65 of 69 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Tony Hillerman fans will love this one!, April 19, 1998
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This review is from: Deadly Sanctuary (Kendall O'Dell Mystery series) (Paperback)
Enjoy Southwest lore? Love a mystery? Recently I read a mystery by a comparatively new and very promising author who resides in the Phoenix area, Sylvia Nobel, which combines both features. Deadly Sanctuary is a fast paced mystery which takes place here in Arizona. The heroine, Kendall O'Dell, takes a new job at a small AZ newspaper and stumbles into an evil conspiracy involving the death of two teen-aged girls. Sylvia Nobel's tale of mystery will hold your attention from beginning to end. Her style is similar to Tony Hillerman. Try it--you'll like it!
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78 of 84 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
You'll never guess the ending of this one!, October 6, 1999
This review is from: Deadly Sanctuary (Kendall O'Dell Mystery series) (Paperback)
I'm not usually a big mystery buff, but I thought I'd give this one a try and I'm glad I did. Now I understand what the phrase "compulsive page turner" means -- I just couldn't stop reading! It's such an imaginative plot, with so many twists and turns I can't imagine many readers figuring it out ahead of time. A definite must read.
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65 of 71 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Ok story althouh a bit cliched, horrible writing, needs editing, December 26, 2010
First of all, not sure how this book was ever tagged "Christian" as a reviewer mentions. Maybe the word "Sanctuary" kicked off some kind of automatic labeling? This is not a Christian book but also doesn't hold itself out to be one.
Story is a typical big city girl goes to tiny town for one reason or another (man trouble, money trouble, or in this case, both) and stirs up the locals. First, with so many references to the heroine (Kendall) having such limited funds and the newspaper she works for being on the brink of financial disaster, where does Kendall get the money to do things like pay several hundred dollars to a source? The book needs a good editor.
Characters: pretty one dimensional - handsome, rich but obviously slimy guy tries to charm Kendall (guess the author was trying to create conflict?), then there's the typical brooding-cowboy-who-clearly-has-a-secret character; small town sherriff as bad guy, etc. All quite predictable and boring.
What killed the book for me: I may have given the book three stars except for one thing. The author has Kendall's coworker, Ginger, speaking the most excrutiating dialect since she's supposed to be from Texas. Almost every sentence out of Ginger's mouth is the author's attempt at a folksy saying and Ginger says "y'all" every other word. A word to aspiring authors who studied dialogue in a writing class and want to be the next William Faulkner: PLEASE, PLEASE, DON'T TRY TO WRITE DIALECT! Sit on your hands, have someone hide your laptop, call your writing sponsor! Written dialect is extremely difficult to get right, and most of the time all it does is make readers cringe in embarrassment for the author.
This book was written in 1998 - I'd be interested to see if the author has improved since then since other reviewers seem to be big fans of her work. This was a cute mystery that needs better writing - not even close to "gripping" or "kept me up all night" but okay for a free book.
Oh yeah - the Kindle version has issues - had a few sections where a prior page or two repeated themselves, but that's not the author's fault.
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