Most helpful critical review
102 of 106 people found the following review helpful
on February 6, 2014
This book stops smack in the middle of several narratives. It not only leaves you hanging, it throws you over a cliff! For authors out there: a 'book' has a beginning, a middle, and an end. To give your readers half of the story is like inviting them over for dinner, serving drinks, then escorting them to the door just as dinner is served. No satisfaction here.
It really is too bad, because I was enjoying the story. But I will not be coerced into buying another book after you wrote and sold me only half a book! Please write a whole book. Then write a sequel, if you wish. If I like your book, I will look for others you have written. I will NOT choose to read unfinished books.
P.S. Please read some 2 and 3 star reviews, which say: this story "stops in the middle, ends abruptly, left you hanging," and especially the reader who said her kindle must have downloaded it incorrectly because "the last few pages were missing!!" If that is not a cliffhanger, I don't know what is!