3.0 out of 5 stars
Interesting but tame, March 8, 2011
This review is from: The Dandelion Murders (Paperback)
(Contains mild spoilers)
There was much in this book that I found entertaining. As someone with a background in agriculture and botany, I found that aspect of the story fascinating. The author is also good at poking fun at the foibles of scientists and academicians (such as boring your dinner companions to death by going on and on about your narrow field of interest). The book also sympathetically raises the consciousness of readers regarding the hardships endured by migrant workers. Unfortunately, the book has a number of weaknesses that detract from it.
To begin with, the "dandelion" of the title really has nothing to do with the story. The author tries to relate it to the time and place of one of the deaths, but the explanation is so convoluted it just ends up confusing the reader, and it was in no way essential to the story. I suppose the author wanted to continue the botanical theme in her title, but "grapes" would have been much more logical, since the story revolves around the cultivation and harvest of that fruit.
Secondly, the main character, Claire Sharples, is so immature and self-centered it is hard to empathize with her, even if she does have an interesting career. The story opens with her being in a snit because her boyfriend's two young sons are visiting for the summer. Much is made of the fact that she is "not a mother" - but come on now. One doesn't have to be a mother to be a tolerant if not gracious hostess. Her boyfriend doesn't earn high marks for maturity either; he copes with Claire's discontent by jumping into the arms and bed of a former lover. I suppose the author worked in all this soap opera behavior as a mechanism to get Claire out of her boyfriend's house and into the motel where much of the action takes place, but surely the same result could have been achieved in another way that would have left the characters with their adulthood intact.Another sign of her immaturity comes when she yells at the police chief, "You lied to me!" simply because he did not share details of the investigation with her. But what self-respecting law enforcement officer would? Her naivety and childish demands are incredible.
Another weakness of the book is that there is really no excitement in it. Even when dangerous situations seem to be developing, such as when it looks like Claire is being chased by a fork lift, or when she falls down a slope in the dark, they quickly fizzle out, and are safely resolved before the reader's adrenalin can get going.
Here's where the SPOILERS are: The biggest disappointment is that the "murders" of the title aren't really murders - they are merely accidents. True, they take place during the commission of other crimes, but they are accidents nonetheless. I like my murder mysteries to be about real murders that are cleverly executed by killers who have motives that are reasonable to them. I find it a real letdown when that turns out not to be the case. It was hinted that one of the deaths might have been a murder, but the author left it dangling there, and missed her chance to develop the theme.
As a murder mystery, this book tastes like soda that's lost its fizz. Nevertheless, the book has enough positive features, as outlined in the first paragraph, to make it a worthwhile read, as long as you're not seeking excitement.
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