From Publishers Weekly
In what is the picture-book debut for both author and artist, ripe, robust prose describes the work of young gardeners in a community plot that blooms in Seattle. Beginning with the soil ("deep, dark dirt, rich with rotted grass, apple peels and onionskins") and seeds ("covered with dirt by hands that pat, pat, pat"), children tend the progress of their own kinder-garden. Soon, the empty brown lot erupts in a profusion of "strawberry clumps," "pumpkin tangles," "zucchini tumbles" and "green bean tents." The dynamic, sometimes unruly compositions and strong lighting in Pauley's sun-splashed illustrations evoke the untidy abundance and fertile abandon of nature; some, however, may find the palette garish. No romantic, thoughtful tendencies here--only exuberant, neighborly fun. Ages 5-8.
Copyright 1994 Reed Business Information, Inc.
From School Library Journal
Kindergarten-Grade 2-A noble but ultimately unsuccessful effort. From the welcoming open gate in the first pages to the final invitation to plant something of one's own (even in a flower pot), there is a curious lack of harmony between text and illustrations. The children, flowers, and vegetables are shown as slightly angular and sketchy, and don't seem to fit the urban oasis landscape. And when the text suggests some movement or recognizable scene, the pictures do not necessarily match. The "well-worn tools" are drawn garden-store fresh with shiny white plastic handles; the worms are never seen "tunneling in the deep, dark dirt" aerating the soil, but only in a blue box labeled WORMS. From the dusk jacket, readers learn that this is in fact an actual children's garden in Seattle. But from the text, they hear only "old city park" and see atypical Mediterranean style buildings rather than an inner-urban neighborhood. The children depicted have no ethnic diversity, unusual for any American city. The sense of community that such a project might inspire is also missing from the story's mood. Although the words are soft, the pictures are not. This book needs more room to grow.
Harriett Fargnoli, Great Neck Library, NYCopyright 1994 Reed Business Information, Inc.