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The Crimson Thread: A Retelling of "Rumpelstiltskin" (Once Upon a Time (Simon Pulse))

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Sometimes, to give myself a bit of a breather, I take in those fondly remembered times of my childhood, when fairy tales became nearly believable, and there was always a touch of enchantment that just might happen. And happily, most of the time, I find those old, old tales to be just the thing to lift me out of a funk.

One collection that has gained in popularity over the last few years has been an ongoing series of books from Simon & Schuster, under the title of Once Upon a Time... Rewritten for modern young adult audiences, these take traditional favourites, and give them a new spin or two, updating the characters, setting or action.

This time the choice was a retelling of Rumpelstiltskin, titled The Crimson Thread. The setting is almost the modern world, nineteenth century New York City, in the slums where newly arrived immigrants learn the hard way that the streets are not always paved with gold. For Bridget O'Malley, ever since her mother has died, and famine has stalked Ireland, she has tried to mother her family, taking care of both her father and her siblings. But in spite of all of the hardships, she still has her dreams of success. But mixed in with all of the hope, there are some obstacles to overcome -- most notably the prejudice that many have towards the newly arrived Irish.

A stranger, Ray Stalls, turns out to be very helpful, befriending Bridget -- now calling herself Bertie Miller to be more acceptable -- with small presents, and almost courting her in his charming way. When the opportunity comes to work as a dressmaker's assistant, Bertie finds herself making an outlandish deal with Ray for his help in crafting a sumptuous ball gown for a wealthy merchant's daughter. But as with all rashly made promises, there is a terrible price underneath the words...

I really wanted to like this reworking of the story where a princess promises her first-born child to a clever dwarf who can spin straw into gold. While Suzanne Weyn manages to keep some of the traditional elements, and the upgrading of the story to a time and place nearer to the modern world, there is one severe problem with this story.

There really isn't any magick involved. Nothing.

There is a rich young man who isn't the prince that he seems as he manipulates Bertie, the characters are pretty much one notes and flit in and out of the story with little character depth or reason. Even the creation of the glamourous dresses is seated firmly in mundania, and while they are wonderful to read about, there's nothing there to give the sense of illusion either.

Even the actions, from the poverty of the Five Points and Hell's Kitchen, to the mansions of Park Avenue, to the horrible conditions in sweatshops and mills and the beginnings of the worker's movements, are very dull to read about. We know what to expect even before the author has set down the words, and for me, that ruined any expectations that I had for this novel. By the time it reached the requisite HEA (Happy Ever After) ending, I didn't care. It might as well just been another historical romance, but even those have some excitement to them, and plainly, this one didn't. Whatever danger or romance that is usually found in the realms of Faerie are just not here -- everything is watered down to a vapid, lifeless mush, and that's a real pity.

I don't know if it is the lack of the author in crafting these retellings, or if the editor in charge of this line of novels are responsible, but these seem to be taking fairy tales and making them the most bland, boring stories with few chills or touches of the macabre that most fairy tales have had through the centuries. Instead, it seems to be necessary to strip out everything and anything that might be offensive or objectionable, and the results just are not worth it.

Overall, two stars, despite the real promise that the story begins with.

The Crimson Thread is a retelling of Rumplestiltskin, written by Suzanne Weyn, in the Once Upon a Time series published by Simon Pulse. (I would have given it 3.5 stars if I could.)

I personally love this series. I'm behind a few, but I absolutely adore retold fairy tales. I still have fun watching old Disney movies. I just love the whole fairy-tale genre, to tell you the truth. From the sweeter and romantic to the darker and magical, to all variations in between. Honestly. Lol.

Anyway, my favorites in the Once Upon a Time series are The Storyteller's Daughter (Cameron Dokey), Snow (Tracy Lynn), and The Rose Bride (Nancy Holder) - but I love them all in varying degrees.

The Crimson Thread takes the tale of Rumplestiltskin (one of the creepier stories for me as a kid, I'd say) and twists it into a story of an Irish immigrant family in New York in 1880. The main character's name is Bridget (though so not to confuse you if you read the back of the book, she changes her name to the more Americanized Bertie) and her family realizes before long that employers aren't welcoming the Irish too happily. In order to make ends meet, Bridget takes a job as a seamstress for a tycoon's family. And when, after her father's reckless boasting, she is tasked with creating beautiful gowns to help save her employer's business - the enigmatic, mysterious Ray Stalls (who also lives in the more down-trodden area her family resides) helps her do so with an old spinning wheel. But what will be his price?

