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Death Sentences: How Cliches, Weasel Words and Management-Speak Are Strangling Public Language [Hardcover]

Don Watson (Author)
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May 9, 2005
A brilliant and scathing polemic about the sorry state of the English Language and what we can—and must—do about it.

When was the last time you heard a politician use words that rang with truth and meaning? Do your eyes glaze over when you read a letter from your bank or insurance company addressing you as a valued customer? Does your mind shut down when your employer starts talking about making a commitment going forward or enhancing your key competencies? Are you enervated by in terms of, irritated by impactful, infuriated by downsizing, rightsizing, decruiting, and dejobbing? Does business process re-engineering and attriting fail to give you ramp-upin terms of your personal lifestyle?

Today’s corporations, news media, education departments—and, perhaps most troubling, politicians—speak to us and to each other in clichéd, impenetrable, lifeless babble. Toni Morrison has called it the “disabled and disabling” language of the powerful, “evacuated language,” and “dead language.” Orwell called it “anesthetic” language. In Death Sentences, Don Watson takes up the fight against it: the pestilence of bullet points, the dearth of verbs, the buzzwords, the weasel words and cant, the Newspeak of a kind Orwell could not have imagined.

Published in Australia in November 2003, Death Sentences gained a massive following among the legions of bright, sensitive people who Could Not Take It Anymore. More than a year later, it remains a national bestseller.

Praise:

“An important read for anyone who holds language dear.”
–Lucy Clark, Daily Telegraph

“The Book of the Year… witty, erudite, and funny. Awfully funny.”
The Australian Financial Review

“Nobody writes more lyrically or cares more about words and those who murder them.”
Sydney Morning Herald

“Witty, excoriating, and horrifying, [DEATH SENTENCE] should be every politician’s, academic’s, businessman’s, journalist’s, and bureaucrat’s choice for book of the year— and, alas, the era.”
–Robert Drewe, “Books of the Year,” The Age

“…should leave us afraid, very afraid… Anyone involved in writing for public consumption should read it—and sooner rather than later.”
–Frances Wilkins, Lawyers Weekly

“…obliterates the vernacular vandals among journalists, academics, politicians, and business people with deadly aim.”
–Murray Waldren, Australian

“Brilliant… tempered by sorrow.”
–Peter Price, Bulletin

“…an amusing and stimulating book. Watson’s writing is the antithesis of all he deplores: it is humane and welcoming.”
–James Ley, Age

“Watson writes well—passionately, fiercely, with generous sprinkles of wit and vitriol… Expect an entertaining ride.”
–Ruth Wajnryb,
Sydney Morning Herald


“…scathingly funny and deadly serious.”
–Jose Borghino, Marie Claire

“A book of unusual significance, a meditation on our times as much as a work on language… [it] will still be read—and enjoyed—in 50 years’ time.”
–Jim Davidson, Eureka Street

“Always lucid and witty… a resource of painful delight.”
–John McLaren, Overla



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The publisher of Lynne Truss' phenomenally successful Eats, Shoots & Leaves [BKL Je 1 & 15 04] now brings out a book on language that has been a best-seller in Australia. It is not, like Truss' book, a treatise on punctuation; however, it does share that book's passionate concern about the erosion of language, especially public discourse as practiced by businesspeople, academics, journalists, and politicians. Watson makes an eloquent, elegant, and sometimes scathing case for taking back the language from those who would strip it of all color and emotion and, therefore, of all meaning. Watson deploys devastating examples of the deadening effect of our current use of language by recasting the Gettysburg Address and Shakespearean dialogue in corporate business-speak. Furthermore, he argues that politicians use obfuscating language to foster a climate of deceit: "Spin abounds. Whatever is most hackneyed triumphs. . . . Language goes out the window, and with [it] many opportunities for humor, spontaneity, originality, and surprise." With admirable clarity and logic, Watson makes the decay of language an issue of prime importance for everyone, not just wordsmiths. Joanne Wilkinson
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…A fine and necessary book. Any citizen who neglects to read it does so at his or her peril. -- Lewis H. Lapham, editor of Harper’s Magazine --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.

