Coming Undone (Marine, Book 4) (Mass Market Paperback)

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On the Steal the Thunder tour, the real show's offstage

It's supposed to be the biggest summer of Priscilla Jayne Morgan's life. She's on the brink of country music superstardom, yet she had to fire her crooked-manager Mama, and the tabloids are having a field day. Now her record label's hired a watchdog to escort her on her massive summer tour. And not just anyone, either -- they sicced Jared Hamilton on her, the guy she once idolized more than anyone in the world.

Well, she doesn't care how hot he is. It's been too many years and too much water under the bridge, and she'll be damned if he gets to tell her what to do now.

Jared remembers exactly how headstrong P.J. can be and he knows she's going to be a handful. Problem is, he'd love to have his hands full of her. But he's cool. He's professional. And he's always in control.

He'd better be. Because for five long weeks he's stuck in close quarters with the wildest girl in show business.

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Front cover headline, Country Now magazine: Where in the World is Priscilla Jayne?

"Oh, for the love of pete!" P. J. Morgan, known on the country music circuit by her first and middle names, tossed aside the magazine and jumped to her feet.

"Mysterious disappearance, my butt! Where do they get this crap?" Scary to think Country Now was one of the reputable publications. She could only imagine what the tabloids were saying.

Crossing the room to the window, she pulled aside the faded olive drape to look out. Not that there was much to see in this wide-spot-in-the-road rural town. At a time in her life when she could finally afford to stay in posh four-star hotels, it was ironic that she'd instead picked a low-rent motel off a secondary highway on a hot, still Texas plain.

"Well, hey." A humorless laugh escaped her. "You can take the girl out of the trailer park, but there's just no getting that trailer trash out of the girl."

Blowing out a breath, she dropped the curtain and turned away. This wasn't exactly what she'd planned when she'd taken off on Monday. She'd been headed for Los Angeles, a city she had never seen. It had seemed exotic, was a good long way from home and she'd figured not many of its citizens were likely to give a good goddamn where one beginning-to-make-aname-for-herself country singer had gotten herself off to.

With thoughts of parking herself by a palm tree-shaded pool to drink her fill of fruity concoctions sporting frilly paper umbrellas, she'd driven seventeen hours straight, stopping only to stretch her legs and fill up the tank. When she couldn't keep her eyes open to drive another mile, she'd pulled into the Wind Blew Inn, a clean but ancient motor court in the Texas panhandle. She'd promptly fallen into bed and when she'd awakened thirtysix hours later, she'd stayed put instead of hitting the road once again. Something about this nowhere little town's one-block-long main street reminded her of the neverending series of hick towns she'd lived in growing up.

And when things go to hell, she always said, stick with the familiar.

Her stomach growled, and she realized she was hungry. What day was it, anyway—Thursday? No, God, it was Friday.

Her appetite had been nonexistent since Monday.And if that wasn't indicative of her state of mind, she didn't know what was. One summer a lifetime ago, she and a boy named Jared had gone hungry together on the streets of Denver. It was an experience that had hardwired her ever after not to miss another meal.Yet, except for about six gallons of coffee and the occasional candy bar grabbed when paying for her gas, she'd barely eaten a bite.

Twisting her hair up off her neck, she reached for her baseball cap and pulled it on, then donned a pair of oversized dark glasses. Slipping a handful of bills into her shorts pocket, she headed for the door.

It was hotter than usual for early June and the swamp cooler laboring in her room's window dripped greentinged condensation onto the concrete next to the twostep stoop outside her door. Blinking against the glare, she tugged the brim of her navy cap down and set out across the lot.

The Prairie Dog Café was a squat orange building next to Elmerson's Feed and Seed, and P.J. pulled open its screen door to the clatter of heavy crockery, the rumble of male voices discussing crops and Lari White singing about flies on the butter from an old Wurlitzer in the corner. She stepped out of the sun into the smell of frying meat and cigarette smoke. Slipping off her dark glasses, she noticed that the only customers who didn't have John Deere tractor caps planted firmly on their heads had straw Stetsons hooked over the back rails of their chairs.

Conversations faltered for a second, then resumed their accustomed rhythms. P.J. noted she was the only woman in the café this time of day, then shrugged the observation aside and crossed to the counter to claim one of the few vacant red-vinyl swivel seats. If she'd allowed men to intimidate her in her line of work, she would've quit singing about the same time she'd first attempted to go professional. The truth was, she liked the company of men. She worked primarily with them—her backup band consisted of two of the species, and the roadies that set up and broke down shows and transported the equipment from city to city were almost exclusively male.

Moving aside an ashtray, she reached across the counter for a laminated menu stuck in the rear prongs of the stainless steel condiment holder.