Okay, so you already know that I enjoy fairy tales - but this, like Suzanne Weyn's other Once Upon a Time offerings, takes a lot of elements of a different, real-world time period and incorporates an almost too realistic setting to an old, creepy fantasy tale. However, I found that it actually worked.

I really liked Bridget's character and I quickly found myself caring for her and her family. Ray Stalls came across much more human than I would have expected, yet I liked the portrayal. The story moved at a swift pace and I was never once bored.

In the end, I found The Crimson Thread to be a clever (loved the last two paragraphs), witty, and page-turning retelling with a nice, subtle magical element. And even though I tend to like my fairy-tales to have more, well, fairies... I highly recommend Suzanne Weyn's different, refreshing approach in The Crimson Thread.

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Bridget O'Malley never anticipated that making a living in New York City as an Irish immigrant would be so hard. Her family is struggling to stay afloat, and consider themselves lucky for the jobs they do have working in J.P. Wellington's household, even if they do have to change their names to avoid persecution.

Bridget, now Bertie Miller, is a seamstress, and her father and brother are coachmen. But when it looks as if the Wellingtons' business may be in jeopardy, along with the Millers' jobs, Bertie's father tells outrageous lies of Bertie's abilities to turn ordinary fabric into shimmering and fashionable dresses. Bertie is in a state of despair when the mysterious Ray Stalls offers his assistance...and manages to do what Bertie's father claimed. Soon Bertie finds herself caught up between her debt and obligation to Ray, and her one chance to ascend the social ladder and become successful and prosperous.

The Crimson Thread is a sweet and whimsical retelling of Rumpelstilstskin that turns the old tale around completely. It reads more like a historical fiction novel than a fairy tale, and gives a fairly accurate depiction of life for Irish immigrants in New York City along the way, with a dash of the glitz and glamour of the life of the obscenely rich. The pacing of the book is slightly slow at the beginning, but then evens out quickly, making this regrettably short read fly by. The characters are engaging and varied and the magical elements are very light--so much so that it allows readers to speculate as to whether there is any magic at all--but Weyn doesn't divulge any secrets. She manages to create an air of improbability within the story, mirroring Bertie's own uncertain circumstances, which leaves the reader to always wonder what will happen next. But Weyn doesn't disappoint and, through some clever wordplay and neat plotting, brings the story together in a romantic and satisfying end.

The fun thing about these reworked fairy tales in the Once Upon A Time series is seeing how the books manage to keep the essence of the traditional fairy tale while transforming it into something entirely new and different. This didn't have as much in common with its traditional tale as some of these books have. I really enjoyed stumbling upon these connections as the book went along. Crimson Thread is the tale of a young Irish woman Bridge, who comes to America with her widowed father, three brothers, and toddler sister. Bridge's father is an exaggerator who gets a job as a stable hand by pretending to not be Irish. Then he lies to the seamstress of the household where he works. He tells her that his daughter is the best seamstress in the land. He shows his shirt and says Bridge made it but it was truly made by her deceased mother. Bridget gets the job and falls for the oldest son and heir to the household and family business. Bridget must again live up to her father's boasts when he claims she can make a fabulous and fashionable dress out of drab blue cloth. In desperation, Bridget tells this to Ray Stalls, a street friend who seems to be around whenever Bridget needs help. He takes her to a basement where there is a spinning wheel and he makes the dress for her....then he agrees to make two more in exchange for her firstborn child. Even if you take Rumplestiltskin out of this tale altogether, it still an absolutely lovely fairy tale. The author did a great job of keeping secrets that slowly reveal themselves along the way. I was delighted with the is book and its one of my favorite in the series thus far. For teens and adults who still believe in fairy tales.

This entry in the "Once Upon a Time" series is a little different than the others. It does have magic, but only a very little bit. "The Crimson Thread" is a modern fairy tale, with most magical elements translated into every-day things. For example, Bertie pledges her first-born child not to a mischievous gnome, but to a shady tailor. The castle where she works is not actually a castle but the home of a wealthy textile manufacturer. The story incorporats immigrant work and labor problems in Industrial America, an interesting idea.

