7 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Just OK for me, October 13, 2010
The title is titilating, the premise ideal for someone like me who loves vatican intrigue stories and science. However, this story left a lot to be desired. The characters were disappointingly one dimensional and the story did not transition well between the timelines. At 50% I wanted to delete the story but I drudged through it to find that it did not improve.
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5 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
The Day Time Was Hacked, January 6, 2010
This review is from: The Day Time Was Hacked (Paperback)
This is not my genre, but I must say the timely mind-expanding confluence of ideas and wide-eyed story/tale of the future had me turning the pages quickly.
I read the acknowledgments section first and was particularly impressed by the depth of research into the organizations represented in the book: The Secret Archives of the Vatican, the United States Naval Observatory, The US Naval Network Naval Command, for example, are some of those on the list. In reading the authors comments of interviews with specialists in these organizations, it felt like we were getting the latest scoop on cutting edge technology and future projects.
The complexity of the subjects: neuroscience research, medical and time travel, think waves; the Catholic Church-Gallieo connection, and science fiction in that the book happens both in the present and the future, is compellingly interesting and tantalizing.
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2.0 out of 5 stars
Brilliant concepts, horribly executed, September 10, 2011
This review is from: The Day Time Was Hacked (Paperback)
I love a good mindboggling time travel story. I also love conspiracies, especially involving religion, and I'm a big fan of Mary Magdelene. So I was all set to love this book. Until I started reading it.
First, it's clear that colloquial US English is not Mr. Mackenbach's native language, as he is from the Netherlands. In many places this shows. Repeatedly he misuses what should be "a couple of XYZ" as "a couple XYZ", even when a highly educated character is speaking. I doubt that the characters would have used the "couple of..." construction at all in these passages, but without the "of" it just screams "Editor!"
Second, the characterizations are horrible. Totally flat. They don't have individual unique voices. A male and female character suddenly kiss because, I don't know why, apparently just because they are a man and woman in the same room.
Third, some details and mysteries are kept secret far too long and far too awkwardly. I spent the first half of the book also yelling "Editor!" because a major character's name kept getting misspelled. Turns out it was for a reason. He never actually explains the reason in the entire book, but half way in finally acknowledges that one particular character pronounces this other character's name in a manner that would be spelled differently. I could go on with other examples of unnecessary late reveals.
Meanwhile the big reveals either never happen, or make absolutely no sense even within the story's own internal logic. Again, I'm a huge time travel story fan and longtime reader of the genre.
Finally, this suffers from the classic First-time-Author syndrome especially bad among new SF writers: One (or more) too many big concepts in this one story. We've got a future totalitarian society. We've got computer hacking. We've got present day Fringe science. We've got post-9/11 Homeland Security paranoia and suppression of civil rights. We've got the Catholic Church in a centuries-old conspiracy. We've got astrology. We've got ancient Hindu Brahmin special abilities. And we've got Mary the Magdalene. At least one of these should go. Poor Mary got short shrift.
I will look for the sequel, because I think Mackenbach has some great ideas in this conceptually-overloaded, characterization-underwhelming first novel. I hope with experience he''ll explore his unique ideas in a more readable manner.
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