A waitress with Sandy embroidered above the breast pocket of her pink uniform came over a few minutes later and set a glass of water in front of P.J. "What can I getcha, honey?"

She ordered a ham and swiss on sourdough and knew she should ask for it to go. But the murmur of voices was comforting to a woman accustomed to being surrounded by people and she couldn't quite bring herself to relinquish the sound to return to her too-quiet room.

She realized it wasn't a smart choice, however, when Sandy said something as she clipped her order to the wheel above the pass-through to the kitchen and the short-order cook immediately poked his head through the opening to give P.J. the once-over. She also caught the waitress stealing glances at her as she bustled about the room filling coffee cups and slapping down bills torn from a pad in her apron pocket. Then "Mama's Girl," P.J."s very first recording, came on the jukebox and with an inward groan she settled a little deeper into her chair.

Sandy brought the bill a moment later. "That's you, isn't it?" she demanded with a tip of her chin toward the Wurlitzer.

P.J. could lie with the best of them and she looked the other woman straight in the eye. "Don't I wish." She smiled wryly. "People are always mistaking me for her. Darn shame I can't sing a lick."

"It's you," Sandy insisted. "I saw you on Austin City Limits once and I'll never forget your speaking voice."

Damn. Didn't it just figure that would give her away? She hated her speaking voice. It was raspy and made her sound as if she were a three-pack-a-day smoker. She'd always figured God had given her a good, strong singing voice to make amends for saddling her with such a ridiculous conversational one.

Still she insisted, "Oh, this isn't the way I usually sound. It's the tag end of a nasty case of laryngitis." But recognizing a blown cover when she saw one, she left a hefty tip and headed for the door. It looked like she might see California after all.

"Pretty cold-blooded to fire your own mama, you ask me," the waitress called after her.

Ouch. Ouchouchouch! Given the mess with her mother earlier this week, Sandy's parting shot was a direct hit. when she was out of earshot. Damn if she intended to make excuses to someone who didn't know the first thing about her relationship with her mother. She stomped back to the Wind Blew Inn.

She had just zipped her suitcase closed and was looking for her flip-flops when there was an authoritative knock on the door.

She stilled, her head raised to stare at the peepholefree door. Dear Lord. Reporters already?

Then she willed herself to relax. Don't be ridiculous, it's probably just the manager. Even if Sandy had called someone, which was iffy, the only reporter who could have gotten here this fast would be from a local weekly, and she could be three states away by the time its next edition hit the streets. She crossed to the window and lifted a corner of the curtain, trying to see who was on the other side of the door.

A tall man stood on her tiny stoop, but the angle was wrong to see more than the fact that he had wide shoulders in a navy-blue T-shirt, neatly trimmed brown hair and was wearing a faded pair of jeans. His right forearm, she saw as he raised his fist to knock on the door once again, sported a long, narrow tattoo that undulated subtly with the movement. It was mostly green and almost looked like a praying mantis.

"Ohmigawd."

She lunged for the door, pulling it open. The man jerked back his fist, but she barely even noticed how close it had come to her forehead. Her gaze went first to the tattoo, which was exactly what she'd expected to see, then to the man's face. "Jared?" she whispered.

"Jared Hamilton?"

"Hello, P.J."

"Ohmigawd!" she said again. A frisson of pure pleasure buzzed along her spine and, laughter erupting, she leaped out at him, her arms snaking around his neck in a stranglehold, her legs wrapping around his waist. "Oh. My. God!" Leaning back, she gazed into his face. And grinned. "You sure grew up good."

That was an understatement. He'd been goodlooking at seventeen, but now his features were honed in a way that made it nearly impossible to look away. Hard jaw, aristocratic nose, stern mouth with a full lower lip. His hair was still the sun-streaked brown she remembered but he wore it shorter these days. And he'd grown into his long, skinny bones. He was still tall muscular.

His fingers, which had clasped her butt with a light touch when she'd jumped him, tightened infinitesimally. A slight smile pulled up one corner of his mouth. "You grew up pretty well, yourself."

Well. Not good—well. Some of her pleasure dimmed. It was due to Jared that she'd worked as hard as she had in her language arts and English classes in junior high and high school, and her grammar was much better than it had been at thirteen. Not good enough, though, evidently. "Grew up good, grew up well." She shrugged. "Not everyone has the advantage of your prep-school upbringing, rich boy. Some of us are simply never gonna speak like some stick-up-the-butt banker."

"It wasn't a put-down, Peej." His hands slid from her rear to her hips. "It was merely an observation. You look great."

"Oh. Well. Thank you." Unwrapping her legs from around his waist and loosening her choke hold on his neck, she allowed him to set her back on her feet just inside the door. Curling her bare toes into the worn motel carpet, she tipped her head back to look up at him. "Want to come in?"