I liked these twists on the story. They were creative, and I like modern re-tellings, anyway. The story was interested and well-paced. Some characters were a bit stereotypical, though. Bertie's father is a jolly, kind-hearted man who likes to boast. Her little sister is a sweet but often sickly child. But then, what story involving poverty is complete without a sick child at home? I did like Bertie. She does her best to help her family, but she's still selfish sometimes. Ray, this book's Rumpelstilskin, is interesting, too, and it's unclear whether Bertie should trust him. There is a prince, too, in the form of Bertie's employer's son, but he's less developed. Actually, there are two princes, and there's sort of a love triangle. I liked the romance pretty well.

The writing was touch and go. Sometimes it was fine, but sometimes, especially toward the beginning, it was cliched. I really didn't like the ending. It's happy all right- too happy. I'm never against the prince and princess living happily ever after, but things worked out unbelievably well here. The good guys end up being more than successful, and the bad guys are thoroughly punished. It was unrealistic and sounded childish. I actually laughed while reading it. The ending is the reason I can't give it more than three stars.

Still, it was an interesting, quick read. Not the best in the series, but definitely not the worst.

Bridget O'Malley and her family are new immigrants to America in 1880 looking for a better life full of riches and dreams come true. Things in America aren't immediately wonderful and the family finds themselves looking for jobs and food while living in a small cramped tenement apartment in New York City.

In order to obtain a job as a coachman with the wealthy J.P. Wellington, Bridget's father changes the family name to Miller and boasts that his daughter, now known as Bertie, is an impressive seamstress. Paddy is quite the storyteller, and although Bertie has a talent for sewing, her skills are not quite what her father claims.

When the Wellington's find their family fortune in the textile industry in jeopardy, Paddy once again makes an outrageous claim about Bertie -- this time claiming she has the talent to spin straw into gold and fashion ugly plain fabric into stunning dresses with intricate designs. Bertie fears there is no way she can design and create the dresses expected of her. Desperate and in need, Bertie finds herself relying on the mysterious Ray Stalls for help.

THE CRIMSON THREAD is the latest addition to the ONCE UPON A TIME series, a series filled with retellings of fairy tales. Setting the story of Rumpelstiltskin amidst immigrants, wealth, and fashion of 1880 was an interesting take on the famous tale and added a touch of magic. I would imagine the story of Rumpelstiltskin a difficult story to re-tell, but the author added her own twist on the tale and characters which made it unique. A wonderful addition to the series and a must read for fairy tale lovers.

Reviewed by: Sarah Bean the Green Bean Teen Queen

As a very loose retelling of Rumpelstiltskin, set in the early 1900s in New York City, when immigrants from around the world tried to capture the American Dream, "A Crimson Thread" is a jolt of reality in a series full of fairy tales. Sometimes, the reality becomes hard to stomach, as the suffering described in the tale is true - not exactly what is expected in a fairy tale retelling. However, the reality is well woven with the tale and it is quite possibly the best retold (truly retold - as not being similar at all to the original) fairy tale within this series. The pace is good (though a bit hurried at the end) and the plot believable. The fairy tale was changed enough to be set in the story but also recognizable.

It was an enjoyable read. The book goes in a lot of places but still it was not bad and was at least entertaining. It has an adorable last line that just makes you smile.

This is a non-magical retelling of Rumpelstiltskin. While I have enjoyed this series, including others by this writer, this one was a big disappointment. Bridget is the main character, fresh off the boat from Ireland, along with her large family. Bridget (and the other family members) are impossibly naive and stereotypical. Bridget gets a job as a seamstress in a wealthy household. She meets a mysterious boy named Ray - or is it Rudy? - get engaged to her employer's son, gets mixed up in a labor union strike, saves her sister from diptheria, etc. etc. There was in fact a chapter where straw is spun into gold thread, but that was as far as the magic went. I would recommend skipping this title and reading some of the others in this series instead, or reading the book The Rumplestiltskin Problem by Vivian Vande Velde.

This is one of the most interesting takes on the original fairy tales. It has a modern twist that just adds to the story. I like the ending better then the original. Read the other books with the hint A Retelling of you will never forget this wonderful stories.