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13 of 14 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Loved it!
First, as the title to my review would indicate, I have to say that I really loved this book. However . . . this is a book about writing, not necessarily about writing erotic stories. As a mystery writer, I found it helpful and fascinating, with many insights and useful tips. And there IS information about crafting love scenes, but I really think the book is more valuable...
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1.0 out of 5 stars Neither erotic nor original
This book was a total waste of money. Most of it is derivative of other, better books on the craft of writing. It mostly repeats general information on character and story development and offers zero insight into the craft of writing about the erotic, unless you consider lists of words for genitals or actions insightful.

Skip this and go directly for "The Joy...
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13 of 14 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Loved it!, June 26, 2007
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This review is from: Conflicting Desires: Notes on the Craft of Writing Erotic Stories (Paperback)
First, as the title to my review would indicate, I have to say that I really loved this book. However . . . this is a book about writing, not necessarily about writing erotic stories. As a mystery writer, I found it helpful and fascinating, with many insights and useful tips. And there IS information about crafting love scenes, but I really think the book is more valuable than that. If it seems I am being vague, it's probably because I am having difficulty describing exactly what this book taught me. Basically, I learned that I need to take my time writing these difficult (for me, anyway) passages, and that point of view is paramount. But there is so much more to be had in this little gem of a book! I could see people being frustrated if what they wanted was a how-to on writing erotica -- this is more for writers whose stories incorporate love scenes and how to make them flow naturally, and (of course) how to make them hot!
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Wonderful, August 9, 2008
This review is from: Conflicting Desires: Notes on the Craft of Writing Erotic Stories (Paperback)
This book packs so much information on the craft of writing erotica. The only drawback is that it's to short. The author covers every aspect that a writer can run into trouble on and includes ways to jump start your writing, and a lexicon. Extremely pleased with this book. It is very through and makes use of all its pages.
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Good for the Newbie, July 23, 2008
This review is from: Conflicting Desires: Notes on the Craft of Writing Erotic Stories (Paperback)
This was an excellent book, especially for anyone thinking about
writing Erotic romance....simple,straight, and to the point.
It stresses the importance of character development and plot, with sex
being the driving force of the characters, not just a bunch of sex with
no plot. If one is looking for that, then erotica or pornography is the way to go...if the sex scenes are taken out and the story can stand alone,
then you have a good story; otherwise, it's not Erotic Romance.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Not just for novice writers--not just for erotica, July 19, 2009
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Experienced writers, as well as novices like myself, will find lots of value here. Any genre of fiction--not just erotica--will benefit from this book.
Thorn has the talent of a skilled teacher: Clear, understandable explanations; economy in his use of words; stimulating and interesting content.
In 122 pages, Thorn accomplishes more than most books twice this length. "Conflicting Desires" is a superb summary of the principles and techniques for writing fiction, with constant application to erotica.
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4.0 out of 5 stars writing erotica, September 19, 2008
This review is from: Conflicting Desires: Notes on the Craft of Writing Erotic Stories (Paperback)
Would recommend if you're writing romance with a bit of 'zaz'. Did help me decide what would be acceptable in general romantic fiction and what would not.
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2 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars Neither erotic nor original, February 21, 2010
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This book was a total waste of money. Most of it is derivative of other, better books on the craft of writing. It mostly repeats general information on character and story development and offers zero insight into the craft of writing about the erotic, unless you consider lists of words for genitals or actions insightful.

Skip this and go directly for "The Joy of Writing Sex" by Elizabeth Benedict.
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0 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars Great learning tool for new writers like me, January 21, 2009
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I love this book. I've edited about 6-7 books, and although I'm running out of words, I recommend this book. I find it helpful for me...perhaps you will too. I suggest you buy it.
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Conflicting Desires: Notes on the Craft of Writing Erotic Stories by Han Li Thorn (Paperback - April 5, 2007)
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