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Murder in the time of Richard I, September 2, 2010
I really liked this series. I made the mistake of buying one to see if I cared for the author's style without checking to see where it was in the series. That was dumb. This is a series (as are most to be honest) that should be read from the first book straight through to the last. I am impressed with the character development, even the good guys aren't perfect and the bad guys are real stinkers. It is slightly repetitious to re-read some of the basic setting info in every volume. The author apologized for that around book 7 or so; but in case you just pick one at random you do need some of the core setting to enjoy it, so I can't really knock him for that. Historically it seems to be pretty accurate and in the prolog he explains what diverges from history. I appreciate that as well. All in all I have had a fun read with the 12 books ZI've finished so far.
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4.0 out of 5 stars
Crowner Royal Review, December 23, 2011
Received this book in very good condition.
I have periodically purchased one in the series and find them interesting
with a good story line and very descriptive. I recommend this to anyone
who enjoys a good mystery.
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2.0 out of 5 stars
Hire A Proofreader, Please, July 7, 2011
This review is from: Crowner Royal (Crowner John Mysteries) (Hardcover)
I don't like to leave a negative review because I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings, but Mr. Knight has made a fortune from this series and I'm sure can put one reader's disappointed remarks in perspective.
Sir. You have thirteen books in this series (at least thirteen). You have made sufficient money from them that if your publisher refuses to pay an editor, you yourself can and REALLY SHOULD hire at least a proofreader from your own pocket.
Commas appear where they ought not and don't appear where they should. Someone should tear the key cap off the exclamation point on your keyboard. That same someone should blue-pencil you when you fall in love with a particular word. Example: one lovely lady is "languorous" three times in four pages. All other attractive women are referred to, over and over, as "delectable." The crowner himself is forever "snapping" or "growling," more so than any dog I've ever known. And aside from the annoying syntactical monotony, can't you find any other words to limn his character? Don't you think he snaps and growls a bit much, particularly when nothing in the scene calls for it?
Also, though the historical lore you have put in is most welcome, you've got to work on the transitions. Work on making these tidbits a little less conspicuous, both in their placement (not during a crisis, please! it's ridiculous to wander off on an architectural note during a squabble among the main characters) and in their too-sharp edges. Blend them in!
Despite the frustration over the above points, you get an extra star for including the map, the explanatory foreword, and moving the glossary up front. Good for you! And very good for the reader, thank you. But DO hire someone to police your adjectives and punctuation.
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