Zapruder's conversational storytelling in a (usually long-lined) prosy style sets the reader at ease (like a friendly doctor who's going to make mind-dropping pronouncements) and actually helps his lines (and enjambments in particular) feel less pronounced, more subtle. He slowly and smoothly unveils a constant building of familiar objects in tangential spiraling situations toward a slyly returning final sentence that invariably either harkens back to the original topic, or charts a new ocean of discovery.
"You Have Astounding News" (42) is my favorite example of his poetic powers. Firstly, his all-pervasive humor becomes apparent in line 2. Zapruder dares the reader/sociologist to juggle imaginative, clever James Tate-like phrases with dropped dark Jeffrey McDaniel-esque realities... thereby turning his poetry (he leans more towards James Tate than Jeffrey McDaniel) into a fusion reminiscent of the poesy of his fellow stand-up precursors, James Krusoe and Charles Harper Webb [especially in his simpler, thematic poems like "Journey Through the Past" (65) and "Frankenstein Love" (71)] . Like Woody Allen stammering in all his movies, Zapruder's also uniquely employs the occasional repetition of a word or phrase like a verbal tic for musical emphasis; this poem's got two: constant and building. (Hmmm... wasn't that in my sum-up of his modality in the first paragraph? Guess he's self-aware.)
Zapruder infuses his poetry with modern everyday objects, urban landscapes, and scientific and pop culture references. They capture the zeitgeists of this time, which makes them an outwardly mundane yet inwardly familiarizing historical record of our existence told as if he were Woody Allen (again) as a poet in Sleeper, relating "facts" as if they were forgotten territories. His use of images is surrealistically successful, particularly in his poem "Minnesota" (52), where simple, every day adjective and noun phrases like blue vinyl couch, winter sky, robin's egg, great rivers, blue phlox, Canadian Shield glaciers, fertile soil, frozen snow, and onyx nails... and basic nouns like balcony, railing, city, hulls, boulders, stones, squirrel, tree, watchman, and claws... together produce his poem's conceit about looking for things. Also in his poem "Sad News" (75), where, in the same way, with the same purposeful purpose, Zapruder juxtaposes Mars, lions, light bulb, Xerox machine, sharp blade, solar wind, speckles, dust, very tiny oiled hydraulics, vampire bat, unicorn, dead elephants, empty labs, mouth, and binary data stream. Wow!
Zapruder, in Come On All You Ghosts, demonstrates the role of the poet as relating his personal experiences and observations in casually disarming and outright beautiful ways, linking the patterns of his thought tangents by finding the common threads. With his choices of words, phrasing, and (most importantly) linkages, Zapruder is also defining the purpose of a poet to be the unearther of verities who can artistically compel you to become emotionally moved about them.