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2.0 out of 5 stars
Not What I'd Hoped, September 13, 2006
I so looked forward to reading this book. I'm a huge fan of spy thrillers, especially those with strong female leads. And The Coil was written by a woman. I should have been in heaven. I was far from it. Not quite Hell. More like Purgatory. I was only about 20 pages in when I started debating not finishing it. It starts with a pretty good bang, then slows to go no where fast. The action comes in spurts between incredibly dull lulls. However, my main objection has to do with the point of view or narration of the story. There is no main narrator. Just about each scene has a different narrator, some of them minor characters who are quickly killed off. The "jumping" from head to head, not only makes it confusing at times, it makes it difficult to care about or relate to any one character. So ultimately, I felt, "who cares." Then we have the female lead, Liz. Former spy. Woman of adventure. There have been several attempts on her life and her family has been threatened. Her adamant attitude at not carrying a gun doesn't make sense. Many times, she picks up a gun only to talk herself out of carrying it. Her arguments to herself are weak. Her sense of conviction over this just doesn't hold water. On top of that, she has a preachy and condescending attitude about violence that was very off putting. It's appearance random and inconsistent. I could understand a character who had turned away from violence only to be forced back into a violent world. That just wasn't Liz. She came off as ambivalent about it until some scene called for a streak of conviction. I guess ultimately, the author failed in showing the reader the characters motivations. Morever, the author's attempts at providing character background fell short. Emotions and history appeared out of nowhere to fit the situation only to just as quickly disappear. This made the characters behaviors seem irrational at times. The attempt at romance with Simon, who is her cousin, I believe, is another story. It took me nearly 2 weeks to get to page 175. At that point, I shelved the book and moved on to something more interesting.
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11 of 14 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
post-modern claptrap, August 16, 2005
This may be the most disjointed, confusing, and poorly written book I have ever read. Imagine that someone has written 10,000 paragraphs separately and the joined them indiscriminately in no particular order--this describes this book. I kept wondering what the point of the plot was throughout this tedious tome, and even at the end I had no idea. Having been an editor for 40 years, I am appalled by the poor quality of the premise and the fact that a reputable publisher would feel this book deserved to see the light of day. The plot is shrouded in obscurity, the characters are truly one-dimensional (despite the author's attempts to use minute details to give them substance), and the unfolding sequence of events is tedious, repetitive and boring. Have we really come to this? The dumbing-down of America is plain to see--bad and inarticulate writing, inept editors, and a non-discriminating reading public. I may have to start re-reading all of the great British literature I have in my library, rather than buying such over-priced and illegible pap.
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11 of 14 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
The Coil Grips you tight, August 2, 2004
THE COIL by Gayle Lynds Review by Jillian Abbott Any comparison between Gayle Lynds and Robert Ludlum - one of my all time favorite thriller writers - is unfair to Lynds. Ludlum is a consummate entertainer. Lynds is just as entertaining, but also imbues her novels with a passion for politics, an astute understanding of international affairs, and a goodhearted desire to make the world a better place. In these ways, she is more appropriately compared to John Le Carre and other masters of suspense who deliver such tales wrapped in the deceptively plain wrapper of a summer read. Lynds is a masterful writer in the very best tradition of the international thriller. Lynds' newest offering is THE COIL. When Liz Sansborough is dragged back into the world of international espionage, she discovers that her father's legacy still haunts her. Known as the Carnivore, Sansborough's dad was the Cold War's most notorious assassin. His files - which could expose many, including powerful corporate leaders - are the spoils of this tightly crafted thriller. The more Sansborough discovers in her search, the less she understands. In a nice post-modern spin, all the characters in this book are actors, each taking on multiple roles and identities, leaving Sansborough - herself masquerading as her own kidnapped cousin - alone and able to trust no one. Working with Simon Childs, a childhood friend and MI6 operative, Sansborough sweeps across France and England determined to expose The Coil, a shady conglomerate of powerful corporate potentates. Sansborough, who readers first met in Lynds' best selling MASQUERADE, is a delightful heroin; strong and decisive, yet feminine and vulnerable (on discovering a tracking and listening device in he cell phone, she feels violated). Lynds honed her craft during her years writing Nick Carter adventures. THE COIL pays off that apprenticeship. The ebb and flow of the plot is near perfect; each sentence, paragraph and chapter compelling us to put off cooking dinner and continue reading. THE COIL, the sequel to MASQUERADE, and Lynds' third stand-alone thriller, proves once again that her position as the queen of international espionage is well deserved.
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