I am not even sure what this very short, short story was supposed to be. Erotica? Romance? Character Study? A Racy YA? What I do know is that I wish I had the opportunity to read akornroach's review prior to downloading. This was a complete Wham-bam thank you Ma'am maybe I can have another later kind of story with sophomoric writing. Alan is a 17 year old CEO who sees a girl, she hurts her hand when she see him, he takes her to his office and has sex with her. The story is that... clinical and abrupt. I did not read the excerpt after the short story, I had enough, it was horrible.