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5.0 out of 5 stars
The Dark Divine, December 28, 2009
This review is from: The Dark Divine (Hardcover)
I read The Dark Divine without knowing anything about the story, the characters, or what I was in store for. All I'd read was the description on the inside cover and, just like the first half of the book, it gave nothing away. I was intrigued to say the least.
The first half of the book sets things up nicely, and introduces us to Grace Divine, her overly perfect brother Jude, and the mysterious Daniel Kalbi. I instantly warmed to the Divine family, and loved the way they supported and bounced off one another. Grace is a great female lead, and has a strong sense of loyalty and independence that I find many YA characters lacking. Daniel has to be one of the most frustrating bad boys I've come across -- I just couldn't figure him out. I knew there was something off about him, but could I guess what? No, I couldn't, and I think that more than added to my enjoyment of the book. It was almost like every page had the ability to uncover a new secret, and I couldn't wait to find out what it was.
I'm not going to even mention what the sinister secret is, as it's definitely something you need to discover at the same time as Grace. I'll just say that I think it's brilliant, and the mythology and lore crafted into the legend is fascinating, and different to anything I've read previously. If you let the story unfold as it should, I think you'll be just as surprised as I was when I finally found out what was going on. Stay away from spoilers, you won't regret it.
The Dark Divine is a compelling, addictive debut, and I absolutely loved it. All the time I was reading it, and even when writing this review, I was excited, and I couldn't put it down until I'd finished it. It effortlessly stands out in the sea of supernatural YA fiction, and Bree Despain should be very proud of herself. Now, where can I find me a Daniel...?
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33 of 37 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
The predictable plot is forgivable - but the poor writing is not., July 28, 2010
This review is from: The Dark Divine (Hardcover)
I have a really hard time writing a negative book review. It's kind of like saying someone has an ugly baby. There's so much time and sweat and love that go into a novel (even a bad one) that it just seems impolite to say "it's bad."
So, I'll try to expand on that a bit.
The Dark Divine is a very predictable story about a Very Good Girl and a Very Troubled (Bad?) Boy with a Very Dark Secret. Of course, they have a Very Forbidden Love that brings about Very Big Trouble.
The plot is recycled, unimaginative and transparent. But I can forgive that. There isn't a lot of original thought out there, and a familiar story retold with a spark of magic can be a wonderful thing. Unfortunately, Ms. Despain missed the mark in her effort to breathe new life into her story, built on a classic, universal monster legend. There's nothing new here, and only the youngest and most naive or unread readers will find anything to raise their pulse between the covers of The Dark Divine. The spiciest thing about this book is the cover -- which, incidentally, seems totally random and unrelated to the story. Beautiful art, though.
The real problem with The Dark Divine is the writing. (I say the real problem, because truthfully, the book is chock full of problems. This is the foundation upon which the problem house is built, though.) The book is plodding, the dialogue is abrupt and unnatural and the characters are two-dimensional stereotypes. Not one character has a shred of sparkle, even the laughable bad boy Daniel, whose secret is teased with the subtlety of a sledgehammer. It's just... bad, from start to finish. Even the typeface used was offputting -- it's bold and a little too large, and further creates the feeling that seasoned readers should put this book down and back away slowly.
I don't say this often, but I regret the time I wasted on this novel. I should have given up 100 pages in, but I persevered, sure it was about to get better - until the very end. Don't make the same mistake I did, and spend your hard-earned hardback money on something with a little more substance.
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22 of 25 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Paranormal Romance with Intelligence, December 22, 2009
This review is from: The Dark Divine (Hardcover)
I really enjoyed the characters in this book, especially Grace Divine. As a heroine, she was plucky enough to get herself into trouble and then out of it, but her vulnerable nature, born of doubts and insecurities, made her real and grounded to me. Although Grace was often rescued during pivotal scenes by the love interest, Daniel Kalbi, I didn't find her helpless as much as simply in over her head. Any strong lead, male or female, can do the same, so I never found myself thinking of Grace as an incapable damsel.
The dynamic between the family members, especially in regards to Daniel, felt real to me. The dialog was often delightful and balanced. Grace had just enough sarcastic wit to be snarky when called for, but never so mean as to lose my connection with her. The mystery of the story was paced well without feeling held back artificially, and the descriptive text didn't bog the story down in exposition and distraction. Good, solid concrete details helped me visualize the narrative consistently.
About 4/5ths through the book I felt the story began to drag for me, but I couldn't put my finger on why. I felt I'd need a reread before knowing for sure.
And therein lies the main point of this review for me. Despain has written a paranormal romance not weighted in pretentious dialog or scenes of maudlin angst. It is a tale of paranormal adventure, mystery & romance, filled with secrets engaging enough to propel the reader forward in search of their revelation. I couldn't put it down and look forward to reading it again.
Highly recommended.
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