"Absolutely." He stepped over the threshold.

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Product Details

• Mass Market Paperback: 384 pages
• Publisher: HQN Books (September 1, 2007)
• Language: English
• ISBN-10: 0373772130
• ISBN-13: 978-0373772131
• Product Dimensions: 6.5 x 4.2 x 1.3 inches
• Shipping Weight: 6.4 ounces
• Average Customer Review: 3.4 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (23 customer reviews)
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful:

4.0 out of 5 stars Danger, Romance with a Country Music Backdrop ! , October 10, 2007

By	C. Brigden (Minot, ND) - See all my reviews

On my trip to Nashville last fall I thought someone should write a novel about a country music start, I guess Susan read my mind. Priscilla Jayne Morgan's is up and coming country artist and finds herself saddled with hunky body guard Jared Hamilton. Now Jared and Jayne have a history and when thing heats up with crazed fan things get very interesting. I liked the secondary romance story as well. This is fun quick contemporary romance. Enjoy!

If you enjoy this genre check out ; Falling For Gracie by Susan Mallery, Have Glass Slippers, Will Travel' by Lisa Cach, Almost Perfect by Julie Ortolon, Saving Allegheny Green by Lori Wilde and Spirited Away by Cindy Miles.

6 of 6 people found the following review helpful:

4.0 out of 5 stars Worth the Wait, September 17, 2007

By	Cherise Everhard (Michigan, USA) - See all my reviews (TOP 500 REVIEWER)    (REAL NAME)

My first introduction to Susan Andersen's writing was the Marine series. I read and enjoyed Head Over Heels (Marine, Book 1)and Getting Lucky (Marine, Book 2), but it was PJ and Jared that hooked me in the book Hot & Bothered (Marine, Book 3). They were sensitive intelligent teenagers who got in a little trouble and then found each other. Their relationship was innocent yet deep and they stole the spotlight in the book for me; I couldn't wait to hear their story.

At the beginning of this book Ms. Andersen writes a little letter to the reader and mentions the numerous fans who contacted her wanting to know when she would write PJ and Jared's story; I admit to being one of those fans.

Coming Undone takes place 15 years after their special bond was formed. PJ and Jared haven't seen each other since they were kids, but neither has forgotten the other. PJ is a rising Country star and Jared has been hired by her record label to handle some issues with her tour.

The story was fantastic and I found myself repeatedly racing to get to the end; I had to really concentrate on not rushing through the book. It was fun watching them reconnect as adults and watching their puppy love turn to passion. My only issue with the story was the extra cheesy epilogue; the situation seemed forced and insincere; completely unnecessary. I am hoping we will get a Marine book #5 with a story starring Esme or Grayson. I am glad she listened to her fans and wrote this book; she delighted this reader.

10 of 12 people found the following review helpful:

4.0 out of 5 stars Flawed but still a good follow up to Hot & Bothered, September 6, 2007

By	Tracy Vest (Northern California) - See all my reviews (TOP 500 REVIEWER)    (REAL NAME)

It's been 15 years since Jared Hamilton has seen the scrawny runaway tomboy who spent a summer with him when he was on the lam, accused of murdering his father. PJ had been tossed out of her mom's home at 13 and had the street smarts that Jared needed to survive after his pampered existence (their adventure was a secondary storyline in 2004's "Hot & Bothered"). Now a country singer with her star on the rise, Jared is hired to insure that she makes it to her gigs on time since she had a falling out with her mama manager, who embezzled money then turned to the media to make PJ out to be an ungrateful daughter. PJ's real family is her band, and Jared manages to weasel his way onto their tour bus to keep a close watch on her, particularly when a deranged fan starts sending her frightening gifts. Jared tries his darnedest to keep professional distance from her, and when he caves, he attempts to get further from her, only to find that where PJ is concerned, his heart is engaged; but is he ready to give up the control he has maintained for nearly 2 decades?

I fell in love with Jared and PJ when they were bit characters in "Hot & Bothered" and couldn't wait until they got their own story. They have tons of chemistry and their romance was endearing. But Andersen has a knack for annoying colloquialisms and accents and peppers so many of her stories with them. PJ spent her life all over and yet sounds like a character from Hee Haw; Esme has not been in England since she was 6, yet constantly utters British nuggets like "smashing" and "brilliant." I was disappointed with the epilogue - so many authors use them to catch us up on other characters and it's so not necessary. I prefer to imagine their futures myself instead of the awkwardness of forcing characters that were not in the first 375 pages suddenly making an appearance just for the heck of it. Even with the flaws, it's still a good story. While you don't have to read its predecessor first, I highly recommend it so that you can get the full story.