First let me start by saying that I am an avid sci-fi fan and I started this book with great excitement. Even though the Amazon description was short, the premise sounded very intriguing---the type of story I would really enjoy.
My excitement started to fizzled out by the end of the first chapter, and after the second chapter I had to stop. I tried, but I had a very hard time getting through it. There were so many grammatical and syntax errors, it was distracting. And the wording was so confusing---often with incomplete ideas or such poor syntax that the sentences just didn't make sense.
But I think the biggest issue (for me, anyway), was the author spent way too much time describing every little thing in the most minute detail, to such an extreme that the lengthy descriptions far outweighed the actual storyline. Too much irrelevant information (like filler) and not enough plot.
I feel bad saying this because the author is actually a very nice person, and I think the idea behind the story is probably a very interesting and unique one. I just couldn't make myself finish it the way it was.
I hope someday that the author decides to hire a professional editor to clean it up, because I have a feeling it would make an interesting read.