39 of 40 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Nice start to a New Series, August 7, 2008
This review is from: Death By Cashmere: A Seaside Knitters Mystery (Hardcover)
Overall I enjoyed Death by Cashmere. The story centers around Izzy's Aunt Nell, a bit of a disappointment as I like to see the story from the shop owner's perspective. The characters are fun and likable, with a good variety of ages, passions, and backgrounds. The author did an excellent job of fleshing out the characters, not always easy in a first book.
The reason for the 3 stars is the author's writing style, not the story. At least 80% of all conversational sentences were ended with ", first name of person being spoken to". Example blah blah, blah , Nell. There are on average 25 names per page, it really bogs down the story. I for one can follow a conversation without constantly being told who is talking. That is my opinion, but I appreciate when reviews bring up author's writing quirks. This style did detract from the story for me, hopefully the author will be more confident in her readers in the 2nd book.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
20 of 21 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Death by Boredom, September 8, 2008
This review is from: Death By Cashmere: A Seaside Knitters Mystery (Hardcover)
Summary
Izzy Chambers, a former big city attorney, returns to Sea Harbor to open a knitting studio. Izzy rents the apartment above the knitting studio to the flambouyantly sexy Angie Archer. After a date with Pete, a popular local lobsterman, Angie is found dead, drugged and drowned in a lobster trap. Izzy's Thursday night knitting group gathers clues to discover who killed Angie Archer--before Sea Harbor's summer season is through.
Kudos
There's no waiting around for the murder. Angie bursts onto the scene for one chapter and--BAM---she's promptly murdered. The descriptions of the various meals are mouth-watering. The descriptions of the locale make me want to travel to Sea Harbor. Izzy seems as delightful as my own knitting mentor. I'd love to stop by the Seaside Knitting Studio to browse for yarn and to take a knitting class.
Goldenbaum interweaves the primary murder mystery with a secondary mystery--who is looting the local fishermen's lobster traps?
The scarf pattern in the back of the book is easy and fast. And, it's much better than the "garter stitch" scarf pattern most knitting mysteries offer.
Criticisms
In spite of the two mysteries threading through this book, I was completely bored by page 130. Normally, I will devour a cozy mystery in one sitting. I can't sleep until I've read the final page. With "Death by Cashmere," there are too many conversations that don't move the mystery forward. I was tempted to skip to the last few chapters just so I wouldn't have to slog through any more boring conversations between the locals.
There are also too many primary and secondary characters to keep track of. Every time someone walks into a restaurant or passes a store, there's another character to meet who has a huge back story. I almost felt like I needed an outline to follow the story. It's cheap to "hide" a mystery behind meaningless characters.
If you must read this book, buy it used, check it out from a library, or wait till it's out in paperback. It's not worth the $18 I paid for it. This is the only mystery series where I will absolutely NOT read the next book in the series.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
14 of 14 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Good but...., September 8, 2008
This review is from: Death By Cashmere: A Seaside Knitters Mystery (Hardcover)
This is a good start to a series but does leave room for improvement. From the Amazon reviews & the book jacket, I assumed that the book was written from Izzy's viewpoint...not so. Actually Aunt Nell is the main character which was a little disappointing since I hoped it would be the knitting shop owner. Maybe the next in the series will concentrate more on Izzy & her shop. A little slow in parts but I'm still looking forward to the next installment in this series.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No