1.0 out of 5 stars
Disjointed and depressing, June 20, 2010
This review is from: Death Trip (Paperback)
This is the second Lee Weeks book I've read (the first was The Trophy Taker) and to be fair, if I'd remembered the name of the author of the other one before I bought this book, I never would have.
Within the first chapter I realised that this book was by the same person but was determined to give it a go, after all The Trophy Taker was her first book and maybe she'd improved since. No such luck (feel free to skip to the last paragraph for a synopsis of my review if you don't want to read it all - there as some spoilers)!
The actual story line, as with her first book, is very interesting and promising. In this case a group of Dutch students/ volunteers are taken hostage in Thailand. It starts getting convoluted at this point, when a member of the Hong Kong police (Lee's repeat hero, Johnny Mann, half Chinese half English, of which we're reminded often) is brought into the fray after discovering one of the volunteers is his half-brother, from his father's secret long term affair with a Dutch prostitute.
But wait there's more; Johnny finds out his other previously unknown half-brother (older brother of the abductee, also a result of the clandestine affair) died the previous year in a Tsunami, also in Thailand, after escaping once, then returning to save a young girl. Then Johnny's sidekick 'Shrimp' soon finds out that the Thai government (and NAP, the same charity who organised the volunteer workers who were abducted) have stolen all the charity money given by the Dutch and other relief efforts towards rebuilding the coastline after the tsunami. The Dutch fundraising effort was largely organised by the ex-prostitute mother above-mentioned, who by the way is also dying, with only weeks to live. Sounds like too much going on? It is. And I've left out the Dutch prostitute's partner, a cop, who runs around Amsterdam like Magnum PI minus the Ferrari, breaking into homes including that of the crazy drug addicted, sex and hostage selling dominatrix (born in Thailand and adopted out after her village was destroyed) who runs NAP. Then there's the crazy sex hungry group of abductors like 'Handsome' and 'Toad' and the heroic escape efforts of Jake (Johnny's half-brother) who seems to take after his brothers with his manly heroic, leader of the pack ways, and the softer side of the story (or trying to be), Johnny's reminiscing about his dad who was murdered by Triads and his newly found 'family' who he's determined to save as he's never been able to say the word 'brother' before. ARGH!!!
This information is all forced on you at lightning speed within the first 43 chapters of the book in a boring, disjointed and factually written way; with each chapter focussing on a different part of the story. Now, I'll point out this book has 125 chapters and each is no more than 2-3 pages long, so I'm only a third of the way in at this point. This means that every 2-3 pages, you're jumping to a whole different story line, then back, then back again. Confusion and frustration abounds.
The characters in no way engage you - they are flat (despite all the author's efforts at making Johnny come to life with repeated references to his half Chinese half English background his poor murdered girlfriend an dad etc etc.). The only vaguely interesting character is Shrimp, who at times is mildly entertaining, emphasis on mildly.
There are no really happy endings in her books and other than a couple of moments with Shrimp, there are no lighter moments at all; the book seems to start on a low, and spiral even lower in its depressiveness. Suddenly I realise 43 chapters in, I feel like Marvin the Paranoid Android ("I think you ought to know I'm feeling very depressed").
I actually find myself wondering what goes on in this author's mind to create such a mind-numbing piece of violence and oppression as a work of fiction. Even the hero is hardly heroic. I've read other reviews which call this book fast paced and hard to put down. I suspect that in these cases some Speed was smuggled in with the book shipment and that during manufacture, some binding glue was accidentally left on cover, causing stickyness. Fortunately there are no such problems with my copy.
I read on average 2-3 books a fortnight (sometimes less, sometimes a lot more), have done since I was 13 and in those 19 years I have found only 4 books which I've had trouble reaching the end of, and here they are in order of most difficult to force myself to read:
1) Nikolai Tolstoy's The Quest for Merlin
2) Edward Rutherford's Dublin (though I love all his others)
3) Lee Week's Death Trip
4) Lee Week's The Trophy Taker
This is not to say that I enjoy everything I read, simply that I usually don't have a problem finishing a book, even if I don't like it. Take James Patterson's Alex Cross's Trial for example. Hated almost every page, finished it in a day though and didn't come out depressed as Marvin.
I guess what I'm really trying to say is that while the story line is interesting, the author fails to deliver the engaging characters, tension and suspense that makes this sort of book successful. It's too choppy and crowded with information which creates confusion rather than intrigue as is intended. In the hands of another author, the story line would most likely have captured me, but I'm afraid this is the last Lee Week's book I'll be making the effort to read.
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