sunlight...it's just ...Ok I'm a vamp, lets get it on.
I never understood what the ranchers do on the ranch...how do they make a living? I don't need huge details, but a small amount will help me to understand the paranormal world the author is taking us to. We skip from scene to scene...and then there is so much dialouge I couldn't figure out who was saying what!
And honestly...the line about it was too hot in the kitchen so she didn't wear a bra!!!!! Come on, that has got to be the craziest line I have ever read.
Also there seemed to be some very intimate scenes between Caleb and Allie, but yet they would be saying all this in front of all the brothers - or in front of the villian...(Vincent). Geeze. I feel like this series could have promise but it was all over the place. I am sorry I paid the hefty price tag of $15.00.
I am still shaking my head that this was written by Sarah McCarty.
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18 of 19 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Go into the sun. Seriously., October 21, 2009
This review is from: Caleb (The Shadow Wranglers) (Mass Market Paperback)
Never in my life have I read a book where I wanted to see the heroine end her life, until I read this book that is. I read halfway through this book before flinging it down in anger. The characters are boring and cliched, the story line lame, the heroine is whiny and insipid, the hero is a ridiculous stereotype, and the sex is beyond boring.
Save your money, there are a ton of better books in this genre.
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