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My Champion (Knights of de Ware)

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This book is a great read. Much more action and adventure than the usual "gee, does he like me" fare of the genre. Solid lead characters, with well-integrated deWare siblings hinting at even greater adventures to come, surrounded in an authentic, well-researched atmosphere of castles and moss, empowered heroines and gallant heros. True, if you like the slower, plodding plotlines of Roberta Gellis or Marsha Canham, then this book might not be for you. But if you want the double dose adrenalin rush of an espresso with a Chantico chaser, the deWare brothers deliver!

I loved this book! Read it in almost one sitting and was sorry to see it end. Duncan and Linet are a match made in heaven. Can't believe this is a first book for this author. She writes so very well, with humor and sensitivity. Look forward to "My Warrior", Ms. Campbell's second, I guess?!

In 1332 Dorwich, Duncan de Ware and his brothers observe the guildswoman waiting at the dock holding letters of marque signed by King Edward. When Spanish Captain El Gallo, a notorious sea reiver, arrives, the woman challenges him for his cargo since his country stole her wool. Seeing the de Ware brood nearby, an irate El Gallo gives the woman his wine. She simply spills her new cargo out on the ground.

Duncan worries about the woman Linet de Montfort and decides to keep an eye on her in order to protect her from El Gallo. In spite of an immediate attraction between them, she wants Duncan to leave her alone feeling the gypsy is bad for business especially for a first year "sole femme. " However, when the Spanish abduct Linet, her only hope for rescue lies with the gypsy.

MY CHAMPION is an exciting medieval romance that provides readers with an in depth look at the fourteenth century. The insider's view enhances a non-stop action plot that engages the audience from first page to last. The squabbling but charming and brave lead couple adds alight touch to a powerful historical romance that deserves sequels starring other de Ware siblings.

Harriet Klausner

I love this author's other works, so I was thrilled to get my hands on this trilogy. I got all three at once so I could be sure to read them straight through.

It's a good thing I did. You can tell right from the start that the characters really connect with you. There are three brothers, each with his own personality. The eldest, Duncan, is the knightly, responsible one. The middle brother is more of a hot-headed fighter, and the youngest is a God-fearing lad. All three can wield their swords with great skill, of course! Even the interactions between their parents are great.

This is Duncan's story. He loves to protect the weak and the helpless, and dislikes his father's more proper noble opinion of the "unwashed masses". It's therefore perhaps quite fitting that he instantly falls for the blond angel, Linet, a woman of the merchant class. She takes on a famous pirate captain and while she momentarily gets an advantage, in short order she is captive and Duncan is after her.

Not that she knows it, of course. Duncan has chosen to disguise himself as a gypsy - so throughout the story you have Linet putting Duncan down as a common peasant, claiming she is far above him. In reality, her mother was a commoner who abandoned her noble father as soon as his family disowned him. It's a long, long time before she finally starts to think of peasants as OK to talk to (or touch!) and reconcile herself with loving a common gypsy.

I love the writing style, the laugh out loud humor, and the great details inserted into the story. Linet is a woman who deals in fabrics, so much of her observations of the world are couched in the language of dyes, fabric types, weaving techniques and more. It makes for an interesting, multi-layered story.

I also loved the way the character interactions are described. They are very vibrant and real.

That all being said, both of these characters grated on me a bit. Sure, I like it that people have flaws and are not perfect. However, Duncan the knight apparently has 19 or 20 bastard kids wandering around the castle - but he can't really identify them. He just gathers them up randomly and tells stories to them. Where did the mothers go? All the kids were taken from their moms because a castle life is better than their pitiful commoner life? Or were the moms all in the castle too - just unmentioned - and having to move on to new men?

Then he runs into Linet who - while we can complain from a modern, PC point of view that she's very snooty - is simply behaving in the class system that time period had. So she holds herself above the common folk. This is 100% opposite his daily way of life. So he supports her ... why? Because she's buxom and beautiful? He obviously had at least 20 other women who cared for him. I suppose it might be less than 20 if some women didn't learn their lesson after the first time ;) But anyway, all these women were ones he liked enough to sleep with and spend time with. Now he wants to hang around this blonde who is diametrically opposed to his viewpoints, just because she needs help. I'm sure hundreds of other women in his neighborhood also needed help and were more akin to his outlook in life. It was just her blonde hair and porcelain skin that hooked him. That's a bit depressing for a man who claims to be a see-the-true-value type.

As far as Linet goes, as I mentioned, her attitudes are non-PC but are timeline correct so you can't fault her for that. However, what I *do* fault her for is her incessant inanity. She is portrayed as very intelligent, sharp, a shrewd negotiator who can always see the profit angle in a situation. However, from the moment she meets Gypsy-Boy, he constantly tries to save her - and explains clearly what he is doing and why - and she just says "no no no" even when it will very obviously put her into more serious danger. That doesn't make any sense. She would use him to her advantage even if it was to discard him later on. For her to risk her own life - repeatedly - just to be able to say no to him just didn't ring true for me.

There was one minor point that stood out to me - he put the ring on her middle finger, as that was the finger that led to the heart. However, all the research I've done on this period said it was the finger next to the pinkie (i.e. the one we use in modern times) that was the ring finger / heart finger. I wonder if the confusion is that they sometimes say the "third finger" - because they didn't count the thumb as a finger. If someone in modern times heard third finger and did count the thumb, they'd end up in the middle. In any case, if anybody knows otherwise please let me know, because I write books on romantic traditions and this is something I'm asked about often.

So to sum up - great read! Great details about fabrics! Great humor! But the two main characters are a bit too flawed for me to 100% connect with.

The blurb promises a great Medieval romp as the eldest of the De Ware sons, Duncan, fixes his sights on Linet De Montfort whom he witnesses publicly humiliate a Spanish Reiver that she believes previously robbed her father of precious cargo. From that moment on, Duncan decides to become her bodyguard whether she likes it or not, and brave and chivilrous though that may be, it was this factor that began to irritate quite early on in the book. Though he's the heir to a small empire of estates and fortune, he obviously has nothing better to do than disguise himself in rags and stalk a woman who protests his constant presence with flagrant insults every half page. No doubt about it, she can't stand the sight of him! What ensues then is constant bickering: Linet telling Duncan to leave her alone, and Duncan telling Linet that he would not because he knows best and he says she needs his protection! AAagghhh! Campbell writes this book with great humor, but this sometimes verges on the slapstick which robs the plot of any authentic medieval flavour. Medieval England was a dark, grim, troubled yet fascinating period in history. None of this comes over in this book - even the speech feels contemporary. I think this author would write a great contemporary romance. If you are looking for a book that has a basic style of writing, a light hearted story, with an uncomplicated plot, then you will enjoy this book. But if you are looking for a sexy romance with a real, authentic slice of Medieval life then look up Roberta Gellis or Marsha Canham.

I enjoyed this book very much, except for Linet. She was somewhat exasperating in the way she always went against what Duncan said for her to do. Granted she had her befiefs drummed into her by her father that she should not have anything to do with a "peasant". She was told she was of noble blood, which she was, but it was a bit condescending having her say it all the time. Even after Duncan told her he was a knight of noble blood, she still didn't believe him, even after he gave her his ring with the DeWare wolf on it. She lived in the same area and should have been aware of the DeWare family. A bit exasperating.

I just finished reading the other reviews and couldn't disagree more. I found Linet to be stupid and clueless. She betrays Duncan several times, even after she realizes that she is in love with him. I couldn't fathom why Duncan would care about her. Skip this one!