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4.0 out of 5 stars Hi Craig...post office lost my letter to you, January 24, 2003
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John D. McCafferty (Santa Barbara, CA, USA) - See all my reviews
This review is from: City 'Scapes (Paperback)
This is a fine book for baseball fans!
I took a good swing at City 'Scapes, topped the ball and was easily out at first. Actually, it was during warm-ups. The book's well-written, of course; you're a pro and it shows. But as a narrative I had trouble with it, and I think the problem for me is a simple one: I fade away during all that dialoguie.
Also, I think you could fine-tune your diaglogue a little. Maybe "read" it to yourself and "listen" to it. It's wooden in many places.
But I hasten to add, I may be the wrong person for this book. Baseball bores hell outa me. Fans are. . . strange.
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City 'Scapes by Craig J. Carrozzi (Paperback - Mar. 1999)
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