Product Details

  • Hardcover: 208 pages
  • Publisher: Gotham (May 9, 2005)
  • Language: English
  • ISBN-10: 1592401406
  • ISBN-13: 978-1592401406
  • Product Dimensions: 8.4 x 5.2 x 0.9 inches
  • Shipping Weight: 12.8 ounces
  • Average Customer Review: 3.3 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (15 customer reviews)
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #731,161 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)

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28 of 30 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars disappointing, May 25, 2005
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en (new york, ny) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Death Sentences: How Cliches, Weasel Words and Management-Speak Are Strangling Public Language (Hardcover)
This book was recommended by a friend in Australia, where it was a best seller. Watson's points--that management and political jargon are the enemies of both clear writing and the more poetic kind, while serving to obscure facts--are well taken. But they could easily have been made in 30 pages, rather than 150. A few examples of how to fix some of the sentences are useful, but the real-life examples of jargon like "Key Performance Indicators" (KPI) quickly grow tedious.

To get the same lessons in one-tenth the time, skip this book and re-read Orwell's essay "Politics and the English language".
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71 of 84 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars Clear writing is not clear thinking., June 28, 2005
This review is from: Death Sentences: How Cliches, Weasel Words and Management-Speak Are Strangling Public Language (Hardcover)
Nothing should be easier than to agree with than a book that takes exactly the same position on a subject dear to my heart--writing clearly and succinctly. Yet "Death Sentences," which does a good job of trotting out a shoebox full of mangled bureaucratese, only shows why clear writing is not the same as clear thinking. Australian writer/intellectual Don Watson's work starts sanguinely enough. He lists scores of examples of the deadening incomprehensible corporate-speak, military-speak and advertising-speak. "Employment outcomes," "quality participation opportunities," and "major change drivers," are just some of the oleaginous verbal slop thickly slathered on as mission statements, empowerment manifestos, or the proclamation of multicultural diversity.

At the beginning of the book I felt myself nodding in agreement with the many examples of the problem, a problem that not only offends sensibilities (of requiring writing to be understood), but which seems almost designed to conceal meaning.

Yet, after 40 pages of examples interspersed with homilies, I began to experience a sense of uneasiness. O.K., professional writing is going down the tubes; now what? By 60 pages I became impatient. Yes, much corporate-speak is abominable; what's next? Why, other than being ugly, is this bad? And is there a cure?

Well, there was nothing next--only another 120 pages of more of the same. No indication of the extent of the problem. No explication of any actual harm. And no cure was mooted. The only change of cadence was a lurch into a series of anti-Bush barbs, as if he were the only American politician who ever mangled the English language. Malapropisms cherry-picked from the presidential campaign were notable only by the complete absence of a single Kerry grammatical flip-flop.

The result is a 167-page listing of linguistic laments, annotated by the author, that could as well have been Xeroxed on a half-dozen pages. What is needed now is a sequel to this book to describe clearly and succinctly, why clear writing would make for good politics or good business. (Maybe it wouldn't.) Unfortunately, Watson's book starts a good argument that he fatally fails to finish.
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22 of 24 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars He commits the sin he condemns., February 19, 2006
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This review is from: Death Sentences: How Cliches, Weasel Words and Management-Speak Are Strangling Public Language (Hardcover)
Let me dissent from the praise this book has received.

I found Watson's style overblown and pompous. He criticises modern discourse for lacking both passion and clarity. Fair enough. But he confuses the two; passion doesn't make for clarity. Often, the opposite.

Some occasions demand a cool head, and the writing which describes them should reflect that.

For example, Watson spends most of page 31 arguing why he prefers the phrase "universities are under siege" to "universities are under pressure". The second phrase smells of "21st century secular Methodists", whereas the first calls to mind the Trojans, who, like their counterparts in academia, live behind walls and who "have something the besiegers want--not a woman in this case, but their submission certainly."

To use an old-fahioned Australian phrase, get your hand off it. "Under pressure" will do just fine, thanks.

Colour and metaphor are great. But too much makes for verbal sludge, just as thick and gooey as the bureaucratic double-speak Watson criticises.

I really don't need to hear that modern official language obscures rather than informs. Orwell and others established that long ago. Where's the new spin? Watson gives none.

On p. 139, he observes that Martin Luther King knew a good speech is like a song. A good book isn't. I personally found Watson's constant chorus of disgust a little hard to listen to, over and over, gilded with obscure references and going nowhere.
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